christine king Posted October 28, 2016 Author Report Posted October 28, 2016 Chapter 11: Caravan Park VJ is worried and starts looking around.......................................................................Zac and Leah are still walkingZac: are we even going the right way?Leah: I don't knowZac: I'm so worriedLeah: me tooZac: you hope the others are ok?Leah: I'm sure they are...........................................................................Alf is still walking............................................................................VJ is still looking around when he hears a scream..............................................................................Olivia is trying to wake Hunter up................................................................................Alf is yelling out.................................................................................VJ is now running toward where he thins the voice came from and he is yelling out ...................................................................................Olivia: help VJ arrives and asks what happened? Olivia: Hunter feel down VJ: is he awake? is he breathing? Olivia: I don't know, I can't wake him up, I think hes passed out VJ: how hard did he hit his head? Olivia: pretty hard, it looks bad VJ: we have to call for help VJ calls Alf, Leah and Zac and tells them where they are
christine king Posted December 1, 2016 Author Report Posted December 1, 2016 Chapter 12: Hospital Olivia, Zac, VJ, Billie, Leah, Alf are all in the waiting room. Olivia: Hunter has to be ok Zac: he will be, he's tough he can take this VJ: yeah he'll be fine Salt Evelyn and Brody are chatting Brody: how do you know when you should tell someone you like them? Evelyn: when it feels right Brody: what if I'm not sure if they feel the same Evelyn: she would be crazy not too Brody: I don't know if.. Evelyn: if she rejects you? Brody: yeah Evelyn: she might but I guess you have to put yourself on the line to find out Brody: I'm worried about getting hurt Evelyn: aren't we all! Brody: its just I haven't dated in a while Evelyn: so? Brody: so, I'm out of practice Evelyn: you will figure it out Brody: you think Evelyn: I know Brody: thanks for the chat Evelyn: anytime and don't think for one second I don't know who you like... Evelyn starts to leave but Brody stops her Brody: oi where are you going! now its your turn to talk Evelyn: who agreed to that Brody: you did agree Evelyn: I guess I did Brody: so you and Matt? Evelyn: me and Matt? Brody: yeah you obviously like him Evelyn: your point is? Brody: why don't you go their? Evelyn: I can't.. Brody: why not? Evelyn: because I'm not ready to let go of Josh Brody: fair enough Evelyn: what? no advice Brody: I gave you advice Evelyn: yeah you did Brody: so? Evelyn: thank you, I'll see you later
christine king Posted December 2, 2016 Author Report Posted December 2, 2016 Chapter 13: The Morgan's House Justin and Tori are chatting Justin: you have a date with Duncan? Tori: yes Justin: why? Tori: I like him Justin: but I thought you liked Nate? Tori: I do Justin: so why did you chose Duncan? Tori: Nate has a pretty interesting past Justin: what? Tori: he has cheated on a few of his partners Justin: maybe hes learnt from that? Tori: maybe Justin: its not like Duncan's past is all that good either, he does have a wife and kid Tori: yeah but that's all sorted now Justin: yeah but what if he chooses to go back to his family Tori: you know that just because you have a kid with someone doesn't mean you end up with them Justin: I know, its just a possibility Tori: yeah and we have discussed that Justin: ok, fine I'll stop Tori: good, that would be nice Justin: just one last thing Tori: yeah Justin: you chose the wrong guy The Hospital Nate comes into the waiting room Zac: is Hunter ok? Nate: Hunter will be ok, we managed to stop the bleeding and he is on the mend but we do have to kep him here for 2 days just for observation though Olivia: oh thank god Zac: can we see him? Nate: oh course go on though Hunter's Hospital Room Zac, Olivia, Leah, VJ, Billie and Alf all enter Olivia gives Hunter a hug Olivia: OMG, I was so worried Hunter: I'm ok Zac: I'm so glad your ok Hunter: dad calm down, Nate said I was fine Zac: I know, you sacred me Olivia: me too Alf: we were all worried Hunter: I'm just glad you guys found us in time Zac: how did you get lost? Hunter: I dont know, we were walking and we lost track of the track VJ: its so good we found you Alf: we looked all through the park Billie: we split up Leah: and looked all over Olivia: thanks so much for finding us, I don't what I would of done if you didn't Hunter: see I told you we would get saved Olivia: yeah you did Hunter: I'm ok, were both ok Olivia: don't ever scare me like that again, I can't lose you Hunter: I won't, I promise
