Red Ranger 1 Posted February 2, 2017 Report Posted February 2, 2017 I was wondering if you were going to pull a twist and have Kwon turn out to be a liar but it's looking pretty definite.And Kyle slowly going crazy is not a good thing. 1 Quote
Ludub Posted February 2, 2017 Report Posted February 2, 2017 (edited) 21 hours ago, Kristen said: Poor Kyle I feel for him. 15 hours ago, christine king said: So sad that Aaron is really dead but at least Kyle got to say goodbye to him in his dreams. 20 hours ago, pembie said: Well it was sweet that Kyle got to say a final goodbye to Aaron 19 hours ago, ~JarlieFanEver~ said: Loved how Kyle got to say goodbye to his lover I'm glad you all liked that bit. Thought it was kinda needed. Finding out that Aaron was dead through a third party was probably a bit unsatisfying, so I wanted to show it through Kyle's eyes as well. 14 hours ago, Red Ranger 1 said: I was wondering if you were going to pull a twist and have Kwon turn out to be a liar but it's looking pretty definite. I did think people might think that, but no, poor Aaron did die. I think it would have been a bit unrealistic to have him survive a stab wound with no medical attention for hours and hours... Very sad 20 hours ago, pembie said: I would say Kyle needs some alone time to come to terms with what has happened but he may just go abit bonkers down in that hole 14 hours ago, Red Ranger 1 said: Kyle slowly going crazy is not a good thing. Well, he's certainly getting alone time! More than anyone would ever want! you'll have to wait and see how he copes when they let him out! Thanks again for reading everyone! x Edited February 2, 2017 by Ludub Quote
Suzza101 Posted February 3, 2017 Author Report Posted February 3, 2017 Poor Kyle, that's so sad being locked up in there. As hard as it would of been I'm glad he got to say goodbye to Aaron. I have no idea how he's going to handle it outside the hole with everyone knowing that he his gay and that his boyfriend died, I hope Josh will help him as much as he can but I feel like he will have to tell his brothers so that they can help him as well, I can't wait to read more please update soon 1 Quote
Ludub Posted February 4, 2017 Report Posted February 4, 2017 On 03/02/2017 at 6:14 AM, Suzza101 said: Poor Kyle, that's so sad being locked up in there. As hard as it would of been I'm glad he got to say goodbye to Aaron. I have no idea how he's going to handle it outside the hole with everyone knowing that he his gay and that his boyfriend died, I hope Josh will help him as much as he can but I feel like he will have to tell his brothers so that they can help him as well, I can't wait to read more please update soon Thanks Suzza, I'm so glad you're enjoying it It was particularly cruel of the guards to lock him up like this, but I reckon in the aftermath of a riot (where one if them got killed) they'd be less inclined to be sympathetic in any way, and if he hit a guard they'd think he needed put in his place. Horrible though. I think he'll really struggle when be gets out. Hope to have a new chapter sometime over the weekend. We'll see. x Quote
pembie Posted February 7, 2017 Report Posted February 7, 2017 (edited) I don't blame Kyle for rippling up a photo of Brax sumg silly grinning face I would too.. He might hate Phoebe too but it could be wrose she could be in there singing him one of her songs which sound all the same. But having said all that I don't think Kyle should trust this very spooky phantom Aaron. I think he will turn out to be quite dangerous for Kyle's heatlh Even though Edited February 7, 2017 by pembie 1 Quote
Guest Posted February 7, 2017 Report Posted February 7, 2017 (edited) Great chapter Don't blame Kyle for ripping up all those photos. Aaron's like a sweet ghost not creepy at all. Update again soon Edited February 7, 2017 by Kristen Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted February 7, 2017 Report Posted February 7, 2017 Josh's interrogator seemed rather naïve, Kyle's guard seemed to be genuinely trying to help him but he'd rather hang out with a ghost...Not looking good for either of them! 1 Quote
christine king Posted February 7, 2017 Report Posted February 7, 2017 Sucks that Josh is in trouble but really keeping quiet is the best thing for him. Kyle hate anyone, hes just devastated by losing Aaron. at him dreaming of Aaron again, if hes regularly seeing ghosts and not listening to words the guards say their must be something seriously wrong. 1 Quote
Ludub Posted February 7, 2017 Report Posted February 7, 2017 10 hours ago, pembie said: I don't blame Kyle for rippling up a photo of Brax sumg silly grinning face I would too. Haha! Yeah, I think a lot of people might feel that way! 11 hours ago, pembie said: He might hate Phoebe too but it could be wrose she could be in there singing him one of her songs which sound all the same. Oh god! Hadn't thought of that! Now that really would drive someone crazy! Phoebe's nasal throaty singing and only her to keep you company?! She'd spend the whole time complaining that you weren't focused enough on her and her needs. 10 hours ago, Kristen said: Aaron's like a sweet ghost not creepy at all This is true. At least he hasn't manifested as anything bad. He's using him as a coping mechanism, as he says himself. 5 hours ago, christine king said: at him dreaming of Aaron again, if hes regularly seeing ghosts and not listening to words the guards say their must be something seriously wrong. I think it's fair to say that this isn't normal behavior, and even he knows that, despite his obvious mental distress. 7 hours ago, Red Ranger 1 said: Josh's interrogator seemed rather naïve, There might be something in that... you'll have to wait and see Thanks again everyone, hope to have a new chapter up soon (hopefully before the weekend) Quote
Inactive User Posted February 7, 2017 Report Posted February 7, 2017 Great chapter Sounds like Aaron is a sweet ghost, not a creepy ghost Lookimg forwards to the next chapter Xx 1 Quote
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