biancaliamca Posted December 14, 2010 Report Posted December 14, 2010 ooohh, i wonder what it is great chapter xxx
HighwayUnicorn Posted December 14, 2010 Report Posted December 14, 2010 :) Another awesome chapter. Well done. Great work. I look forward to more. Update soon. Love Carina xxx
lozlovesh&a Posted December 15, 2010 Report Posted December 15, 2010 I'm feeling generous today. Please leave comments and thanks for reading. “Of course I want to be with you baby. It’s. Well I wrote a song, and its about you and this record company might want to buy it” he said. “Really? You wrote a song about me?” I asked. “Yeah I did. Because I wanted to tell the world that I love you” he said. To my surprise I started to cry. “Bianca, what’s wrong? Is it too much? I can still stop it” he said. “No” I sniffled. “It’s, you’re” I couldn’t speak. He smiled. “I finally made you speechless” he said. I laughed even though there were tears pouring down my face. “So can I hear this song? Or are you going to make me wait till its on the radio?” I asked. He grinned. “You can hear it. I’ll play it to you tonight. Come to my house for dinner ok?” “Ok” I agreed. He wiped away my tears and kissed me. “So it means that I have to go to the city, maybe for a few days” he said. “When?” I asked. “In the morning. I’ve already spoken to Gina about it and she said I could have tomorrow off. But the good news is you can come on the weekend” He said. “What about your brother & sister” I asked. “There coming down with me, since they live in the city I’m going to stay with them tomorrow night. I don’t think they can come back though because they have work” he said. “What about April?” I asked. “I’m sure she will be alright with Irene for the weekend” he said. “Because you’ve already spoken to her?” I asked knowingly. “Yeah” he admitted. “Okay” I said. “Great. I can’t wait to show you off baby” “Let’s go have lunch. I’m starving” I said. “Okay but first I just want to do this” he said kissing me passionately. “Lets go before we get in trouble again” I suggested. “Alright. We can do more of this tonight anyway without interruptions” he said. “I’m looking forward to it” I said.
Zetti Posted December 15, 2010 Report Posted December 15, 2010 Aww cute chapters esp the one in Angelo's! Update soon x
HighwayUnicorn Posted December 15, 2010 Report Posted December 15, 2010 Well, seeing as you're generous enough to give an update, I am generous enough to give a review. The emotions were written beautifully. Another great chapter. Well done. Love Carina xxx
lozlovesh&a Posted December 18, 2010 Report Posted December 18, 2010 Here's another chapter. Thanks for reading. Please leave comments. We walked into the diner holding hands. “So did you tell her yet?” Luke asked Liam. “Yes I did” he said. “Have you guys heard the song?” I asked. “Liam played it to us last night. He wanted to make sure it was right” Lucy said. “Right” I said. “Ill go order us some food” Liam said. “We’ve already ordered” Luke said. “Okay” he said. He kissed me on my cheek. “What will it be love” I heard Irene ask him. “One chicken burger for Bianca and one beef burger for me and two cokes” he replied. “Sure coming right up” Irene said. “So I hear you wrote a song about Bianca?” “Yes thats correct. How did you hear that?” Liam asked. “Just overheard your brother & sister talking” she said. “Well hopefully the whole world or at least Australia anyway will know how I feel, how I’ll always feel” he said. “I think thats fantastic” Irene said. “Thanks Irene. See you later” Liam said. “See you” Liam came and sat down next to me and put his hand on my knee so I squeezed it. “Hey guys” April said. “Hey April here lunch on me” Liam offered her money. “Thankyou” she said gratefully. She turned to order her food. “You didn’t have to do that” I said. “I know, just wanted to. I’m going to look after both of you. You’ll see” he said. I gave him a kiss. “So I’m assuming she’s your sister?” Luke asked. “Oh yes” I replied. “Well technically my half sister. We have different fathers” “Right” Luke replied. “Hey I’m April by the way” she said returning to the table. “I’m Luke, Liam’s older brother” Luke said. “I’m Lucy, his older sister” Lucy said. “Nice to meet you” April said. “Find a chair and sit down” I said. She sat down next to me. “Did you come here in your free?” she asked me. “Yeah but then I saw Charlie and we went for a walk on the beach then Nic joined us” “Yum