KaiyaBlake Posted June 7, 2009 Report Posted June 7, 2009 Martha, your a bit stupid You want to be with Jack. J-a-c-k! Oh no, Fire! 2 people die!? Loved it. Can't wait for more
Red Ranger 1 Posted June 7, 2009 Report Posted June 7, 2009 Woah.Good stuff.Martha's a bit stupid for cancelling her chemo and the conversation about the two Jacks was rather amusing.Something tells me it's not going to be a happy ending for her and Roman. The fire was really dramatic, can't wait to see what you do with it.
Barbara Posted June 8, 2009 Report Posted June 8, 2009 Martha still has feelings for Jack so I'm thinking she might change her mind again. I'm glad Martha and Charlie are friends again. Oh no! Two persons are going to die in the fire. More please.
Slade Posted June 10, 2009 Report Posted June 10, 2009 CHAPTER – 19 - Martha deciding to only choose Roman out of obligation and pity is a recipe for disaster. I do agree with others that it was good to see her make things up with Charlie. I don’t know why but there are certain parts of your story that really make me laugh. I just knew when Rachel left the dinner in the oven and sat down to have a drink there was going to be a fire. I’m surprised she wasn’t wearing a dressing gown and smoking a cigarette. CHAPTER 20 – Two deaths. I actually hope Rachel isn’t one of the ones to die because I would like to see her face the consequences of her actions. It would just be too cruel if it were Tasha so I guess it makes sense for Hugo to be one of the people. Not sure about the other.
KirstyEkua Posted June 11, 2009 Report Posted June 11, 2009 Poor poor Rachel I really hope she gets some happiness soon!! It's all so tragic for her!! As for Martha, ugh!! Jack too i'm over it! They deserve each other actually!!! So cant wait to see what you do next!!
Laura Posted June 16, 2009 Report Posted June 16, 2009 Thank you so much for your comments I NEED TO UPDATE!!! Does everyone here want me to continue writing cause I do like writing and I love getting your comments but it's just I can never be bothered if I'm honest but if everyone wants me to continue and is enjoying it then I will continue. If you do, I'll try update soon
Slade Posted June 17, 2009 Report Posted June 17, 2009 Yes please continue Laura. It would be a shame to suddenly just stop doing it. If you are think about ending it perhaps you could round it up in a few chapters. I know I don’t reply straight away after each update (as I’m usually at work) but I do reply eventually. As you can see other people reply at some point too.
Barbara Posted June 17, 2009 Report Posted June 17, 2009 Please continue Laura. I really like reading your version too. And you can't stop writing it now when you've left us wanting to know who will make it and who won't.
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