Louise_2983 Posted April 12, 2009 Report Posted April 12, 2009 Red Ranger no laughing at all! Chapter 49 “Babe, put some clothes on please!” Aden sighed as he entered the bedroom to find Belle examining her reflection in the full length mirror lining the wall. A lacy midnight blue bra was all that covered her top half whilst her figure hugging bootcut jeans were hanging open over her hips revealing a teasing flash of her matching French knickers. “Why? Am I that hideous?” she cringed, tugging on her jeans with a sigh. “What? No of course you’re not! Just the opposite in fact...” “My jeans won’t fasten!” she cried in exasperation. “I’m fat and ugly and hideous!” “Belle, you’re none of those things don’t be ridiculous” he half laughed, looking at her over his shoulder as though she was insane. “You can’t take it back now!” she snapped. “I’m so fat you can’t even bear to look at me unless I put more clothes on!” “That’s not what I meant! You’re gorgeous, it’s keeping my hands off you that I have a problem with!” he grinned as he let his eyes wander up and down her impressive figure. “And why would that be a problem?” she smiled suggestively as she turned towards him and placed her palms flat against his hard, toned chest. Biting her lower lip a sudden yearning for him to assure her he did find her attractive, in a very practical way, surged through her. “This is exactly why it’s a problem” he smirked as she pressed her attractive body against him, her teasing cleavage crushed against his chest. It took every ounce of self restraint he had to slide his fingers through hers and gently push her hands from his chest, creating some much needed space between them as his body ached for her. “You know this is not allowed! We have to wait eight weeks and it’s not even been five yet!” “Six to eight weeks!” she corrected him with a pout. “And four and a half isn’t that far away from six” “It’s far enough” he sighed trying to avert his gaze from the flimsy lace preserving her modesty. “Especially when six is really eight!” “You know you want to!” she protested, raising herself up onto the tip of her toes and leaning forward to press a soft, warm kiss against his lips. In doing so she gave him an enticing peak down the front of her balcony bra causing him to visibly gulp as he scrunched his eyes shut and pressed her further away, dropping her hands back to her sides abruptly. “Aden!” “Belle, stop teasing me” he warned her diverting his attention to the silver watch he had originally come back into their bedroom to retrieve. “So they told us to wait eight weeks! So what? How are they going to know? I won’t tell if you won’t” she whispered seductively, pressing her lips against his shoulder blades as he continued in his attempt to ignore her. “I’ll know!” he sighed in frustration as he snapped the metal fastener of the watch together. “I wouldn’t be able to concentrate, I’d be too worried about hurting you. You had a major operation barely a month ago!” She sighed deeply, the determination in his piercing eyes told her everything she needed to know. He wasn’t going to be swayed. She was slightly touched by his concern for her but at the same time doubts about her post pregnancy appearance niggled away at her as she turned back to gaze at her reflection in the way too honest mirror once more. “Are you sure that’s the real reason? And you don’t just think I’m hideous?” “Babe” he sighed softly as he watched her from behind with a tiny smile as he let his gaze linger on her pert behind for slightly longer than necessary. “You know I think you’re gorgeous...stunning...beautiful” he teased, taking a risk and wrapping an arm across her front to enable him to pull her petite frame back into his broad chest and gently brush a kiss in her dark, silky hair. “What about sexy?” she pouted, twisting her head slightly to look at him. “Goes without saying” he smiled genuinely, softly pressing his lips to hers. “My jeans object” she sighed jumping up and down a little in an attempt to pull them higher. He groaned as her rear wriggled against him and he let her go in order to recreate the earlier, much needed, distance between them. “Belle, you had a baby four weeks ago. You can’t expect to be back in your jeans yet!” “She only weighed three pounds Aden!” Belle sighed in exasperation as she finally managed to do up the button on her jeans only for it to instantly pop off, pinging across the room and bouncing off the mirror as he smirked. “People are going to look at her, all tiny and doll like and then at me, all fat and whale like and just think I’m a big, fat, greedy hef-” “You don’t look like a whale” he objected with a chuckle. “I