christine king Posted December 3, 2016 Author Report Posted December 3, 2016 Chapter 14: Summer Bay High School Raffy and Ellie are holding hands and chatting in the corridor Ellie: I wish we had more classes together Raffy: yeah me too Ellie: you doing anything after school? Raffy: no, why? Ellie: I've got a surprise Raffy: a surprise? what is it Ellie: can't tell you let Raffy: are sure I can't persuaded you to tell me? Ellie: I don't think so Raffy: maybe if I did this Raffy kisses Ellie Ellie: maybe I could be persuaded Raffy: oh could you? Ellie: hmm, if your lucky Raffy: I think I'm pretty lucky Ellie: well you are dating the coolest girl at school Raffy: well of course Ellie: we make the cutest couple Raffy: yeah we do The Morgan's House Justin is playing video games in the dining room when Hope arrives Hope: hey Justin: hi Hope: your not working today? Justin: does it look like I am? Hope: not at this moment Justin: good observation Hope: are you any good at that game? Justin: I'm pretty good at it, why? Hope: mind if we verse each other Justin: your bored too? Hope: well yeah Justin: you could go out and explore the town? Hope: I have been to do that Justin: you been up to the lighthouse? Hope: yeah its nice up their Justin: you walked up the top? Hope: no I fly up their, what do you think? Justin: chill, I was just asking Hope: yeah sorry, I'm not used to people joking around with me Justin: maybe you have been spending time with the wrong people Hope: maybe Justin: why? not the first time you have heard that Hope: nope Justin: not surprising Hope: I guess I deserve that Justin: you think? Hope: funny Justin: come play and I'll beat you Hope: oh will you? you care to bet on that Justin: you care to shut up Hope: I get it, no more betting Justin: good, now lets play
christine king Posted December 3, 2016 Author Report Posted December 3, 2016 Chapter 15: The Farm House Phoebe and Kat are making breakfast Kat: you have work today? Phoebe: no I don't, why? Kat: just thought you might do Phoebe: hmm, now I'm suspicious, you trying to get me out of the house or something? Kat: of course not Phoebe: not buying it, who are you expecting to come over? Kat: no-one Phoebe: you have a new guy on the scene? Kat: no Phoebe: yeah, I think you answered that to quickly, you must be lying Kat: I'm a cop its my job to know when people are lying Phoebe: well as your friend, you need a better poker face Kat: I have a good poker face Phoebe: then how did I know you have a new guy then? Kat: lucky guess Phoebe: you just admitted I was right Kat: yeah so.. Phoebe: you never do that Kat: first time for everything Phoebe: no, no that doesn't just happen no matter how good you think I am Kat: well it did today, I'm leaving now Phoebe: wait.. you just said I was right about your new guy? Kat: did I.. hmm I don't remember admitting that Phoebe: yes you did too admit it and now your distracting me by trying to make me think I imaged it Kat: you may be on to something Phoebe: see I am right Kat: doesn't mean I'm going to tell you who it is Phoebe: you will tell me, maybe not today, maybe not tomorrow but sometime Kat: yeah probably Phoebe: I'm betting on it Kat: bet away Kat leaves just as Evelyn comes into the room Evelyn: what was that about? Phoebe: Kat has a new guy Evelyn: is she going to meet him now? Phoebe: yep Evelyn: well who is he? Phoebe: don't know Evelyn: how do you not know Phoebe: she wouldn't tell me Evelyn: since when does Kat have a secret boyfriend? Phoebe: since now Evelyn: but why? Phoebe: I got it, because hes a criminal? Evelyn: you think? Phoebe: possibly Evelyn: she is still on probation Phoebe: yeah for another 2 weeks Evelyn: makes sense than Phoebe: it does Evelyn: so are we going to discover who this mystery guy is? Phoebe: do we need help? Evelyn: possibly Phoebe: what about Matt? Evelyn: why him? Phoebe: why not him? Evelyn: well why not Justin than? Phoebe: no not him Evelyn: I thought you liked him? Phoebe: I do, that's why not him Evelyn: ok we will think of someone....