I’m starved” April said as Irene put the food in front of us. “Thanks Irene” I said. “No problem. I better go. Customers are waiting. See you girlies later” “Oh I won’t be home tonight” I replied. She winked. “Okay darl then I’ll see you tomorrow” “Bye” I replied. I looked at April who was smiling widely. “What?” I asked. “Nothing. Just that you won’t be home” she teased. “April” I exclaimed. “Oh my god you are 16” She laughed. “Thats the age that I started” Lucy said. “Okay, I did not need to know that” Liam said. “So have you two.....?” Luke said. “Not that its any of your business bro but yes” Liam said. “Oh okay, I really didn’t need to know that” April laughed. “Sorry I should have told you to block your ears” Liam smiled. “Okay so this isn’t embarrassing or anything” I said. “You know what, there’s Ruby, I’m going to go sit with her. Thanks for lunch Liam” she said. “No problem” Liam replied. “Oh dear” I laughed. “I don’t think she was ready for that” Luke said. “I think not” I said. “Should I talk to her?” Liam asked. “No its okay” I replied. “I’ll go” I walked over to where April was now sitting with Ruby. “Hey Rubes” I greeted her. “Hey Bianca” she replied. “Are you okay about that conversation we just had?” I asked awkwardly. “Yeah I knew you guys would have done it” April said. “Okay, ew, I didn’t need to know that though” Ruby said. “Even though I guessed” “Yeah its kind of easy to tell isn’t it?”April asked. “Yeah pretty easy” Ruby agreed. “Okay okay” I laughed. “I’ll see you guys back at school” “What’s funny?” Liam asked. “Well it kinda seems like everyone knows that we have had sex” I said perhaps a little bit too loud because it seemed like the diner went quite for a second. “Okay well I think the whole of the diner knows now” Liam said. I laughed again. “Oops, Oh well” I said. “You really are something else Bianca” Luke said. “I’ve never met anyone like you” Lucy added. “Its a good thing” “You’re just so feisty and confident. I like that. I think your great for my little bro” Luke said. “Well thanks” I said. “Well I’m really glad you like Bianca. I don’t know what I’d do if you didn’t” Liam said. I looked down at my watch when I noticed my sister and Ruby and other students leaving the diner. “Babe we better get back to school” I said. “Yeah okay” Liam agreed. “Bye guys” I said to his siblings. We walked out of the diner. “I got my bike here” Liam said. “Okay” I said giving him a kiss again went on for a few minutes. We pulled apart when we heard some whistles from several students who were making there way slowly towards school. “Let’s go” Liam said handing me a helmet. “I wonder if I should tell them to walk faster” I said. “Just leave it baby. There just going to say that we will be late too” he said. “Your probably right” I agreed. We got on the bike and rode to school. “Okay baby, I’ll see you in a couple of hours” Liam said. I sighed. “Alright” He walked off in a different direction to where I was going. I watched him thinking that he looks so sexy at the back. “Bianca, earth to Bianca” April’s voice startled me. “What?” I asked glad that she couldn’t read my thoughts. “The bell has rung” she said. “****” I swore. “You should go to class then” “I have a free. What were you staring at?” “I’ll tell you later” I said. “Cya” “Hey class sorry I’m late” I said as I walked into my classroom. “Were you kissing Mr Murphy, Miss Scott?”Craig, a student asked. “My relationship with Mr Murphy is not any of your business” “So does that mean your dating?” Katie, another student asked. I sighed. “Yes” I answered. “Oooh are you in love with him?” Zoe asked. “Yes but can we go back to learning Italian” I said. “Oooh lovers” Craig said. “Craig another word and you can go to Mrs Palmer’s office” I threatened. He shut up after that. “Okay you guys read the chapters in the book there will be a test on Monday” I said as the bell rang. I sat back down in my chair and put my hands through my hair in frustration. “You okay?” Romeo asked as everyone was leaving. I put my hands back on the desk. “Yeah I guess” I said. “Craig’s an idiot” Romeo said. “I know” I replied. “Liam told me he wrote a song about you. Have you heard it yet?” Romeo asked. “Tonight I will” I replied. “Well I hope its great” He said. “I’m sure it will be” I said. “Yeah, well see you later Bianca” he said. “You mean Miss Scott” I corrected. “Right, yes, see you later Miss Scott” he smiled. “Bye Romeo” I said.
