lynhay Posted July 10, 2006 Report Posted July 10, 2006 This is great - poor Ric! I can't wait to find out what is going on
Drew Posted July 11, 2006 Report Posted July 11, 2006 Aww poor guy Is his Scott somehow related to Kane? lol... Or is it just another Scott?
Penie Posted July 11, 2006 Report Posted July 11, 2006 Aww poor guy Is his Scott somehow related to Kane? lol... Or is it just another Scott? It is just another Scott lol, IMO Scott is a name for someone bad.
Jackieleanne Posted July 11, 2006 Report Posted July 11, 2006 A brilliant story Penie can't wait to see what happens your a brilliant writer.
Jacksthehottest Posted July 12, 2006 Report Posted July 12, 2006 wow Penie i just read all the chapters so far, ur story is great, can't wait to read more, please update soon
Penie Posted July 12, 2006 Report Posted July 12, 2006 Thanks to Jess for the proof reading. This was her last proof reading as she is going on holiday for a month Jess i hope you have a brillient time you deserve it!! My new proof reader will be Jacksthehottest. I wish my new proof reader good luck. Fourth Chapter âWell?â she asked, her voice laced with curiosity. I had to lie. âIâŚI left my books here.â âSo what books were they?â her curiosity, fading. âJust schoolâ âJack, I shall give you this film and we can watch it later. I just need to speak to Granddad and ask him if I can change my shift. So we can be together tonight.â He agreed and said his good byes. I have to do some quick thinking because Cassie and Sally will be asking about school. âEmm⌠Martha, I donât mind walking, it is a nice dayâ. She didnât buy it. âWhat are you hiding, because if you are not hiding anything you can come in the carâ What choice did I have? So I agreed, hoping they are not at home. The car journey was faster then I wanted it to be. We got out, Cassie came out and said the worst possible words âFirst you went past your curfew last night and today you didnât go to schoolâ âRic what?â There was anger in Marthaâs eyes and concern in Cassâs. âRic get inside now, you lied to me!â Great how am I going to cover this up? Whatâs this about a curfew? We were in the house where it looked as though Sal wasnât home. âAnd where were you at school may I add?â I turned round she was home and she did not look happy. âI canât sayâ thinking the truth would be worse. Martha looked even angrier then before and Cass just stared âYou are making people worry who donât need to be.â Martha said but I didnât reply. âWell youâre grounded until you can and as for school I am going to personally walk you there. Now go to your roomâ This is great if I am grounded then I wonât have to see Scott. I went upstairs to my bedroom and shut my bedroom door. I sat and closed my eyes. âHey Ricâ âScott what are you doing here?â âArenât you going to call me âuncle Scottâ? I wanted to see you and also I wanted to know if you want your stuff backâ. It is good you are doing all this work in school you never used toâ. âYeah well it has been along timeâ I tried grabbing my bag off him that he had in his hand but I missed. âPlease can you give it back, I need itâ âIt would be a shame if something stopped you from going wouldnât it and what would your new family think?â He had a grin on his face and it scared me. He was going to blackmail me to do some crime. âJust give me my bag and go!â He pushed me to the wall. âI need help with a jobâ. âNo wayâ He got angry and held my face. âYou will do this one wayâŚor another. Now I am going to go but I shall see you soon. Oh and I will keep this bagâ He let go of my face and climbed out of the window and all I could do is wish he never came back. I lay on my bed and noticed clean bedding. Maybe if I go to the bathroom now I wonât have the same accident. After the bathroom I went into bed and slowly I drifted into the same dream⌠"Come on Scott this way it is easier to get revenge and they would never think of Eric as an accompliceâ âWhat if he mucks it up?â âHe wonât or heâll have me to deal withâŚEric would you hurry upâ âArenât you going to say hello to your favourite uncle Scott⌠You will do this right Eric wonât ya?â âI donât want to...â âWhat did you say?â âI...i âŚdonât waâŚOuchâŚplease...please donât hurt me Scottâ âIf he wonât hit ya I will so you better do thisâŚand no whines otherwise I will hit you harder against that wall, alrightâ âReady Eric, just knock on the door like we had planned, tell him about the ball in the tree and we will be there. You will do it right?â âYesâ âHello, Eric how are you?â âI am good Ella, is your dad in? âYeah, it was my 8th birthday on Sunday the first year with just my dad, we are going to see the graves of Joseph and my mum after we have a special dinner. Do you want me to say hello to your mum for you? âEmm yes. Can you please get your Dad? âSure, Daddy?â âI canât do thisâ âDo what⌠Ella go to bed, Iâm here now to talk to Ericâ âListen donât come out my dad and uncle Scottâs there. They are waiting for you. Donât phone the police, as I will be in trouble.â âEric what did you do, I am going to kill yaâŚâ âHe didnât want to help me, Iâm sorry, Iâm sorry.â âYou little liar, Scott get him while Iâll get the equipment maybe we should do plan B.â âNo please ouch, ahâŚahh, Iâm sorry⌠sorryâŚsorâŚâ âSorry ainât going to do nothing now you idiot, or crying. You baby!â *Crack* âOahh I think my armâs brokenâ âScott you have too much blood on you now, tie Eric up so he doesnât do anything stupid and get changedâ âWhatâs⌠plan B, Dad?â âShut up or you will get worse beatings when we are home. This is your fault!â âIt is my fault, my faultâ. I looked at the time it was 6:00am. Cass knocked on the door and asked if I was all right. I told her it was just a nightmare and to go back to sleep. I looked down and the accident happened again. I did exactly the same thing as yesterday morning but quieter. As we were all about to go to school, Sally asked me again where I was and I didnât say anything. There was a knock on the door and Sal went to answer it. To my horror it was Scott. âHi, Sally is it.â âOh hi youâre caravan no. 6?â âYes, I found this outside and I thought it belonged to this house.â It was my bag, I couldnât believe it he is getting Sal on his side. Sal went over and took the bag and gave me a look. âI might be leaving in a few days. Need to do a job for a friend I was wondering if any of you could help me move my stuff out of the van and help me get equipmentâ âWell Cass will be out, so ahh Ric as you are grounded you can do it.â âBut Sal I canâtâŚdonât wantâŚâ âDonât be rude⌠of course he can MrâŚâ I saw Sal eyes nothing could change her mind. ââŚMr Onewayâ I looked at him and he did a conniving smile.â Preview: Belle-âI thought our relationship meant somethingâŚobviously not. Scott-âI told you one wayâ Ric-âMy life was fine until you cameâŚnow it is in piecesâ
Jacksthehottest Posted July 12, 2006 Report Posted July 12, 2006 wow that was a really good chapter, it just keeps getting better and better,aww can't wait for the next
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