HighwayUnicorn Posted March 13, 2011 Report Posted March 13, 2011 Another brilliant chapter, well done. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx
Red Ranger 1 Posted March 13, 2011 Report Posted March 13, 2011 Nice bit of characterisation.Ending has me intrigued.
lozlovesh&a Posted March 14, 2011 Report Posted March 14, 2011 “Mmm hmmmm” I mumbled. “You don’t look okay” Leah said. “Gee thanks” I replied. “Baby, what’s wrong?” Liam asked joining us at the table. “I don’t know, I’m sorry, I don’t know why I’m crying” I said. Liam pulled me into an embrace. “Did you notice the whole room went quite as soon as you started singing?” I asked him. “Yeah I did actually” he said. “I think its fantastic that you can engage a whole room like you just did” Leah said. “Yeah it was an amazing feeling” Liam said still holding me tightly. “Baby, what is up with you?” “I have no idea. The song just I don’t know” I mumbled. “Hey mate you almost ready for your next song?” Angelo asked. “It’s almost time for you to go back on” “Yeah just give me a minute” Liam said. “Yeah sure” Angelo replied. Liam looked at me and gave me a kiss. “I’ll be back” he said wiping the rest of my tears away. “Okay” I said and sat back down. “Is everything okay with you?” Miles asked concerned. “Your not pregnant are you?” Leah asked. “God no. I don’t want kids neither does Liam. Its just that song is so beautiful and just watching everyone else watching him is amazing” I said. Liam went back on stage and did something I wasn’t expecting. “I’d like to give a shout out to my beautiful fiancé over there, I love you” he said looking in my direction. “And this is another song off the album called someday someday, enjoy” Again I noticed the whole room went quite listening to his voice. “That was really sweet” Charlie whispered to me. “Yeah I know” I whispered back. “Well that’s all from me tonight. You can buy my album in stores next month. I hope you all have a great night and thanks for listening” Liam said to a round of applause and a whistle from me. He packed up his things and walked back over to us. “That was really fantastic” Roo said. “Thanks Roo” Liam replied. “I love you too” I said wrapping my arms around his neck and giving him a kiss. Liam grinned. “Oh I know” he said. “So your album is available to buy next month?” Roo asked. “Yeah it is. I can’t wait till its in shops” Liam said. “Well I can’t wait to buy it” Roo said. “Oh don’t be silly I can just give you a copy” Liam offered. “Actually I can give you all copies” “Don’t you want us to pay for it so you can get money off it?” Leah asked. “No its fine. I’m not really in this for the money. I’m in this mostly because I love to sing and make music. I mean of course the money is good because I need it to support Bianca & April and our place and whatever else we want but I don’t want you guys to pay for the album” Liam said. “So is the album actually ready now?” Roo asked. “Well almost. Just a few finishing touches to do” He said. “Well mate if you ever want more gigs like this I’d be honoured to have you play” Angelo said. “Yeah I’d love to play here again” Liam said. “If you have the time with all the tours and other gigs that I’m sure you are going to do” “I’m sure I won’t have that many tours or gigs. This might not even sell that much” Liam said. “I hope your kidding with that” I said. “I don’t know” Liam said. “Well I think that it is going to sell a lot” I said. “You have to say that baby” he said. “No I don’t. I wasn’t kidding when I said the songs were amazing” I said. “Yeah well I’m just going to go to the bathroom” he said. I stared at my drink unsure of what to do. “He just needs a bit more confidence” Roo said. “Has he been rejected before? That could have something to do with it” “Yeah he has been rejected a lot in the past” Leah said. “I know cos we had a conversation about it about a year or so ago” “Well it must be that cos he doesn’t seem to have a problem singing in front of a lot of people” Charlie said. “It must be hard if he’s been rejected a lot. He’s probably afraid that no one will buy this album” Roo said. “Bianca do you think that’s what it is?” Leah asked me interrupting my thoughts. “Sorry, what?” I asked. “We think that cos he’s been rejected a lot in the past that he’s worried that this time his album won’t sell” Roo explained. “Yeah he is really worried about that” I agreed. “I keep telling him not to be but he still is” “Everyone’s been talking really great stuff about Liam” Angelo said returning to the table. “Really?” I asked. “Yeah they loved those two songs” he said. I smiled. “You should tell him that” I suggested. “Okay” Angelo agreed. I looked at my watch noticing that he has been gone for more then 15 minutes. “Have you seen him out there?” I asked Angelo. “Yeah actually some girl is trying to hit on him” Angelo answered. “What? Where?” I exclaimed. “Over there” he pointed. I walked over to where Liam was with some girl who was ready to pounce on him.