do, I better stay away from the beach or someone might try and harpoon me!” “Don’t be ridiculous Babe, you weren’t even remotely fat to begin with so a few extra pounds are not the end of the world. I bet there are thousands of women out there who would love to be almost in their size eight jeans right now!” “I guess” she sighed knowing that he was right and her crisis of confidence was slightly silly. “And what would you rather be able to do hey?” he questioned knowingly. “Fit into your jeans? Or cuddle our gorgeous baby girl?” “No contest!” she sighed with a huge, beaming smile at the mere mention of their daughter. “Exactly” “I just don’t want you to go off me” “Belle” he sighed softly. “I don’t even think that’s possible. I love you, regardless of what you look like” “So you do think I’m hideous!” “That’s not what I said!” he objected with a chuckle. “You say that now but next thing I know you’ll be sneaking off for secret rendezvous with Charlie, you were so checking her out yesterday!” “I was not!” “You so were, Aden! Don’t even try to deny it!” she exclaimed before lowering her voice to imitate his own. “Oh Charlie with your genes of course you’ll have beautiful babies!” “I was just stating a fact!” “Are you sure? And you weren’t thinking about those babies being your babies too? Or at least helping her practice making them?” “Belle, don’t be ridiculous!” he rolled his eyes towards the ceiling in exasperation. “Don’t roll your eyes at me Aden Jefferies!” she snapped haughtily. “I’m just preparing myself for the inevitable” “I am not going to have any sort of rendezvous with Charlie!” he protested with a sigh before smirking slightly. “Secret or otherwise. Do I really look that dumb? I’d at least choose someone who liked men!” His comment elicited a small burst of laughter from her as her expression softened and he knew he’d won the argument. “Well, I’m sure they’ll be straight women queuing around the block for you to choose from” “And why is that?” he grinned sidling up behind her and nudging her arm gently with his own. “Hey?” he prompted as she grinned coyly. “Because...” she trailed off giggling quietly to herself as he looked at her expectantly. “Because what?” he smirked raising his eyebrows suggestively. “Because you’re gorgeous ok?” she reluctantly admitted as he wrapped his arms around her tightly and pulled her back against his chest. “And so are you. You are the most beautiful, sexy, fascinating woman I know and I love you. I love you and I love your body. So it might have changed a little bit but it did that to give us our perfect children and that just makes it, you, even more gorgeous and amazing” “You always know how to make me feel better” she smiled feeling rather foolish. “I’m not saying it to make you feel better babe, I’m saying it because it’s true. I love you” “I love you too” she whispered with a smile as he kissed her cheek tenderly. “And no matter what size jeans you wear, I will always love you” he grinned before adding with a smirk. “So if anyone tries to harpoon you, they’ll have me to deal with ok?” “Awww” she grinned as she twisted her body around to face him, pushing her body closer to him. “It's so sexy when you're all protective" “Belle!” he exclaimed thrusting a blue top into her hands. “Put some clothes on!” “If I have to” she sighed in defeat before pulling the top over her head and yanking out the hair that got caught underneath it. “Thank you” he smiled softly. “I promise, in three and a half weeks I’ll make it up to you big style” “Oh you better!” she grinned as he pulled her towards him for a kiss, hoping he could resist going any further now that she was more adequately covered by material. “That was nice” she sighed several minutes later as they were forced to break apart by their mutual need for air. “Yeah it was” he grinned pressing another soft kiss to her lips. “I missed this the most” “What?” “When we weren’t together” she explained quietly. “This was what I missed the most, just being able to kiss you and look at you. You take my breath away Aden Jefferies” “And I’m always happy to do CPR” he chuckled kissing her once more. “I know, you’re just so obliging!” she grinned happily. “I missed it too” he whispered softly. “Yeah, it’s not like I had that with Johnny or that you had that with Kirsty is it?” “No” he confirmed shaking his head slowly from one side to the other. “And even what we did have with them wasn’t anything to write home about” “Ok” he told her pretending to be serious. “If you’re going to write to Amanda or Geoff and Annie about it we are never having sex again!” “Ha ha!” she laughed pushing him playfully backwards. “Although