matticus01 Posted October 25, 2009 Author Report Posted October 25, 2009 I wonder how things are going to turn out for belle... it's good that she's keen to make a new start for herself... beautiful chapter! Nicely written update soon Quote
adellejefferiesxox Posted October 25, 2009 Report Posted October 25, 2009 This story keeps getting better and better, I can't wait to see what's gonna happen now! Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 25, 2009 Report Posted October 25, 2009 Hmmm...Liked the little chat between Belle and Roman.But are things going to be as simple as Belle thinks they are?She could be setting herself up for another disappointment here... Quote
tessalove Posted October 25, 2009 Report Posted October 25, 2009 That was really good!! I hope everything goes well for her and she doesn't turn back to the scalpel! Really brilliant writing! Update soon! El xX Quote
meant2live Posted October 26, 2009 Report Posted October 26, 2009 Can't wait to see what happens next, you have offically got me hooked! This is awesome! I don't like Belle's own view of herself, but I understand where it comes from, so I feel for her. And I'm glad she seems to have (for this moment in time at least) found a new lust for life. But my guess is things aren't going to be as simple as she thinks they going to be. Being close to Aden for longer periods of time is just going to screw her up even more isn't it? Dammit! She should just shot Nicole, then she can have him to herself. (Just to point out I don't actually want Nicole to die! Because that would be mean!) Can't wait for more, you are talented my dear, very much so. Quote
adellejefferiesxox Posted October 26, 2009 Report Posted October 26, 2009 Awwwww Belle, that was really good G, I could feel Belle's pain. Poor girl. She just wants to be loved by Aden, she wants to be accepted. She's such a shy, lacking cofidence in this fic. I really feel for her. I'm glad Aden at least made an effort to ask how Belle was, that was sweet. Although he didn't know who Belle was! Shame on you Aden lol. Quote
tessalove Posted October 26, 2009 Report Posted October 26, 2009 Aww! I feel so sorry for Belle! She must feel so awful! I hope she gets better soon!! This Fic is so powerful! And so well written!! Update soon! El x Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 26, 2009 Report Posted October 26, 2009 Okay, so Aden really is that oblivious to her...Shame it put Belle right back.It's good that she wants to stop harming herself but I don't think it's going to be as easy as that... Quote
matticus01 Posted October 26, 2009 Author Report Posted October 26, 2009 wow that was so powerful Poor Belle It's a shame Aden didn't even know she was part of the school, and then Nicole had to show up! update soon... this is very powerful writing you have here! Quote
HeavenForbid Posted October 26, 2009 Report Posted October 26, 2009 These updates were fantastic. I can't express how much of a great writer I think you are. Just utterly brilliant! I feel so terrible for Belle. And Aden didn't even notice her. Update when you can! Quote
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