HighwayUnicorn Posted December 18, 2010 Report Posted December 18, 2010 Loved it! Love Liam & Bianca. Well done. Another great update. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx
lozlovesh&a Posted December 18, 2010 Report Posted December 18, 2010 So, I am going away on Tuesday. For about 3 weeks. I won't be updating so I got 2 more days to update this, then I will see what will happen, but I won't leave it unfinished don't worry. Here's another chapter, enjoy. I walked to Liam’s house around 7pm. I was really excited but also a bit nervous to hear the song. No one has ever written me a song before. “Hey Bianca” Luke answered the door. “Hey Luke” I replied. “Liam’s setting everything up” Lucy greeted me. “Don’t worry we are going to leave you two. We’re going to stay at The Sands” Luke told me. I felt bad. “I don’t mean to have you kicked out” I said. “Don’t worry, I can’t wait to order room service” Lucy said. “Okay well have a good time” Luke said. “You too” I replied. I shut the door behind them. “Babe?” I called out. “Living room” Liam replied. I walked in the room to find candles everywhere and everything so romantic. “Wow” I gasped. “You went to so much trouble” “You’re worth it baby” he said. “So, dinner or song first?” “Song. I’m really excited to hear it” I said. “Okay” he grabbed his guatair so I sat down. We were sitting on the big couch. He started playing and singing this song. Keith Urban – Put You In A Song Well here you come again and you’re lookin’ so fine You don’t notice me but it’s alright I’m just a guy who wishes that I could be your man someday Yeah a picture paints a thousand words it’s true But it’s still not enough for how I feel about you I wanna put you in a melody, I gotta set you to a groove I wanna put you in my car and drive And turn you up loud, roll down all the windows and shout it out I love this girl oh If I could press play, repeat how happy I’d be Wherever I’d go I’d have you there with me You’d be right where you belong I wanna put you in a song, oh oh oh Well I’d sing about your smile and your pretty blue eyes The way your hair shimmers in the sunlight It’d be so easy I’d just write it from my heart ‘Cause I gotta tell the world what you mean to me Wrap you up in a melody so you’ll be Stuck in my head all day ‘Cause you’re already there anyway, yes you are I wanna put you in my car and drive And turn you up loud, roll down all the windows and shout it out I love this girl If I could press play, repeat how happy I’d be Wherever I’d go I’d have you there with me You’d be right where you belong I wanna put you in a song And if I get it right everybody’d be singing along yeah And when they see you on the street they’ll say Hey ain’t you the girl in that song I wanna put you in my car and drive And turn you up loud, roll down all the windows and shout it out I’m in love with this girl Yeah if I could press play, rewind a couple million times Imagine for a moment that you’re all mine Every night I’d drive you home If I could put you in a Let me put you in a song Let me put you in a song Oh a pretty little song about you baby http://www.hotnewsonglyrics.com/keith-urba...ong-lyrics.html There was a few minutes of silence after he finished. “What do you think?” He asked nervously. “I love it. And I love you” I replied kissing him. “I mean every word of it baby” he said. “I know” I grinned. “Its so incredible, so beautiful babe. Thankyou for writing it” “That’s how I feel about you” “I feel the same” I replied. ‘You’ll be okay with it if it becomes a single, like I think it might be?” Liam asked. “Yes” I replied. “This may just be the break that I need” he said. “What happens if this is your break, I mean you may become more famous then you are now and have to go to gigs and stuff” “ I don’t know whats going to happen but whatever happens i’ll be living a normal life too, I’m not going to let all that stuff get in the way of whats important to me. I’m not about to leave Gina out in the cold, I know I have responsibilities” “Okay but what if some other girl who has a crush on you comes and flirts with you?” “Baby” Liam sighed. “If that happens I’m