ldscott Posted September 2, 2011 Report Posted September 2, 2011 Great chapter.. and interesting twist! Can't wait for more. Lisa x
HighwayUnicorn Posted September 2, 2011 Report Posted September 2, 2011 An interesting twist there. I am really enjoying this fic. I look forward to more. Carina xxx
JosieTash Posted September 2, 2011 Report Posted September 2, 2011 VERY intriguing, especially …… ”So erm are you seeing anyone at the moment?” Roman asked. Charlie was thankful it was dark as she found herself blushing at any mention of her dating life. Or whenever she saw Brax for that matter. ”You two are such great sisters” Roman grinned trying to compliment Charlie. Charlie bit her lip and laughed awkwardly not wanting to spill all about what he’d missed. She turned to walk away as Roman called behind her. ”That’s because your my little half sis Teegz and no-one deserves to be flung around like you and Darce have” Roman sighed and paused for a deep breath
soph1303 Posted September 3, 2011 Report Posted September 3, 2011 Interesting update, Lots of surprises in that update, More soon please
Inactive User Posted September 4, 2011 Report Posted September 4, 2011 Great chapter Wow! Interesting idea about Roman and Tegan Can't wait to read more of this fanfiction Update soon xx
Lucii Posted September 4, 2011 Report Posted September 4, 2011 Thanks for the comments! They're lovely This may well be the last regular (kind of ) update as I'll be studying a lot more. I'll try to update when I can but I hope you enjoy this part for now. I'm sorry not much happens in this part it was quickly written before Corrie The next day Bianca woke in time to see the sun rise much to her disgust. Something she forgot about the job description was definitely the early mornings. She sat up suddenly and stretched just as April walked through the door. ”I was just about to wake you” she whispered not wanting to wake Irene. She smiled warmly as Bianca invited her to sit on the end of the bed. ”I have not missed these early mornings! But I gotta get used to them baby bills and maternity clothes all cost money” ”Bianca..” ”I’m sorry April I’ve made up my mind” Bianca spoke as she lay one hand on her stomach. ”But it’s your baby” ”And it could also be a Braxton” Bianca bit her lip feeling guilty for not remembering Heath sooner. ”Did you know Heath was in hospital?” April questioned as Bianca kept her head low. ”Ruby texted me last night. Apparently...” ”Look I know all the gory details. Charlie and I were at the hospital and Casey told Charlie everything” ”Oh okay. Listen I’m gonna make breakfast you want some?” Bianca shook her head, wrinkling her nose at the thought of eating so soon in the day. ”Just a coffee. Black, one sugar” ”Caffeine isn’t good for the baby” April protested. ”But it is good for the hundreds of pupils who want to pass Italian. One cup of coffee won’t hurt” Bianca smiled as April left the room. She peeled back the covers revealing her stomach. There was no sign of anything changing yet to Bianca’s relief. She needed to get her own head around things first before anyone else tried. Bianca walked in the kitchen 20 minutes later adjusting a black pencil skirt as she did so. She ran her fingers through her hair as the blonde curls cascaded down her back. She saw April in the kitchen making toast as the burning smell overcame her body. Hurriedly she rushed into the nearest bathroom as April followed her and held her hair back from her face. Morning sickness had just begun. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ”Muum” Ruby Buckton shook her mum gently in a bid to wake her. ”MUM!” The second time Charlie woke, looked at her alarm clock and groaned. ”Go away I’m not getting up” She moaned ready to turn over and go back to sleep. Ruby took her arms and pulled her up much to Charlie’s disgust. ”No you have work and I have school. Let’s get up let’s go!” ”Shhhhhhh” Charlie protested her eyes now awake and glaring at the over-excited Ruby. ”How can you be this....awake?” Charlie asked as Ruby practically bounced up and down the bed. ”Well I’m excited” ”About what? Did Case give you any news on Heath” ”He came out of the operation and now he’s resting he’s gonna be okay” Charlie breathed a huge sigh of relief, praying that Ruby didn’t notice. ”But that’s not what I’m excited about!” ”Why gosh what else is there that could possibly surprise you?” Charlie grinned now fully awake. ”Like my mum has a hot date tonight” Ruby giggled before attempting to wink and failing. ”You and Roman eh? This