Irene always used to love those letters about me and Johnny!” “Belle!” “Sorry!” she chuckled kissing him softly once more. “Seriously though” she began a sudden thought taking over and casting doubts in her mind. “I was gone for almost 5 years, was Kirsty the only one you were, you know with?” “Belle, I wasn’t jumping into bed with other women the minute you were out the door you know! You weren’t that easy to get over!” “I know but I just suddenly thought that there might have been someone” she whispered sheepishly. “Maybe it’s just best if we leave all that in the past huh?” he asked, his eyes full of hope. “So there was someone?” “Belle...” “I want to know” “I don’t think you do” he told her shaking his head softly. “Why? It wasn’t Nicole was it? Because she swore to me that you hadn’t...” “No! Of course not!” “Then who?” “Belle!” “Come on, I want to know” she persisted, “Are you telling me you’re not intrigued as to whether I was with anyone other than Johnny?” “No I’m not intrigued! Belle, I don’t want to know about it. I don’t want to think about any other guy kissing you or touching you or...” he trailed off with a sigh. “It’s bad enough knowing about Johnny” “I still want to know” she told him honestly, knowing that if he didn’t tell her she’d spend the rest of her life scanning his interaction with other women for signs that it might have been them. “Are you sure?” “Yes” she nodded adamantly. “Ok but it’s just between us right? You’re not going to go and have it out with them because we weren’t together and it was a long time ago now” “So it’s someone I know?” “Well I never left the Bay so obviously it is. You still want to know?” “Yep” she nodded. “Tell me” “Ok” he began apprehensively with a sigh. “It was Ruby” “Ruby Buckton?” “Well do you know another one?” “No” she shook her head softly as she processed the information. “Charlie likes women so you settle for her sister hey?” she teased but he could see a flash of pain in her eyes as she tried to shake away the mental images his revelation had placed at the forefront of her mind. “Wish you’d never asked huh?” he questioned knowingly. “Yeah kind of” she admitted sheepishly. “But I did so now I know” “It was just once Belle” he explained quietly. “I was still a mess after you left and well Ruby had her own issues she needed a distraction from. Ross had just been back for a few days with Morag and his condition had deteriorated really badly but he remembered everyone except Ruby and that really broke her heart. I was trying to help her and somehow it just happened. We both needed comfort and afterwards neither of us really spoke about it, we just understood that it a one off” “I can deal with that” she whispered softly. “As long as you’re not harbouring a secret yearning for her?” “No way” he grinned. “The only person I’m yearning for is you and that is not a secret!” “Not anymore anyway” she smiled, kissing him softly. "So other than Johnny, were you with anyone else whilst we were apart?" "You said you didn't want to know about that!" she replied defensively. "I know but I told you so now it's your turn" She bit her lip and crossed her arms in front of her defensively. "Belle?" "Well if you really want to know then I'll tell you but you're not going to like it..." “Tell me it’s not Brad Pitt please? Because I really think that would give me some serious issues competing with every woman’s dream man!” he laughed and put her at ease a little so it didn’t seem as bad an idea to tell him. “He’s not my dream man” she told him with a genuine smile, kissing him softly. “So who?” “Drew” “DREW?!” he spluttered at her revelation. “I told you that you wouldn’t like it!” she cried defensively wishing she’d kept her mouth shut. Or at least pretended that it had been Brad Pitt. “Drew? That jerk?!” “He’s not a jerk, he’s my friend” she replied not sure why she suddenly felt so defensive of Drew. “With benefits?” he questioned raising his eyebrows suggestively. “No!” she snapped angry that she’d accepted his dalliance with Ruby but now he was getting worked up about her own minor indiscretion. “It was just the one time and it was a comfort thing...” “For him too? Because I’m sure he still has a thing for you” “It was 4 years ago Aden and Drew’s seeing someone else now anyway. We’ve moved on from whatever there was between us years ago, we’d moved on from it before I married you. We’d both moved on. It was just something that happened once and we dealt with and forgot about it” “It was forgetful huh?” he smirked and she knew he wasn’t going to hold a grudge. “Well it definitely wasn’t anything like what we have” she reassured him with a