not going to flirt back. I’m not going to hurt you, I thought you knew that” “I know that. I’m sorry Liam. I’m sorry I know your not like.... him” I started crying again. I’m not really a crier. “I hate what he has done to you Bianca. Don’t you trust me?” he asked. “Yes of course I trust you” “Come here” he said. I went and cried into his chest. “Oh my darling girl. I love you” he said comforting me. “I love you so much” I said. “So much” I had stopped crying. I really don’t know why I got that upset. I guess it might be delayed reaction to what happened with Vittorio. I know I shouldn’t be taking it out on Liam, its a bit weird crying about what your ex-fiance did to my boyfriend. But I need to share everything with Liam. Plus that song was just so special and amazing to hear how he feels about me. I suppose it all just got to me all at once and I had to just let it out. “Are you ready for dinner?” he asked me. “Yes” I replied. We went and sat in the dining room. “This is fantastic” I said. “Not as good as your cooking” he said. I smiled. “I can teach you to be a better cook if you want” I offered. “I might just take you up on that” Liam said. “Good” I said. “Have you finished?” he asked. “Yes” I said. “Let’s go to bed then” “I’m not going to say no to that” I said.
HighwayUnicorn Posted December 18, 2010 Report Posted December 18, 2010 Loved Liam in that chapter. So sweet & caring. It was beautiful & I loved the emotions & everything. Perfect chapter. Love Carina xxx
lozlovesh&a Posted December 19, 2010 Report Posted December 19, 2010 Please leave comments, thanks all for reading. I woke the next morning early to people talking downstairs. I could hear Liam talking with his brother and sister and a couple of other people whom I wasn’t sure about. I quickly got dressed and went downstairs. “Morning Bianca” Lucy greeted me. “Morning everyone” I said. “Baby, these are our parents Linda and Larry” Liam said. “Hey nice to meet you, I’m Bianca Scott” I said. “Well its finally nice to meet the girl that has stolen my son’s heart” Linda said warmly. “Mum” Liam said exasperiated. “What darling? I can tell your in love with her just by the way she entered the room your eyes lit up” I smiled. Liam rolled his eyes. “He is definitely in love with her mum, you are right about that” Lucy said. “Okay you guys you can stop talking about it now” Liam said. “Oh poor baby everyone’s picking on you” I teased. I went over and gave him a kiss. “Feel better?” “Much” he said. “Oh I can hear my phone, where did I put it?” I was really talking to myself. “Bedside table” Liam answered. “What would I do without you?” Liam laughed. “No idea” he said. I ran upstairs and found the phone right where he said it was. I answered it as I was going back downstairs. “Hey sis” I said. “Do you know what time it is?” April asked. “Yes. Its 7.30am. I’m not late yet” “Not for school, I thought we were going to meet at the diner for breakfast” “Oh shoot. I’m still at Liam’s. His parents are here” I said as I walked back into the kitchen. “I don’t want to eat by myself” “Okay, I’ll be there in 10 minutes” I said. I hung up the phone. “I’m sorry I have to go and meet my sister” “I’ll walk with you” Linda offered. “I feel like a walk” “Okay sure” I replied. We started to head towards the door. “Hey wait Bianca” Liam said. I turned around. He kissed me. “I’ll see you tomorrow” he said. I nodded. “Call me when you get there” “Okay” he agreed. “I love you” “Love you too” I replied. We started walking towards the diner. Its only about 10 minutes from Liam’s place. “So, what’s your story?” Linda asked. “My story?” I repeated confused. “Yeah, your life, where did you grow up, what are your parents like?” she asked. “Well” I paused unsure of where to begin. “I knew it. I knew something had happened to you. I saw it in your eyes as soon as you saw we were his parents.” “I’m not sure where to start but I remember I was really close to my dad. He died when I was ten in a car accident. My mum never really paid any attention to me. She was into drinking, drugs, anything. I’m still surprised at how she managed to have custody of me. I had to