Red Ranger 1 Posted November 9, 2009 Author Report Posted November 9, 2009 Oh, the scenes at the Diner were really funny.Bit sneaky of Xavier and Roman's reaction was hilarious. Worried what's wrong with Rachel. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 10, 2009 Author Report Posted November 10, 2009 Tony's almost childlike moment of panic was shocking but it was good that he was concerned for Hugo...at least while he was conscious.Another nice comedy bit between Xavier and Ruby and Irene and Roman to balance it out. Quote
suzannelgnz Posted November 10, 2009 Report Posted November 10, 2009 I'm really glad that Rach is ok, although poor Tony being bashed and now kidnapped too Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 11, 2009 Author Report Posted November 11, 2009 Oh boy, things aren't looking that good for Tony at the moment... Quote
Scotcaz22 Posted November 12, 2009 Report Posted November 12, 2009 Just started reading your fic story and I really enjoyed reading all the chapters up to now... Loved all the comedy moments and I went aww or ohh dear when Tony had these flashbacks or confrontations with his father. Poor Tony...hopefully he will be found soon. Looking forward to the next update Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 12, 2009 Author Report Posted November 12, 2009 Aargh!Lucas and Xavier knocking lumps out of each other isn't going to help anyone.Glad Jack's being a bit more understanding.That preview makes me a bit worried... Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 13, 2009 Author Report Posted November 13, 2009 Yes!Well, obviously not yes that Tony got hit, but yes that he stood up to Kent and told him a few home truths instead of being scared of him.Hope they find him soon though... Quote
Scotcaz22 Posted November 14, 2009 Report Posted November 14, 2009 That was a great chapter (not so great about Tony and his father....the b*****d) but you wrote it so great, that I felt like I was right there with the rest of them...and what a great ending! Hopefully, Tony will make it out of the fire... Quote
Scotcaz22 Posted November 15, 2009 Report Posted November 15, 2009 I really, really don't like the sound of that preview.... I hope the bad news is not what I think it might be! A great chapter as always, and what a great cliffhanger at the end... Quote
charmed60 Posted November 15, 2009 Report Posted November 15, 2009 Oh no that preview doesn't sound good I really hope Tony's going to be ok, that chapter was amazing so full of action and I was holding my breath the whole way through. I loved the little scene between Rachel and Tony where she was begging him to wake up, so sad Can't wait for your next update! Quote
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