Lise Posted October 1, 2009 Report Posted October 1, 2009 That was brilliant. The end of it made it me wonder if something else is going on. I loved Aden and of course, Colleen. Quote
Georgia Posted October 1, 2009 Report Posted October 1, 2009 That was great. I loved the interaction with Nicole and Aden, and then Nic and Colleen. The last line in the last two chapters is making me think something else is going on... Update soon. Quote
tessalove Posted October 2, 2009 Report Posted October 2, 2009 Aww I liked that chapter! Haha, i loved what Nic said to Geoff! So funny! And Charlie, "You kissed a girl and you liked it Haha! :L Aww Ruby's falling for Nic! Update soon! I love this! El x Quote
Danni02 Posted October 2, 2009 Report Posted October 2, 2009 Seriously loving this fic! Its getting really interesting....cant wait for next update. Quote
Lise Posted October 2, 2009 Report Posted October 2, 2009 That was great. I really like the last scene with Ruby and Charlie. I love where your taking this. Quote
Georgia Posted October 3, 2009 Report Posted October 3, 2009 Another great chapter. I liked how this chapter dealt with the reactions other people had, and the conversation between Charlie and Ruby was sweet. Update really, really soon. Quote
Danni02 Posted October 3, 2009 Report Posted October 3, 2009 (edited) Aww Ruby. Wonder how long it'll take Nic to realise. Hoping for an update soon. Edited October 3, 2009 by Danni02 Quote
tessalove Posted October 3, 2009 Report Posted October 3, 2009 Aww Ruby! I hope Nic understands! Loving this! Update soon! El x Quote
Lise Posted October 4, 2009 Report Posted October 4, 2009 That was great. I love how Ruby's confusion is coming out as anger. It'll be interesting to see if Nicole picks up on it. Quote
Georgia Posted October 4, 2009 Report Posted October 4, 2009 How long will it take Nicole to understand what's going on ? I really liked the chapter, and I can't wait for another one Quote
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