kiss. “Good” he grinned as she moved away from him and whipped off the too small jeans that had still been hanging off her hips before rifling through the drawer for a pair which fit. “Belle!” he sighed in frustration as her pert behind covered only in deep blue lace occupied his line of vision. “Sorry!” she grinned as she pulled on a better fitting pair of jeans. “But it took your mind off me and Drew didn’t it?” His grin suddenly got a whole lot wider. “Oh yeah” *** “Aden!” she yelped loudly setting her daughter back down on the soft mat resting on the table. “What is it?” he demanded to know as he rushed into the room, concern clearly etched in his expression. “I don’t know how to do this!” she cried in frustrating gesturing towards the baby bath before her. He let out a relieved laugh. “It’s not funny!” “Babe, I thought something serious had happened! In the few seconds it took me to get in here I had all sorts of stuff running through my head...injuries, fatalities...don’t scare me like that!” “Sorry” she sighed feeling stupid. “I just don’t know what I’m doing! Is the water too hot? Do I just drop her in there?” “No!” he instantly blurted out. “You definitely don’t just drop her in there!” “That was a joke” she laughed softly. “I may never have given a baby a bath before but I’m not stupid enough to drown her on my first attempt!” “Thank god for that hey princess?” he smiled as he tickled Alyssia and she kicked up her legs in glee. “But seriously? How hot should the water be? I don’t want to burn her!” “Test it with your wrist” he instructed her and obediently she dipped her wrist into the bath water. “It feels ok” she informed him, pulling her wrist away as the water sloshed in the white plastic bath. Aden dipped his own wrist in and nodded in agreement. “It’s fine. See you do know what you’re doing” he smiled at her reassuringly. “But you might want to get rid of some of it or she might need a pair of flippers” “Great” Belle sighed as she picked up the bath and carted it to the sink to empty some of the water away. “So I am incompetent I just chose drowning rather than burning as my method of inflicting pain” “Babe, you’re not incompetent” he smiled as she brought the bath back over with a more acceptable amount of water sloshing about in the bottom. “No one knows how to do this stuff at first. Seriously, Irene had to show me so many times!” “Really? You’re not just saying that to make me feel better” “Of course not. All parents have to learn stuff like this” “But not with their second child!” she cried in frustration. “Belle” he whispered, brushing a kiss over the top of her head. “All parents have to learn this at some stage, you’re not incompetent trust me. At least you got the baby bath out Nicole tried to bath Sophie in the sink on her first go” “It says in the baby book that the sink is ok!” “With all the dishes still in it?” Aden laughed as Belle picked up Alyssia and held her close to her chest. “She didn’t?!” “Oh yes she did, but don’t tell her I told you that or she’ll kill me!” “Did she really do that or are you just saying it to make me feel better?” Belle looked at him dubiously. “She really did it!” “I don’t believe you” she shook her head but let the topic die as he helped her to gently lower their baby girl into the bath so she was covered up to her shoulders. Aden gently supported the little girl’s back and head with his hands as Belle lightly ran a soapy sponge over her soft skin. Clearly loving the water trickling over her their daughter began to flounder in the water, thrashing her tiny arms and legs as she gurgled in delight. “Oh we’ve got ourselves a little water baby here!” Aden grinned as Belle opened her mouth to respond only to swallow a mouthful of bath water splashed upwards by her daughter’s movement. “And a mischievous one at that!” Belle giggled, splashing a tiny stream of water over her baby girl’s body causing her to only gurgle louder and flail her little limbs around more enthusiastically. “See” Aden smiled down at this daughter as Belle continued to bathe her. “Silly Mummy was worrying for nothing wasn’t she? She’s doing a great job! You love this don’t you baby girl?” “She certainly seems to” Belle grinned tickling Alyssia gently until the action elicited a tiny smile from the baby girl. “Look at that smile” Aden grinned as Belle finished bathing their daughter and he gently lifted her onto the waiting, fluffy white towel and wrapped her up in it tenderly. “Isn’t it just the most beautiful little smile anyone’s ever seen?” “I think Daddy’s in love” Belle whispered to their daughter as Aden gently lifted her and held her close to his chest. “I sure am” he