christine king Posted December 3, 2016 Author Report Posted December 3, 2016 Chapter 16: Caravan Park Ellie and Raffy are walking together Raffy: so what are we doing here? Ellie: meeting some people Raffy: from school? Ellie: yeah Raffy: why? Ellie: because they invited us to hang out with them Raffy: doing what? Ellie: I don't know Raffy: then why did you agree? Ellie: I thought it would be good to make new friends Raffy: yeah that does sound good Ellie: chill, every-hing will be fine Raffy: where about's are we going? Ellie: its just a bit further Raffy: ok Another part of the Caravan Park Evelyn: are you sure Kat came this way? Phoebe: I think so Evelyn: who does she know who's staying at the caravan park? Phoebe: Ash Evelyn: yeah but we would know if they were back on Phoebe: true, why didn't you want Matt to help us? Evelyn: same reason you didn't want Justin to help us Phoebe: wait, you like Matt? Evelyn: yeah Phoebe: and? Evelyn: and, nothing Phoebe: why don't you go their? Evelyn: why don't you go their with Justin? Phoebe: its complicated Evelyn: join the club Phoebe: Matt and you? can't be as bad as me and Justin Evelyn: well I can't disagree if I don't know all the facts Phoebe: he has family issues Evelyn: I wish my family was still here Phoebe: Zac is Evelyn: true Phoebe: I think were lost Evelyn: what? Roo, Matt and Ellie's Apartment Matt is asleep and doesn't hear his ringing phone... The Morgan's Hope goes to her and Raffy's room but she isn't their..... Caravan Park Alf answers the phone... A Hotel Room Ash: so Phoebe is suspicious? Kat: yeah but she doesn't know we are back on, she assumes its a new guy Ash: that's good isn't it? Kat: yes, definatley better than her knowing the truth Ash: you weren't followed here? Kat: no, I was super careful, you? Ash: nope I wasn't either Kat: that's good, were so close now? Ash: 2 weeks and than we can tell everyone Another Hotel Room Tori and Duncan are together Tori: is good to have some time to ourselves Duncan: yeah, free of judgement Tori: why who's been giving you a hard time? Duncan: Dad and Roo Tori: I'm sorry Duncan: don't be, its my life, I can spend it with who I like Tori: true Duncan: hows your family? Tori: well Justin had a go at me too, so not great Duncan: I thought he was cool with us Tori: so did I Duncan: what he say Tori: he doesn't think your right for me Duncan: why not? Tori: he just doesn't Duncan: no other reason? Tori: nope Duncan: ok then Roo, Matt and Ellie's apartment Roo arrives home Roo: anyone here? Roo heads to Matt and Ellie's room and opens the door but she finds no-one their and starts to call Matt's phone but no-one picks up...