learn to look after myself. I was alone most of the time. When I started to date my ex my mum suddenly took an interest, he was the prince of Italy, he was rich and I thought he loved me, I thought I had someone that loved me, but then he cheated on me but yet I still was going to marry him. I still had the wedding, I even said I do but I was lying to myself. My mother hates me now, she doesn’t want to know me. And she is now with my ex. She doesn’t want me to be happy” “My son makes you happy” “The happiest I’ve been since, well since my dad died I guess. Aside from my sister, I have felt alone in this world for a long time. When I first met Liam” I paused because I was almost in tears. “When I first met Liam it was like something had changed, and it felt amazing, though I was really scared of these feelings at first. I was so scared that I would just get abandend again” “Oh Bianca. I’m sorry you’ve been having a hard time. You seem like a wonderful person. I don’t know why anyone would want to hurt you” “Thanks” I said. “And I know my son won’t hurt you. He is madly in love with you” “I’m madly in love with him” I replied. “He completes me” Linda smiled at me. “I’m glad I’m getting to know you sweetheart” “Me too” I said. We had reached the diner. And I had spotted April. “Bianca, what’s wrong, have you been crying?” April asked. “No, she’s just been telling me a bit about her background. I’m Linda Murphy, Liam’s mother” she said. “Nice to meet you I’m April, Bianca’s sister” April said. “Its lovely to meet you April. I hope I’ll be seeing alot of you girls” “Oh I’m sure you will” April said. “Well I’ll leave you both to it” “Are you okay with going back?” I asked. “Yes. Don’t worry I’ll be fine. See you tomorrow” she said. “Bye” I replied. “So she seems really nice” April said to me. “She’s lovely. What mothers should be” I said. “Liam’s pretty lucky then” “He’s very lucky” I agreed. “Hey girls, what will it be?” Leah asked. “Scrambled eggs please Leah” I replied. “Mmm yeah me too” April said. “So who was that woman you were with?” Leah asked. “Liam’s mother, Linda” I replied. “I thought so. He looks like her” “Who looks like who?” Colleen asked as usual butting in. “Liam’s parents came last night. I was just with his mother whose name is Linda” I answered. “Wow meeting the parents huh? Sounds serious” Leah remarked. “Yeah well I didn’t know they were coming, neither did Liam” I replied. “Well at least you’ve met them and you don’t seem nervous about it” April said. “I should have been nervous, I wasn’t though. Not one bit” “Come on let’s go sit down. We don’t want to be late to school” April said dragging me away. I laughed. “Guess I’m going to sit. See you later Leah” “Bye” she replied. “So?” April said as we sat down. “So what?” I asked. “Come on Bianca. I want to know what did you tell Liam’s mum?” “I just told her everything. It all kinda spilled out” I said. “And what were you staring at yesterday. You didn’t tell me” “Okay fine. I was staring at Liam as he was walking to his classroom” I blushed. April smiled. “I knew you had it real bad for him. You should listen to your little sister more. I know what I’m talking about” I laughed. “Yeah okay. We need to stick together April. Its just us now really” “I know. Your all the family I have. That’s fine with me. I don’t need her” she said. “Good. I don’t need her either” I replied. “Though it would be nice if she were different. Like Liam’s mother” “Yeah but she’s not. So we just have to accept it” I said firmly. “I have” April said. “Okay, let’s talk about something else” “What do you want as a Christmas present?” April asked. “I don’t know I hadn’t thought about it” I said. “Oh gosh, what should I get Liam?” “I’m not sure but it needs to be big. He’s written you a song after all” she said. “Yeah I know” “Does he need a new guatair or something?” “Maybe” I replied. “Not really sure” “What about a microphone?” “He doesn’t have one at his house I know that much” I said. “Well then lets go look for one after school” she said. “Okay, and speaking of school we should leave” I said.
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