xknomex Posted May 4, 2009 Report Posted May 4, 2009 wow that last scene was beautiful!!!! my favourite part of the wedding... LOVE that song as well, it was perfect. I like that Jamie and Alyssia joined them at the end... I'm with Belle! i LOVE bad boy Aden!!!!!! update soon xx
bradyell Posted May 4, 2009 Report Posted May 4, 2009 i didn't want that chapter to end Lousie! it was completely perfect - every word! The badboyness was brilliant but it was the bit on the pier that had me utterly captivated! like i said i didn't want it to come to an end and i was scrolling down sooooooo slllllooooooowwwwlllllyy but even though i didn't want it to come the ending was just beautiful perfect perfect perfect
leah1234 Posted May 4, 2009 Report Posted May 4, 2009 aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawww wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was incredible!!! I loed every single bit and without a doubt I can say that the wait was definitely worth it!!!!! that was just adorabe!!!! Now I can't for the next update xxxxxxxx
Red Ranger 1 Posted May 4, 2009 Report Posted May 4, 2009 Really well-written.Glad that Belle and Nicole stopped Aden and Geoff from doing anything too stupid and also glad Belle defended Drew like that.
KaiyaBlake Posted May 5, 2009 Report Posted May 5, 2009 Aw that end bit was so beautiful Loved it! Can't wait for more
~Zoe~ Posted May 5, 2009 Report Posted May 5, 2009 Aw, great chapter Louise.. especially the end bit Really well written, looking forward to reading more
bikinikill Posted May 5, 2009 Report Posted May 5, 2009 That was so beautiful Louise. So great. You're an amazing writer. Really looking forward to the next chapter.
**Julie** Posted May 5, 2009 Report Posted May 5, 2009 Awww That was beautiful. Especially the ending. Brilliantly written. Can't wait to read more.
Louise_2983 Posted May 5, 2009 Report Posted May 5, 2009 I'm with Belle! i LOVE bad boy Aden!!!!!! Don't we all? Thanks for the lovely comments everyone, they mean a lot
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