christine king Posted December 3, 2016 Author Report Posted December 3, 2016 Chapter 17: The Morgan's Hope is trying to call Raffy but she's still getting no answer Justin arrives Hope: have you heard from Raffy? Justin: no, why? Hope: she's not here Justin: did you try calling her? Hope: of course I have but no answer Justin: shes probably with Ellie somewhere Hope: but she usually comes back before dinner Justin: they probably just lost track of time Caravan Park Raffy and Ellie are at the meeting spot Raffy: where are they? Ellie: right in front of us Dylan: hey Cody: whats up? Rebecca: hi guys Sam: didn't think you'd show Dylan: but I'm glad you did Ellie: so what are we doing? Dylan: come check it out Ellie and Raffy move towards where he is pointing and they look down and find a whole heap of alcohol Ellie: where did you get that from? Dylan: stole it from my brother Raffy: won't you get in trouble? Sam: not if he doesn't get caught Dylan: true that, bro Raffy: wait hes your brother? Dylan: no Sam is my best friend, I just call him that, I call all my friends that, right Cody? Cody: yeah bro Rebecca: don't worry I didn't get it either, its a guy thing Raffy: oh cool Ellie: yeah Sam: you guys drinking? Ellie: um.. Dylan: oh come on, don't be a wuss Rebecca: yeah where is your sense of adventure Sam: we invited you here because we thought you were cool Raffy: we are, give me one Ellie: are you sure? Raffy: yeah why not? Ellie: yeah ok, pass me one than Dylan hands them both one Sam: drink up guys, tonight's just getting started Another part of the caravan park Evelyn is yelling out for Phoebe Evelyn: Phoebe... Phoebe.. where are you? Evelyn hears a noise and she starts to look around Someone comes up behind her and taps her on the shoulder Phoebe; got you Evelyn turns around Evelyn: oh don't do that, you scared me Phoebe: I thought it would be funny Evelyn: how? Phoebe: didn't you used to play murder in the dark Evelyn: yeah Phoebe: just having some fun Evelyn: maybe I should have some fun back Evelyn starts running off Phoebe: oi, where did you go? Phoebe is looking in the dark for Evelyn Phoebe: hey this isn't fun anymore.. Evelyn Evelyn sneaks up on Phoebe and scares her Evelyn: oh not so fun on the other foot hey? Phoebe: ok, I surrender Evelyn: good, I win then Phoebe: yeah, yeah you win Evelyn: you know we totally forget the reason why we came here today Phoebe: yeah it was to find Kat Evelyn: and we didn't find her Phoebe: nope Evelyn: try again tomorrow? Phoebe: I have work Evelyn: yeah and I have uni as well Phoebe: another time Evelyn: another time Phoebe: lets go home The Morgan's House Hope is pacing the house stressed out Hope: where is she? Justin: I'm sure Raffy is fine Tori arrives Tori: whats going on? Hope: Raffy's missing Tori: what? Justin: just because no one has seen her for hours doesn't mean shes missing Tori: are you hearing yourselve right now? Hope: we need to find her Mason arrives back Mason: whats up? Hope: Raffy's missing, lets all split up and find her Tori's phone rings Tori: hello Roo: is Ellie their? Tori: no, why? Roo: because I thought she might be with Raffy Tori: I'm guessing where ever they are, they are together Roo: I'm going to search for them and Matt too Tori: Matt's missing? Roo: he is not answering his phone either Tori: that is weird, you think they are all together? Roo: I don't believe Matt is with them Tori: fair enough, we are all going to go out and look as well Roo: call if you find them Tori: you too, bye
christine king Posted December 4, 2016 Author Report Posted December 4, 2016 Chapter 18: The Morgan's Hope, Justin, Tori and Mason arrive back having not found Raffy but are surprised to find Raffy in the house Raffy: hey, whats up? Hope: we just spend the last hour looking for you, where were you? Raffy: with Ellie and some new friends from school Hope: where though? Raffy: the caravan park Hope: we looked their, we couldn't find you Raffy: must of been in a different spot to the one where you looked, I guessed. why were you so worried? Justin: anything could of happened to you Raffy: um, like what? Tori: like the fact that your a teenager roaming the streets at night Mason: you could of been kidnapped? Justin: or anything Hope: I'm just glad your safe Raffy: am I grounded? Hope: no, why would you be? Raffy: no reason, just thought because you were all so worried Hope: well your not Raffy: ok good Tori: has Ellie heard from Matt today? Raffy: no why? Tori: we were looking for him