Chickiboomxx Posted September 5, 2011 Report Posted September 5, 2011 Another great update!!! Looking forward to finding out what Roman's up to. Whatever it is, it can't be good. I'm really looking forward to more! Please update soon xx
katieabandon Posted September 5, 2011 Report Posted September 5, 2011 Omg! I've just read this whole fic from the start and loving it!! I can't believe how many twists and turns are in this story. Please don't stop writing! Update soon!
JosieTash Posted September 5, 2011 Report Posted September 5, 2011 INTRIGUING & FUNNY update, especially ….. ”Caffeine isn’t good for the baby” April protested. ”But it is good for the hundreds of pupils who want to pass Italian. One cup of coffee won’t hurt” ”How can you be this....awake?” Charlie asked as Ruby practically bounced up and down the bed. ”Like my mum has a hot date tonight” Ruby giggled before attempting to wink and failing. ”You and Roman eh? This time I promise I won’t wait up to catch you sneaking through the door with a ruffled dress and smudged lipstick” ”Trust me you were supposed to” He thought back to a few years ago back in Mangrove River and shuddered. Darryl Braxton was too proud to ever say he was scared of someone. But his eyes suggested he was terrified as he turned to walk away to his car.
Lucii Posted September 8, 2011 Report Posted September 8, 2011 thanks for the comments guys...got most of the next chapter written and it should be posted tomorrow. I'm literally just to exhausted atm! Have a good friday everybody
HighwayUnicorn Posted September 10, 2011 Report Posted September 10, 2011 Another great update! Brilliantly written! Absolutely amazing. Really well done. I look forward to more and seeing where this goes next. Carina xxx
Angel90 Posted September 13, 2011 Report Posted September 13, 2011 Sorry havent commented been away so couldnt... Great chapters... Cant wait to see what happens when Brax sees Charlie and Roman together... Oh i wounder what happened between them... Wow Brax scared of Roman.. Take it you dont like Roman..? Nice twist making him Tegans brother...
Lucii Posted September 16, 2011 Report Posted September 16, 2011 Thanks soo much for the comments! Finaly after a long long week I've finally had the will power to update Hope you enjoy guys xxx Brax paced around the hospital trying to get his head around what he’d just seen. Heath was hitting on a nurse who came to check up on him and did his best to ignore the presence of his elder brother. Once the nurse left he glared across at Brax. Brax shifted about uncomfortably, having just chosen that moment to sit down. ”Heath I’m sorry man” ”Save it” He muttered as Brax dared not look him in the eye. ”I’m not interested in your apologies” Brax sighed, wishing he could undo the mess he made. Sensing his discomfort Heath fought the urge to smirk before failing considerably. The corners of his lips twitched and he let out a small laugh before wincing in pain. ”You okay?” ”My own boys stabbed me...what do you think?” Brax nodded, leaning forward to hold his head in his hands. ”What are you doing here anyway?” Heath growled. ”To say I’m sorry I know I haven’t been the best brother” ”I only have one brother” ”Heath?” ”You heard me right Brax. I’d do anything for you and not even my own brother believes that I didn’t rape Bianca. I wouldn’t do that to the girl I...” ”The girl you?” ”The girl I love Brax” Brax laughed a little sarcastically which made Heath pout a little. ”You love her?” he giggled as if he was thirteen, teasing a friend who had a crush on a girl. Heath turned scarlet which only made Brax want to laugh even more but after catching a glimpse of his serious face, his face also turned serious. ”Oh god you’re serious” Heath shrugged trying to make it seem like it wasn’t such a big deal. One thing that Brax knew was that neither of the three brothers had been in love before. Casey loved Ruby – Brax was sure of that and Brax loved Charlie. Infact he couldn’t see his life without her anymore. But for Heath to be in love, well Brax never thought he’d see the day. ”I’m sorry” ”You said” Heath sighed returning to his magazine. ”I still can’t believe my own brother and boys would sell me out. There isn’t even any proof” ”It was all a misunderstanding” ”Yeah because the deep stab wound was just a misunderstanding. I grew up with them boys and they still betrayed me like that” ”Heath...” ”Just go” Heath used his hands to shift the rest of his body weight so he turned against Brax. Brax rose from the chair, ready to walk out the room. ”I’ll be back tomorrow” he called out to Heath, whose back was turned to him. ”Don’t bother” came the reply. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ”Charlie pssst” Watson whispered to Charlie who was buried in her paperwork. She invited herself in and sat down much to Charlie’s surprise. ”We’ve just had an update on Bianca Scott’s case” ”Yeah?” Charlie dropped the pen and diverted her attention to Georgina Watson. ”What’s new?” ”Don’t let slip to the inspector that I told you...” ”I won’t I promise” Charlie smiled as a look of uncertainty overcame Watson’s face. ”Can I tell Bianca?” ”It might be better coming from you actually. I mean you’re her friend and it’d be easier for you to comfort her” ”So what’s the update” ”Heath Braxton’s DNA results came back. He didn’t rape her” Charlie breathed a huge sigh of relief as a small smile came across her face. ”It means your back to square one though?” her smile faded as they realised they were pushed even further back to finding Bianca’s rapist. Watson nodded grimly. ”I know but you can tell Miss Scott from us that we will not rest until we find her” Watson rose from the chair and made her way out of the office. ”Thanks Georgina” ”No problem Charlie” ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ”Okay guys and that wraps things up for today’s class. Now for homework” Bianca smiled as the class let out groans and yells of disgust. ”Take the sheet of words and translate into Italian before next lesson” the students nodded as the sheets were passed around the class. Bianca looked at the clock, due to expect April’s class in any second. She dismissed the pupils and invited the others in. One by one the teenage residents of Summer Bay followed – April, Dex, Xavier, Ruby who was chatting to a girl Bianca didn’t recognise. Ruby grinned when she saw Bianca, alongside April who went to her seat. Ruby led the new girl over to the front were Bianca stood welcoming her class. ”Bee...Miss Scott” Ruby begin, the smile not disappearing of her face. ”This is Robin. She’s new” ”Hello” the girl spoke politely in a British accent. Her brown hair fell to her stomach and set in a bunch of loose natural waves. She had big green eyes, and wore lashings of mascara to compliment them. ”G’day Robin welcome to Summer Bay High and Italian class. There’s a seat over there by Ruby and you’re going to need one of these” she handed a spare Italian grammar book to the girl who thanked her politely again. She turned around chattering meekly to Ruby as she showed her the seat she was to sit in. ”Okay guys...page 64 in our Italian grammar books please” she was interrupted by the ringing of her phone in the drawer. ”I’m sorry guys” Bianca’s face reddened as she flipped open her phone and guiltily rejected the phone call of Charlie. ”Now where were we page 84?” ”Page 64” April corrected her. The phone rang again this time achieving a few giggles from some immature members of the class. Bianca looked at the screen once more. Charlie. Again. ”Guys read over the exercise on page 64 and i’ll be back in a minute. Sorry about this” she escaped the classroom swiftly answering the phone on her way out. ”Charlie what’s up?” ”I’m sorry for ringing you at work but I need to see you. It’s kind of important” ”I’m not free til lunchtime Charles” Bianca began. ”Me too...meet me in the diner?” ”Fine okay I gotta go see you later yeah?” Bianca said her goodbyes before hanging up more confused than ever. She walked back into the classroom her head in a daze. She looked a bit lost. ”Miss Scott?” April spoke noticing her elder sister’s change in attitude. Bianca snapped back to reality. ”Sorry guys page 74 is it?” Bianca spoke only to be met with even more groans. ”SIXTY FOUR!” the class shouted in unison as Bianca giggled. She never thought she’d say it....but boy was she glad to be back.
HighwayUnicorn Posted September 17, 2011 Report Posted September 17, 2011 Oh such a brilliant chapter. Glad Bianca seemed happy, especially by the ending of that chapter. Amazingly written, well done. Carina xxx
JosieTash Posted September 17, 2011 Report Posted September 17, 2011 COOOOOL update, especially ..... ”You love her?” he giggled as if he was thirteen, teasing a friend who had a crush on a girl. Heath turned scarlet which only made Brax want to laugh even more but after catching a glimpse of his serious face, his face also turned serious. ”Oh god you’re serious” ”Sorry guys page 74 is it?” Bianca spoke only to be met with even more groans. ”SIXTY FOUR!” the class shouted in unison as Bianca giggled …….. AND …… It’s GREAT that Heath didn’t do THAT to Bianca, as I LOVE the way they interact in real H&A !!!!!
lozlovesh&a Posted September 17, 2011 Report Posted September 17, 2011 I loved that Bianca got confused by the page numbers.... lol. Please continue.
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