Together At Last

[Miranda]

I like that you've made Leah, Bianca and Charlie all friends, like they were onscreen at the singles night. I think Home and Away needs different groups of friends who aren't teenagers.

I think I missed the Miles/ Roo get together earlier.... well! Scandalous! Isn't she about 10 years older than him? Miles the toy boy

Oh, forgot to say: I like the way you've written in first person, and got into Bianca's head. I don't think I could do that with any of the HAA characters, well done for that

[lozlovesh&a]

So I have the Internet but don't have my story so can't update till I'm back home next sat.

[Miranda]

Don't worry, we'll just talk amongst ourselves til then And wonder frustratedly what the next part could be...

[lozlovesh&a]

Backkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk! Here ya go. No more wondering.

“Knock knock” I said as I stepped into Leah’s place.

“Hey” Leah greeted me a couple of days later.

“Well well long time no see” Charlie said.

“Yeah well I’ve been rather busy” I said suggestively.

Charlie laughed. “Yeah I can guess what you’ve been doing”

“We’ve barely stopped” I laughed.

“Yeah that doesn’t shock me” Leah said.

“So why have you stopped now?” Charlie asked.

“Decided we could do with some civilization” I said. “Don’t you want to see me?”

“Yeah of course” Charlie said.

“Good cos I’ve missed you guys” I said.

“We’ve missed you Scott” Leah replied.

“Hey soon you can’t call me that” I said.

“Oh yeah, do we have to call you Murphy?” Charlie grinned.

I smiled. “Yeah” I replied.

“So I have some bridal magazines” Charlie said.

“Really? I wanna see” I said.

She retrieved them. “Here you go” she said.

I opened the first one and a couple of pages into it I saw a really nice dress.

“Wow” I said.

“Yeah my gosh that is so pretty” Leah said.

“it would look great on you” Charlie added.

“Now you know what style you like” Leah said.

I wiped away a tear.

Charlie noticed. “You okay?”

“Yeah I guess” I said. “I’m just picturing me walking down the aisle and in this dress or something similar and I just I don’t know I feel like wow”

“Your overwhelmed?” Leah guessed.

“A bit” I agreed. “But you know I can’t wait for this to happen I really can’t wait”

“We know” Charlie said.

“Have you decided anything about the day?” Leah asked.

“Not really. Been a bit preoccupied” I said.

“Yeah and we know what with” Charlie grinned.

I laughed. “Yeah yeah” I said.

“Hey that’s a really nice dress” Ruby said walking in with Indi & Nicole.

“Yeah that would look really pretty on you” Indi said.

“You know if you want I can make you a dress. You can tell me the style and everything” Nicole offered.

“Really, are you sure?” I asked.

“Yeah I mean I made your other one didn’t i?” she said.

“Yeah you did. But I don’t want it to be like the other one” I said.

“Oh I know. You want it to be special right? Maybe instead of sequins you could have little music notes or something” she suggested.

“OMG Nic. That’s a fantastic idea” I said.

“Really?” she asked.

“Yeah totally. But not too many, just subtle” I said.

“Yeah and silver right? I’m sure I can find some somewhere” she said.

“Well at least we’re getting somewhere” I said excitedly.

“Yeah and how about food?” Leah asked.

“Well I don’t know” I said.

“Whatever you decide I can cook, I can get Irene to help I know she’d want to” Leah said.

“Thankyou. Everyone your all being so generous” I said.

“Your our friend and you deserve it Bianca” Nicole said.

“Nic is right” Ruby said. “You totally deserve it”

“I do don’t I?” I said smiling.

“Can’t think of anyone more deserving” Charlie said.

“Well I need to talk to Liam about some of this stuff” I said. “But can you guys not tell him about the dress? I want it to be a surprise”

“Yeah of course. I think that’s awesome. He’ll be totally surprised” Nicole said.

“I think he won’t be able to stop looking at you” Indi said.

“Well that’s not a bad thing” I said.

“No of course not” Indi replied.

At that moment Liam walked in and Charlie shoved the magazines under the cushions.

“What’s going on?” Liam asked.

[HighwayUnicorn]

Aww, I loved that chapter & it was nice of Nicole to offer to make the dress. It sounds like it's going to be lovely as well.

The end when Liam walked in & was oblivious to what was happening.

Another amazing chapter, well done & I look forward to more.

Love Carina xxx

[Miranda]

Welcome back Loz

Aw, I love weddings. And yes, it was nice for Nic to offer to make the dress. She is the bay's official dress designer

[Red Ranger 1]

Nice update.I liked Bianca's little chat with Nicole as well.

[lozlovesh&a]

Here is another little bit. Thanks for reading.

“Oh nothing, just girl talking” Leah said.

“Yeah I don’t believe that” he said.

“Well we’re just discussing our wedding actually” I said.

“That I believe” Liam said.

“I thought you were going out with the boys?” I asked.

“Yeah I am. I just came by to do this” he said and gave me a kiss.

I grinned. “Nice. Now you put me in the mood” I complained.

Liam laughed. “Later tonight” he said.

“Okay” I said.

“Okay bye everyone. Love you baby” He said.

“Love you too” I replied. I turned back to the group smiling.

“Aw that was really sweet” Ruby said.

“Yeah you guys are so cute together” Nicole said.

“I know” I said.

“Modest much?” Charlie said.

“Shush you” I laughed.

A few hours later everyone started leaving until it was just me with Charlie & Leah.

“So, where’s your man?” Charlie asked.

“Why, trying to get rid of me?” I asked.

“Yeah of course” she kidded.

“Some best friend you turned out to be” I joked.

“Well VJ is in bed, so is Ruby” Leah announced walking back into the room.

“Is that my cue to leave?” I asked.

“No of course not. I was just going to offer you a hot chocolate cos I’m having one myself” Leah said.

“I’d love one, thanks” I replied.

“Charlie?”

“Yeah I’d love one too” she said.

“Hey I’d love one if that’s okay” Liam said.

“Yeah of course” Leah replied.

“So how was your night babe?” I asked.

“It was alright, just hung out with the guys at Angelo’s” he answered.

“Only alright?” Charlie asked.

“Yeah I had a good time but I would have had a better time if Bianca was there” he said.

“Aw babe” I kissed him.

“Here you go guys” Leah came in with our drinks on a tray.

“Mmm nice” I said taking a sip.

“So Bianca who is going to walk you down the aisle?” Leah asked.

“Well I was thinking of asking Alf” I replied. “I mean he & Irene have been the closest thing I have had to parents in a long time”

“I’m sure he’d be really happy to do it” Liam said.

“Yeah, you think?” I asked.

“Yeah” He said.

“Well I’ll ask him tomorrow then” I said.

“Good idea” Liam replied.

[Miranda]

I love the way you are writing in first person as Bianca. I find her totally alien in the real series and don't know what makes her tick, so its nice to see inside her mind a bit.

One point: I didn't see Liam come in when he suddenly asked for a hot chocolate, when did he arrive?

[lozlovesh&a]

He arrived then, asking for the hot chocolate. No one noticed till he started talking! He comes in at good times.

Thanks, I like writing as Bianca. I love her character atm, I think she's fantastic for the show.