Red Ranger 1 Posted November 27, 2009 Author Report Posted November 27, 2009 Just finished the last two chapters.I can't believe Roman cheated on Charlie!I can understand Tony being angry with Gina and Hugo but throwing them out of the house was a bit harsh, liked the little bit with Hugo and Martha.Watson's "I have to hear this on my birthday?!" made me laugh. Quote
Inactive User Posted November 28, 2009 Report Posted November 28, 2009 This is really good. More soon please Hope Tony and Gina better sort things out. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 28, 2009 Author Report Posted November 28, 2009 That whole conversation between Alf and Gina with the flashbacks was great, I loved all the insights into Tony's past, it hung together really well.Jack's on Ray's case! Quote
Scotcaz22 Posted November 28, 2009 Report Posted November 28, 2009 I really, really enjoyed reading the conversation between Alf and Gina! Just wow! I learnt a lot in just one conversation about Tony and why he reacted like that! Brilliant! Can't wait for the update and hopefully, things will work out between Tony and Gina... Quote
Scotcaz22 Posted November 29, 2009 Report Posted November 29, 2009 Ohhh, that preview of what's going to come up sounds interesting! Great update as always! Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 29, 2009 Author Report Posted November 29, 2009 Loved all the team-ups in that chapter:Jack and Lucas teaming up to investigate Ray, Irene and Leah teaming up to help Charlie, Alf and Martha teaming up to help Gina and Hugo.Hope everything goes all right for all of them! Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 30, 2009 Author Report Posted November 30, 2009 Nice that Lucas has picked up on Jack's rather unorthodox approach to police work.Can understand why Richard punched Roman but it's not going to do much good.Loved Charlie threatening to arrest a bunch of annoying brats. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted December 1, 2009 Author Report Posted December 1, 2009 Yep, Watson really isn't having the best birthday...Love the way you wrote Brendan, he was exactly like he is in the show and so cute.Looks like there really is no way back for Roman and Charlie. Quote
Scotcaz22 Posted December 1, 2009 Report Posted December 1, 2009 Great update, as always! Poor Roman, poor Charlie and poor Ruby Awww...poor Xavier and Brendan having to leave so soon! Hope that doesn't happen! Looking forward to more! Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted December 2, 2009 Author Report Posted December 2, 2009 Hopefully the Austins will be able to stay, it'll be hard on Xavier and Brendan if they have to leave. Looks like Jack got the evidence he's looking for, hopefully they'll be in time... Quote
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