HighwayUnicorn Posted March 14, 2011 Report Posted March 14, 2011 Another great chapter. Well done. Amazing stuff. Love Carina xxx
Miranda Posted March 16, 2011 Report Posted March 16, 2011 This is really good Loz. I love Liam and Bianca, I wish I'd started reading when you began it. I was shocked in the first chapters when Vittorio was sleeping with B's mother, eugh! I could believe it though, cos when they were in the series they were very close and whispering together e.g. when they went on his bucks night with John and co. Well done!
lozlovesh&a Posted March 16, 2011 Report Posted March 16, 2011 This is really good Loz. I love Liam and Bianca, I wish I'd started reading when you began it. I was shocked in the first chapters when Vittorio was sleeping with B's mother, eugh! I could believe it though, cos when they were in the series they were very close and whispering together e.g. when they went on his bucks night with John and co. Well done! Thankyou! I thought of that too when they started whispering at the bucks party etc I thought that maybe Johanna was going to get with him and only wanted Bianca too so she could make her move on him but it didn't happen. Liam & Bianca are my fave couple right now. Thanks for all the comments everyone, update will be soon I promise, prob tomorrow as I'm going away for a week next week and don't think i'll be updating during that time.
lozlovesh&a Posted March 17, 2011 Report Posted March 17, 2011 I saw the girl kiss Liam and I got so angry at the girl for kissing him. I know it’s not Liam’s fault and that he would never do that to me. “Hey I thought you were going to the bathroom” I greeted Liam as if nothing had just happened. “Yeah thankyou” Liam said gratefully. “I don’t know you but you should know that he is my fiancé” I said to the girl as Liam walked into the bathroom. “I was just telling him that I think he is really hot and that we could have a really good time” the girl said. “Well that’s just never going to happen, he is with me” I said. “He kissed me” she said. “No you kissed him. Look you little good for nothing just leave him alone” I said threateningly. “Alright geez don’t chuck a cow” the girl huffed. “I think I have a right to chuck a cow. You just kissed my fiancé” “Yeah I did and it was fantastic” she said just to add to my anger. “You are such a little bitch” I lost my cool. “I know that kissing him is fantastic but that is only for me to know and no one else” “Well I know now too” she responded not giving up. “You are unbelievable” I said realizing that my voice just got a tiny bit louder. “I know, thanks for noticing” she replied. “Oh my god you are so” I trailed off as I noticed people were staring at us and Liam had just walked out of the bathroom. “Baby, stop” he said. I looked into his eyes. “Fine” I said. I dragged him out onto the balcony. “How was that kiss anyway?” I asked still mad. “Bianca” he sighed. “What?” I asked. “Tell me” “I hated every second of it” he replied. “Really?” “Yes, really. I love you. I love your kisses” he said. “Well here’s one” I said seductively and gave him a big kiss. We walked back over to the table. “Unbelievable” I exclaimed as I sat back down interrupting the conversation. “What was she doing?” Roo asked. “She kissed me” Liam said. “On the lips?” Leah asked. “Yeah full on the lips” I said. “And I told her she was a little good for nothing and to stay away”. “Good for you” Charlie said. “I’m not going to let anyone get their hands on my man” I said. “Of course not” Leah said. “I am so glad you came over when you did baby, she wouldn’t let me get away. I think she was a bit crazy” Liam said. “She thought that you and her could have a really good time” I said. “I know. That’s why she kissed me” Liam said. “The only person I want to have a really good time with is you” “I know” I smiled. “Oh gawd, are you two going to have a make out session now?” Leah asked. “Well since you suggested” Liam said grabbing me and kissing me passionately. “Leah, why’d you start that?” Charlie complained playfully. “Don’t worry we’ll continue this later at home” Liam said. “Can’t wait” I said. “Thank god that’s over” Leah kidded. I grinned and decided to teach Leah a lesson. I sat on Liam’s lap and started kissing him. Charlie laughed. “You know she’s teaching you a lesson” she said. Leah sighed. “Yeah I’m regretting that I said something” “Man do they care that we are all here?” Roo asked. I paused midway. “No” I answered. Miles laughed. “Are you jealous Roo?” He asked. “No” Roo answered unconvincingly. “I don’t believe you” Miles said. “Okay, fine, maybe a tiny bit jealous” Roo said. “No need to be jealous babe” Miles said and started to kiss her. “Mmmm wow” Roo said. “Yeah? There’s more where that came from” Miles said. “Gee, where have you been all my life?” Roo asked. “Right here, waiting for you” Miles said. Roo smiled and kissed him. Leah groaned. “Why is everybody kissing everybody else?” I stopped kissing Liam. “Sorry but you had to be taught a lesson. Plus its fun and I love it” Charlie laughed. “I’m not kissing anyone” she said. “I know but that’s because your boyfriend is working. You would be kissing him if he was sitting here all night” Leah replied. “True” Charlie grinned. “In fact. I think I’ll go find him” she said and walked off laughing. “Ah great, if your all going to continue this kiss fest I think I’ll just go home” Leah said. “Leah hey I’m sorry but I’ve finally finally found someone. Aren’t you happy for me?” Miles asked. “You know I am Miles. I got to go anyway, VJ will be back soon” Leah said. “So I’ll see you guys later” Liam grinned. “Want to go home?” he asked. “Oh yeah” I laughed. “See you guys later” Liam said.
Red Ranger 1 Posted March 17, 2011 Report Posted March 17, 2011 Hope that's the last they see of that girl.Nice update.
HighwayUnicorn Posted March 17, 2011 Report Posted March 17, 2011 Beautifully written. Well done. Great stuff. Love Carina xxx
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