Angel90 Posted August 23, 2011 Report Posted August 23, 2011 Last two chapters were amazing... Awwww feel so sorry for Bee... and Charlie.... Must be awful remembering what happened... I hope Charlie can convince Bee to keep the baby... Awwww Brax and Charlie were so cute... Brax is one loving man... can i plz clone him... Update soon plz..
JosieTash Posted August 23, 2011 Report Posted August 23, 2011 GREAT update !!!!!!!, especially …… Charlie blushed and giggled like a little schoolgirl facing her crush. Meanwhile Charlie had woken up to Ruby bombarding her with toast and orange juice in a bid to wake her up. Bianca sat still looking out of the window like she was starring in some chick flick Bianca looked at Charlie who turned crimson and bowed her head. "So it wasn’t all a dream. I really am pregnant” she cried as Charlie consoled her.. Bianca walked ahead to the car anyway. She opened the door and sat in, sulking like Ruby did whenever she didn’t get her own way.
soph1303 Posted August 23, 2011 Report Posted August 23, 2011 Great update, Glad that Charlie went with Bianca to her ultrasound. I felt so sorry for Bianca in that chapter. Oh no Heath got stabbed - I don't actually think he did it, but we'll have to wait and see. More soon please
elikell Posted August 24, 2011 Report Posted August 24, 2011 Another wonderful update. I'm very glad that Charlie is there for Bianca. I just hope that Charlie can convince her to keep the baby. Felt a little sorry for Casey, not knowing what was going on with Heath. Can't wait to see where you take this. Update soon please
Chickiboomxx Posted August 24, 2011 Report Posted August 24, 2011 Terribly sorry for missing the last few updates. They are really amazing and I can't wait for more Please update soon xx
Lucii Posted August 24, 2011 Report Posted August 24, 2011 Thanks for the comments guys loveee reading them xx The drive home was awkward and silent as Charlie kept glancing at her phone expecting a call from Ruby, Brax or even her inspector calling her into work. But she got nothing. Bianca kept her hand on her stomach patting it every now and then to make sure it was okay. It was only a light push but Bianca felt protective over the baby inside of her. When the time was right she’d look into the adoption papers and make sure she found a really nice home for the kid. But for now what lay ahead was telling April and the rest of Summer Bay. Bianca was extremely thankful she had Charlie, she wasn’t sure she could have done it without her help. If Charlie could have Ruby at 14 and raise her then Bianca knew she could get through the nine months to make a couple really happy. Charlie sighed obviously fuming she had heard from no one about Heath. Bianca looked up. ”Charlie?” ”Yeah hunnie?” ”Will Heath be okay?” ”I thought you didn’t care” ”I don’t” Bianca began. ”But like you said he could be the sperm donor of my child even if he wasn’t the guy who attacked me” ”I’m going to drop you off and come round later and I’ll go to the hospital yeah?” Bianca nodded. ”The scan was surreal” Bianca smiled. ”It’s weird to think there’s someone growing inside of me right now” ”Wait til the kicking starts you’ll know all about it!” Charlie laughed, pleased that Bianca was coming to terms with things. Bianca smiled. ”Does labour hurt?” Charlie thought back to her own labour at 15 years of age. The crying, screaming, pushing, sweat, tears, blood, contractions, painkillers before after an agonizing 24 hour finally being took for a c-section. At the time Charlie thought that nothing was worth that kind of pain. But now every time she looked at Ruby, Charlie smiled and thought she’d do it all again if she had to. ”I’m not going to lie” Charlie admitted. ”But yeah it hurts but it is so worth it” ”It’ll be worth it to think I’ve made someone’s dreams come true” Charlie bit her lip. It was no secret that she wanted Bianca to keep the baby and become a mum. But it wasn’t Charlie’s baby and Charlie couldn’t force her. She nodded as she dropped Bianca off outside her home promising to be there later to tell April and Irene about the baby. As Charlie drove off Bianca turned to face the empty house. She shuddered a little hating the thought of being alone in the house. But patting her stomach made her realise she wasn’t on her own. Bianca sighed knowing she couldn’t win. She could keep the baby and never have to be alone again but she didn’t know whether she could bond with the child or she could give it up and still have to face a few days a week completely on her own just remembering the night at the B&S ball. Bianca was bored with having time off work. Charlie, Irene, April and Leah were out all day leaving Bianca with only her thoughts, the beach and the bar. After the recent stint she pulled she found Brax wouldn’t serve her more than two drinks. And the beach well Bianca found that instead of helping her think it only made her miss Liam even more. The times they shared on the beach together when they were happy. She couldn’t think about him too much otherwise it would kill her inside. She loved him and she always would but for their relationship she knew that she had to respect his wishes. Bianca exhaled wanting to do something but didn’t know what. She picked up her keys and headed for the school determined to work until she had the baby. Bianca Scott knew what she wanted and she wouldn’t stop to get it. