Arielxo Posted August 30, 2011 Report Posted August 30, 2011 Amazing chapter. Love the idea of Roman coming back. Looking forward to seeing where you take this. Update soon
soph1303 Posted August 30, 2011 Report Posted August 30, 2011 Great update, Glad that Irene was supportive. I can understand where April was coming from, but at the end of the day it's Bianca's desicion. at Irene and Charlie's talk. Irene's so nice!! :0 Roman's back in town!! But no, Charlie is with Brax!! Wondering why he's back and why its not an innocent reason!! More soon please
Angel90 Posted August 30, 2011 Report Posted August 30, 2011 Oopz missed commenting on the last chapter... Both were brilliant... well written.. Loved the emotion Awww Irene and April's reactions were really good am glad she has finally told more people.... I really hope Bee ends up keeping the baby.. she would make a great mum... Oh no Roman... Now here comes trouble... Cant wait for the next chapter
HighwayUnicorn Posted August 30, 2011 Report Posted August 30, 2011 I can understand if she wants to get rid of it (adoption, etc) ... but maternal instint kicking in ... hmm ... Another great chapter and brilliant character interacion as always. I look forward to more. Carina xxx
Samantha28 Posted August 30, 2011 Report Posted August 30, 2011 This is a really good story! It's lovely how supportive Charlie is being. Can't wait for more!
Inactive User Posted August 31, 2011 Report Posted August 31, 2011 Such a great chapter to read! Update soon xx
Lucii Posted September 1, 2011 Report Posted September 1, 2011 Thanks for the comments! Last week before college so I’m afraid I won’t be updating any fics as much as I’d like to. I start next Wednesday so I’ll probably get a few updates in before that. Thankyou for reading Kinda short update but I promise that I'll update by Saturday x Charlie stood on the spot, her mouth wide open as Roman smiled at her. Sensing it was the right thing to do, Charlie began to pace up and down the room as her feelings for Roman came flooding back. Ruby glanced into the living room from the kitchen and grinned. She knew how much Charlie loved Roman. Charlie spun around quick to see her daughter grinning and glanced back at Roman. ”Can we erm go for a walk?” she suggested. ”The beach?” Roman nodded as he rose from the couch and walked ahead of Charlie. Ruby said a polite goodbye as he nodded at her before making his way to the door. Charlie kissed Ruby on the cheek as she noticed the massive grin on Ruby’s face. Trying not to blush Charlie kept her face hidden as Roman opened the door and followed her out. ”Look Charlie I know things never worked out between us...” Roman began. ”Yeah that’s a bit of an understatement” Charlie bit her lip. Sensing Roman was hiding something she continued. ”So what’s the real reason your back...Nicole moved to the city” ”Yeah I heard...with Angelo right? Never would have pictured them together” he admitted. ”He always seemed so madly in love with you when I was around” ”Yeah well things change people move on get with other people. Surely you know that?” Roman nodded as the silence became unbearable between the pair. They walked together in the dark not knowing what to say next. ”I just wanted to say I’m sorry Charlie” he glanced at her but she refused to look in his eyes. ”I was a jerk to you back then” ”Yeah you were” Charlie giggled slightly as she brushed a strand of hair out of her eyes. ”So erm are you seeing anyone at the moment?” Roman asked. Charlie was thankful it was dark as she found herself blushing at any mention of her dating life. Or whenever she saw Brax for that matter. ”Erm no...not at the moment you?” Charlie lied, relieved at the breeze that was stopping her entire body from melting. Roman laughed awkwardly breaking off eye contact for a second. His face crumpled slightly although he tried not to let it show. ”I was living in the city with my fiancé Lynsey” he began. ”Until the day of our wedding she ran back to her ex-husband” ”Roman I’m so sorry” ”Don’t be. It’s not your fault she wasn’t the one” Charlie smiled as they reached the end of the walk. She turned to face Roman. ”I should go. I promised Rubes we’d watch a movie. It was nice to see you” ”You two are such great sisters” Roman grinned trying to compliment Charlie. Charlie bit her lip and laughed awkwardly not wanting to spill all about what he’d missed. She turned to walk away as Roman called behind her. ”See you soon. How about dinner at the restaurant?” ”Angelo’s?” Charlie sighed knowing she couldn’t think of a good enough excuse to avoid the dinner. ”Yeah sounds good” ”Tomorrow? I’ll pick you up at eight” Charlie gritted her teeth and nodded. She knew Ruby would be overjoyed but she couldn’t lie much longer. What she had with Brax was everything she wished for with Roman. ”It’s a date” he grinned as he began to walk off into the darkness. Charlie cursed a little and stamped her foot before turning around and walking off home. Roman took out his mobile as soon as he was out of earshot. Dialling the number he spun round to check that no one was around to hear him. ”Nah she denied it to my face. And she’s going out with me to dinner tomorrow. Guess she isn’t a one-man woman after all” he sniggered as he rummaged around in his pocket. ”I’ve got the disk you gave me. Darryl Braxton isn’t going to know what hit him” he laughed before hanging up the phone. He glanced at the disk marked CCTV spun it in the air and put it in his pocket. He walked a little faster until he saw a slim figure sitting on the beach alone. Grinning he walked up and sat beside Tegan as she wiped a few tears away from her eyes. ”And here was me thinking you’d have Darcy all tucked up in bed by now” he grinned. ”She is...mum’s got her for the night” ”Ah right okay. What’s with the long face?” he tried to wipe away her tears. ”Heath” she began. ”He’s in hospital because he was stabbed by some of the boys” ”So?” Roman didn’t like Tegan’s involvement with the river boys especially with Darcy. But he couldn’t control her life. ”What do you mean so? He’s Darcy’s dad and he doesn’t even know it because I’ve spent years trying to kid myself that she was Brax’s” Roman sighed remembering the disk in his pocket. Grinning at Tegan he took the tape out of his pocket and flung it towards her. ”What’s this?” ”Brax’s sleeping with a cop. My ex girl-friend to be more exact” Tegan’s eyes widened. The tears stopped and she grinned. Roman’s smile widened as he looked at Tegan. ”Well my night just got a little bit better” she laughed. ”I had a feeling you might say that. I say we have a little fun with Braxton and this tape. I mean me and Darryl we weren’t always the best of friends” ”Well you never did approve of any of my boyfriends” ”That’s because your my little half sis Teegz and no-one deserves to be flung around like you and Darce have” Roman sighed and paused for a deep breath. ”When I went visiting Nic, Angelo heard the news that I was returning to the bay and gave me a copy of this. He says there’s one in the apartment that he used to live in...” ”That’s where the Braxton’s are living now. All three of em Brax, Heath and Case” Tegan smiled at her elder brother who placed his arm around the younger shivering girl who began to close her eyes slightly. ”Come on Teegz, Darcy needs you” Roman rose taking Tegan’s hand and lifting her up. Together they walked back to where they were staying for the night. Tomorrow would be an interesting day for everyone...and Darryl Braxton? Well he wasn’t going to know what hit him.
lozlovesh&a Posted September 2, 2011 Report Posted September 2, 2011 Interesting twist that Roman & Tegan are related.... Contiue please.
Samantha28 Posted September 2, 2011 Report Posted September 2, 2011 Hope Roman doesn't destroy Chax. Looking forward to more!
Chickiboomxx Posted September 2, 2011 Report Posted September 2, 2011 Sorry I missed the last chapter. They were both brilliant updates as always. Very interesting idea with Roman and Tegan. I hope Charlie and Brax's relationship will survive. Looking forward to more! Please update soon xx
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