too, apparently hes disappeared Raffy: I hope its nothing serious, Ellie would be so devastated Tori: I'm sure he s fine, he is an adult, he can take care of himself Raffy: I'm going to ring Ellie, see if Matt is back yet Flashback to earlier that day Roo, Matt, Ellie's apartment Matt wakes up from sleeping and shes he has a missed call, he rings the person back and they pick-up Matt: whoa, calm down! no stay at your house, I'll come to you, yes don't do anything stupid before I get their, I'm on my way. Back in present time Jude's House Jude: I'm surprised you care Matt: yeah well, I couldn't leave you by yourself, not after that phone call could I? Jude: figured you would of thought I was being too dramatic and you would of just ignored my cries for help Matt: I thought about it Jude: would not of blamed you if you never wanted to see me again after everything that went down Matt: yeah well, their was a lot of water under that bridge Jude: I hear you've got your sister back, if she saw me now she would punch me in the face! Matt: yeah I know she totally would, she hates you for what you put me though Jude: I hate me too! I hate everything about me! I'm no good for anyone! I'm useless as a human being! Matt: hey, you were going though a hell of a lot, you had a lot to deal with you, it wasn't all your fault! Jude: I cheated on you! you remember that? Matt: yeah I do, you broke my heart Jude: I loved you! I loved you so much! But I was messed up and I pushed you away, the most out of everyone but you never loved me back! So don't go pretending I broke your heart when it was you who broke mine Matt: fine, I didn't love you but I cared about you a lot and I was their for you though everything and then you pushed me away, I copped most of it! Jude: You were the closest person to me, I couldn't handle my feelings for you and everything else! you know how tough everything was, I had to push you away, for my own sake. Matt: you did more than push me away, what about the drugs? the alcohol? the partying? the hooking up with other guys, more than once! Jude: I never said I was prefect and I was far from it! Matt: you were a mess Jude: 100% Matt: but I get why Jude: try living with a abusive mum who abused the **** out of me any chance she got! or a absent father who bailed before I was born! or my mum's boyfriends who either abused me or raped me! Matt's phone rings at that moment and he picks it up Roo: hey where are you? Matt: at a friends place, I'm staying their tonight, I'll see you tomorrow Roo: ok see you tomorrow Jude: who was that? Matt: Roo Jude: oh your foster mom? or was that Leah? Matt: both I guess Jude: you didn't tell her or your sister you were coming to see me Matt: what do you think? Jude: not surprising, probably a good call on your part Matt: yeah well Roo doesn't even know you exist Jude: why would she? its not like I ever met her or Leah Matt: how did you even know about them? you been stalking me? Jude: of course, I have always been keeping up to date with you Matt: why am I not surprised? Jude: because you know me, probably better than anyone Matt: still? after all this time? Jude: yeah, there has been no-one else since you, I don't trust anyone! I never really have! Matt: you trusted me
christine king Posted December 5, 2016 Author Report Posted December 5, 2016 Chapter 19: Summer Bay House Alf: About time you got back, where were you anyway? Duncan: on a date with Tori, why? whats happened? Alf: Caroline called me Duncan: and? Alf: shes broken her leg, your going to have to go over their and look after Bryce Duncan: how soon does she need me? Alf: tomorrow Duncan: I guess I'll have to book a flight for tomorrow morning than Alf: that would be advisable Duncan: I have to go tell Tori I'm leaving The Morgan's Tori is surprised to see Duncan at her door and she goes outside to talk with him Tori: hey, whats up? Duncan: I'm leaving the bay Tori: what? why? Duncan: Caroline has broken her leg Tori: oh that sucks, when will you be back? Duncan: I'm not coming back, I'm really sorry, I wanted to us to stay together but I need to be their for my family Tori: of course, I understand Duncan: I'm really sorry Tori: when are you leaving? Duncan: tomorrow morning Tori: I guess this is goodbye then Duncan: yeah it is, that why I came now Tori: well goodbye and good luck Duncan: goodbye Duncan and Tori kiss and Duncan leaves The Next Day Summer Bay House Alf and Roo are saving their goodbye to Duncan outside Alf: stay safe Roo: and look after