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ”I’m sorry Bianca I just don’t think you’re ready to come back to work” Gina began as Bianca frowned. ”A few more weeks just to make sure you’re ready” she smiled sympathetically at Bianca who tried smiling back but failed. ”Gina please I’m ready. And it’s driving me insane just being on my own the entire day” ”I’m sorry Bianca. I just need my staff to be focused” ”I am focused Gina you know my personal life doesn’t interfere with work and...” Bianca bit her lip as she continued her sentence. ”Please tell me you won’t tell John or Xavier” ”You can trust me” Gina replied warmly and Bianca knew her secret was safe. ”Or April” ”Bianca what’s up?” ”I...I’m pregnant” Bianca sighed relieved as Gina’s face dropped. ”And I really really need the money” ”I’m so sorry Bianca” Gina began. Is it because of the attack” Bianca shifted uncomfortably and Gina decided not to question the girl any more. She saw the sorrow in Bianca’s eyes. Bianca nodded as Gina smiled sympathetically. ”If you’re completely ready and you can show me that then you can have your job until you erm go for maternity leave. Are you...are you keeping the baby?” ”I’m looking into adoption” Bianca spoke softly. ”But I need money for maternity clothes, hospital bills etcetera” ”I understand” Gina spoke as some of the students including Ruby came into the classroom. ”I’ll see you tomorrow Miss Scott” Bianca nodded as she walked out of the classroom swearing she could see a grin appearing across Ruby’s face as Gina said that she would return tomorrow. Bianca never thought she could miss her job so much and lived for the days she had off but now she’d do anything to go back. She smiled happily as she passed her co-workers and headed out of the school. For Bianca this was the first step to getting her life back on track. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Meanwhile as soon as Charlie dropped Bianca off she received a call from her boss informing her on pretty much everything Casey had blurted out in the hospital. She drove quickly and got changed for work as she paced to the hospital. Heath lay motionless on the hospital bed with only Casey by his side. ”Mrs Braxton is on her way and we can’t get hold of Darryl Braxton” Charlie’s inspector informed her as Charlie glanced over Heath’s hospital file. ”When he wakes we’re going to need to hear his story” Charlie gulped already knowing a fair deal about why he was stabbed. ”Do we know who did it Sir?” The inspector shook his head grimly. ”That’s the thing about the river boys, they’ll never sell one another out” Charlie nodded as she knocked on the door to find Casey holding onto his brothers hands. Every now and then he wiped a few tears away from his eyes. Charlie smiled sympathetically as she entered the room. Casey wiped away his tears til his eyes were red – raw. ”Help him Charlie” he gazed at Charlie in the eye. ”Please” Charlie nodded as she took Casey’s arm to try console him. ”Where’s Brax?” Casey asked. ”He should be here” ”We can’t get hold of him Case. Could you try his mobile?” Charlie asked. Casey nodded and took his phone out of his pocket, his fingers shaking as he tried to dial the number. Charlie could hear the phone ringing and ringing. ”Case I don’t think he’s gonna answer” ”Hello Case is that you?” Casey smiled weakly with relief as he heard his older brother’s voice. ”Brax you need to come to the hospital” Casey began weeping again as he struggled to finish the sentence. He handed the phone to Charlie. ”Brax. It’s Sergeant Buckton. Your brother Heath has been involved in a vicious attack and is unconscious” Charlie swore she could hear Brax sigh against the phone. On the other end Brax held his head in his hands knowing Heath was hospitalised because of him. ”Alright Charlie I’m setting off now. What’s happened” ”He’s been stabbed in the stomach. He’s losing a lot of blood.” ”I’ll be right there” Charlie could hear the car engine in the background and hung up. She handed the phone back to Casey as she leant in the far corner of the room. Casey sat down on the chair next to the bed praying and holding heath’s hand’s and crying. Charlie bit her lip as she struggled to fight the tears herself. The seconds ticked by, no hospital staff came, nor Cheryl nor Brax. All they could do...was wait.
HighwayUnicorn Posted August 24, 2011 Report Posted August 24, 2011 Missed a few chapters there ... all of them were so brilliantly written though. Bianca and Charlie's relationship is just so lovely to read. Really amazingly written as always, well done. Love Carina xxx
Angel90 Posted August 24, 2011 Report Posted August 24, 2011 This was an amazing chapter... So gripping I hope Bee keeps her baby... She would make a great mum... Awww i felt so sorry for Casey... Poor kid... Wonder if it was Brax who turned the boys on him... Looking forward tot he next chapter... I hope Heath makes it Update soon plz
Inactive User Posted August 24, 2011 Report Posted August 24, 2011 Great chapter. Liked it Hope Bianca keeps her baby. She will be a great mum with her family and friends' support Update soon xx And pssttt...I had posted Chapter 40 of my fanfiction moments ago
elikell Posted August 25, 2011 Report Posted August 25, 2011 Another wonderful update. Love Charlie and Bianca's friendship. I hope Bianca keeps her baby. Glad that she's trying to get back to normal by going to work. Poor Heath and Casey. I just hope that Heath survives. Interested to see what happens on that front... Can't wait to see where you take this. Update soon please
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