time I promise I won’t wait up to catch you sneaking through the door with a ruffled dress and smudged lipstick” Charlie punched her daughter playfully as she stepped off the bed. ”It’s just a catch-up Rubes nothing’s gonna happen with us again. And I told you I made out with Ryan. No biggie” Charlie grinned remembering that night with Brax. ”Fine whatever” Ruby shrugged as she walked out the door. ”I’ll make breakfast considering you can’t cook!” ”Hey I heard that!” ”Trust me you were supposed to” ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ”So” April began as she placed Bianca’s coffee in front of her. ”That’s the morning sickness starting I guess” ”I guess so...look can we not talk about it. I feel like i’ll throw up again” ”Yeah whatever” April shrugged as she bit on the piece of toast she held in her hand. Bianca winced at the sight of food as she focused on her coffee. ”I’ll be ready in about ten minutes and maybe we could walk together?” April said as she finished the last of the toast and adjusted her hair in the nearby mirror. ”Yeah sounds good I’ll just clear the dishes and we’ll be ready to go” Bianca smiled at April, gulped the last of the coffee and stepped into the kitchen. 10 minutes later The two girls were walking along the beach as the sun beat down on their faces. Along the beach April could see Dex, Xavier and Ruby joking as they walked to school together. ”You can go join them if you want. I’m a big girl I can walk on my own” Bianca spoke noticing April’s friends in the distance. ”Nah I’ll see them at school. Besides we’ve not really, I dunno spoken for a bit” ”It’s not really the thing I wanted to talk to you about April” ”I know just so long as you know I’m here for you. And Irene too” ”I know that. I always knew. Go join your friends and I promise we’ll go out for dinner tonight and we’ll talk just me and you” ”You promise?” ”Absolutely” April grinned, kissed her elder sister on the cheek before running off at high speed desperate to catch up to her friends. Bianca watched her go before settling into Dex’s arms as he cradled her waist and kissed her neck. Bianca’s heart plummeted as she remembered the way Liam held her and the way he kissed her neck now. She hadn’t thought about him for a while, she knew the pain would be too much but seeing her younger sister on the beach just then made Bianca realise she needed him more than ever. And he wasn’t around. Bianca walked on , lost in her thoughts of Liam as April and Dex disappeared when she went straight into the arms of a tall muscular guy. ”Oh gosh I’m sorry” Bianca mumbled feeling her face flush in the process. The guy grinned and apologized too as he steadied her on the ground. ”Nah it was silly me. Too lost in thought I guess” ”I know the feeling” Bianca grinned. ”Hold up a second. You’re Bianca right?” ”A hot muscular guy knows my name. Should I be flattered or scared?” Bianca laughed. ”I’m Roman. Am I right in thinking you know Charlie Buckton?” ”That would be correct. Best friends to be exact” ”Well it was nice to meet you Bianca and I hope to see you around” ”Well it’s a small place so I’m sure there will be plenty of sightings of myself” Bianca grinned before walking away. Turning around she called out to Roman again. ”I’m sorry but how do you know Charlie?” ”We knew each other when she first moved here. Ex-girlfriend...to be exact” he winked cheekily at Bianca as she laughed and walked away. Looking down onto the beach Darryl Braxton witnessed the scene between Roman and Bianca as he made his way to the hospital. His body froze as he tried to hide from Roman seeing his face. He thought back to a few years ago back in Mangrove River and shuddered. Darryl Braxton was too proud to ever say he was scared of someone. But his eyes suggested he was terrified as he turned to walk away to his car.
cablove Posted September 4, 2011 Report Posted September 4, 2011 ooh im excited now dont be scared of roman ha ha the date i cant wait
lozlovesh&a Posted September 5, 2011 Report Posted September 5, 2011 oh brax scared of Roman.... well yeah I can see why one would be scared of Roman.... but he's also hot so... lol. continue please.
soph1303 Posted September 5, 2011 Report Posted September 5, 2011 Great update, Ohoh Bianca had better get used to the morning sickness, lol at Ruby trying to wake Charlie up and Charlie refusing to listen . I'm glad Heath's ok though. Ooh that last bit has got me intrigued. What has Roman been upto?? More soon please
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