that boy of yours Alf: If you ever want to come back? after all Summer bay is your home Duncan: I definatley will return. I cant just leave you two alone all the time Roo: yeah that would be a bad idea Alf: I may just kill the both of you Duncan: ha-ha, you love us dad Alf: yeah but you drive me insane sometimes Duncan: have to keep you on your toes somehow Roo: I'll come visit you soon Duncan: you better, I'm going to miss you guys Roo: were going to miss you too Alf: good luck Alf and Duncan hug/ Roo and Duncan hug and Duncan drives off in his car and waves goodbye Roo, Matt and Ellie's apartment Matt arrives back Roo: you finally return Matt: good morning to you too Roo: you know I was worried about you and Ellie last night, you both disappeared Matt: wait, is Ellie ok? Roo: she was with Raffy, it was fine Matt: you scared me Roo: yeah well its not like you were here Matt: I was busy Roo: yeah with a friend? Matt: yeah a friend from before I came to the bay Roo: so Ellie knows her? Matt: yeah Roo: ok than Matt: you not going to annoy me about it? Roo: no, why should I? Matt: no Roo: your acting weird Matt: no I'm not Roo: yeah you are Matt: just drop it
christine king Posted December 5, 2016 Author Report Posted December 5, 2016 Chapter 20: Summer Bay High Ellie and Raffy are chatting with Sam, Cody, Dylan and Rebecca in the corridor Dylan: last night was so good Sam: hell yeah man Cody: when's our next get together? Rebecca: how about tonight? my place is free Cody: ok cool Sam: sounds good Dylan: your parents won't be their? Rebecca: nah, they are going to some concert in the city Dylan: what about your older brother or your sister? Rebecca: no, my sister attends uni in the city now and my brother is always at his girlfriend's Dylan: awesome, you guys in? Ellie: totally Raffy: what time? Dylan: after school like 4.00? Rebecca: yep all good Sam: cool The school bell rings and they all head off to class Caravan Park Hunter's caravan Hunter and Olivia are studying Hunter: you know I figured dad would go easy on me since I got hurt Olivia: hey just because hes the principal doesn't mean you get special treatment Hunter: well it should Olivia: why because your his only son who stayed in school? Hunter: well yeah, VJ bailed Olivia: actually, now all the pressure is on you to pass Hunter: yeah and that's not fair Olivia: you ever heard the saying life ain't fair, get over it Hunter: you wound me Olive: sure, now your just being pathetic Hunter: ouch, have a heart Olivia: I do Hunter; I know, I'm just kidding Olivia: I know that too Hunter: I'm just worried about these exams Olivia: you will do fine Hunter: you think? Olivia: yes, I have faith Summer Bay High Raffy is walking along the corridor when she see's Dylan by himself, she is just about to call out to him when she see's some other guy approach him Dylan: hey Brain: hey Dylan: so are we still on for tonight? Brian: of course Dylan: you ever wonder what would happen if everyone knew about us? Brian: everyone would say I'm too old for you Dylan: well aren't you, 3 years? Brian: age is just a number Dylan: but at our age, it matters Brian: and you wonder why we are a secret Dylan: it just sucks, I can't even kiss you right now Brian: I know but we can later Dylan: you promise? Brian: if your lucky Dylan: ok, I got to go back to class, I've been gone long enough Brian: don't worry you'll be fine Dylan: love you Brian: love you too Brian leaves and Dylan is just about too as well but then he see's Raffy... Rebecca's House Rebecca, Dylan, Sam and Cody are chatting inside Outside Raffy and Ellie are just about to enter the house when Raffy tells Ellie she needs to tell her something first Ellie: What's up? Raffy: I saw Dylan when I was out of the classroom at school before Ellie: and? Raffy: he was with some guy Ellie: so? Raffy: it looked pretty intense Ellie: did you ask him about it? Raffy: yeah he said it was his boyfriend Ellie: hes gay? Raffy: apparently Ellie: so who is the guy? Raffy: no idea, hes 3 years older Ellie: oh older guy, interesting Raffy: you think we should be concerned? Ellie: why? whats wrong with him dating someone older? Raffy: nothing, its just a bit wired Ellie: well what else did he say? Raffy: that its suppose to be a secret Ellie: were you suppose to tell me? Raffy: no but I had to tell you Ellie: I'm glad you told me, no secrets okay Raffy: yeah no secrets Ellie and Raffy hug Ellie and Raffy head into the house...
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