whispered into her tiny ear. “But with Mummy too so you’re just going to have to learn to share me sweetheart” “I can handle that if you can Alyssia, what do you say?” Belle grinned as she tenderly ran her fingertips over her daughter’s damp hair. “She says that a share of me is the best offer she’s ever had!” Aden grinned cheekily as Belle kissed him tenderly. “Well baby girl I know you’re only a few weeks old but you’ll learn, never accept the first offer you’ve got to shop around a bit!” “Oiy you!” “I’m joking of course” she grinned lifting her palm to caress his soft cheek and kiss his plump lips. “Hey when did you do that?!” she exclaimed as she caught sight of the brand new charm hanging from her bracelet. The silver “A” had a tiny pink diamond sparkling in bar slashed across it, which gleamed in the strong rays of the sun. “Magic” he smiled having hooked the charm into place whilst she’d taken a shower. “I love it, thank you” she whispered as she traced the outline of the charm with her fingertip. “No, thank you” he told her sincerely. “For Jamie and Alyssia and for loving me just as much as I love you. I’m so happy Belle” “Me too” she grinned taking his lips with her own before returning her attention back to her bracelet. “It’s getting kind of full now” Aden nodded at the array of charms now hanging from the bracelet. The “A” fit perfectly between the star and the pearl filled shell. “Still room for more!” Belle told him with a wink. “No more charms” he told her shaking his head softly. “Aden! I can see at least one or two more charms on here!” “No way” he shook his head again, this time more adamantly. “Aden! Have you not seen our two little charms recently? They’re so adorable and gorgeous and perfect. How can you not want more?” she questioned knowing full well they weren’t really talking about charms. “Belle do the words post natal depression, premature birth, emergency caesarean and collapsed lung mean anything to you?” “But-“ “No buts Belle, we have been through so much to get here and I don’t want to do anything that could possibly put this at risk. Our children are perfect, I don’t need any more. I just need them and you” “You’re right” she whispered with a smile kissing him tenderly. She wouldn’t do anything that would ever risk taking her away from her children. “No more charms” *** “Ssssh sweetheart!” Aden whispered as he gently carried his daughter into the lounge. “We don’t want to wake your Mummy do we hey? She only just fell to sleep” he told her as he lowered them both onto the sofa and held her close to his bare chest. He slid one hand into the pocket of his low rise jeans and checked the time on his phone. It was one am and the house was still except for the tiny gasps of his baby girl which had diminished from wails to cute little snuffles. “There, that’s better isn’t it?” he whispered as he gazed down at her snuggled against his chest and returned his hand to supporting her so that he could cradle her as close as possible, one hand under her tiny legs and the other on the back of her head, her soft dark hair tickling his palm. “There’s no need to cry precious, Daddy’s here” he murmured pressing a kiss to her forehead as she gazed up at him, all innocence and sweetness. Inhaling her soft, sweet scent he smiled contently and rearranged his position so he could play with her tiny hands with his fingertips. She looked even tinier and more fragile nestled against his broad chest. Her dark hair and soft, pale skin a stark contrast to his tanned, toned chest. In that moment he wanted to freeze time. To stay that way forever. For there to be no big bad world outside to protect her from. He had everything he needed within the four walls of that house and he wished they never had to leave. “I love you baby girl” he murmured softly before nuzzling his nose into the soft, warm spot just below her ear that he had concentrated on in the hospital, when all he had wanted to do was to hold her close and tell her how happy and safe he would keep her. His heart filled with love as he did just that. “I’m going to love you forever and I’m going to do everything I can to make you happy baby. No one is ever going to hurt you I promise” he whispered, softly kissing the tender spot his gaze rested on. “How could I ever have thought I could keep her from you?” Belle murmured alerting him to her presence as she stood and observed Aden and their daughter from the corner of the room. The sight of him cradling their baby girl, her soft skin making contact with his own, took her breath away so forcefully she almost toppled over. “Let’s not talk about that hey?” he smiled, holding out his hand for her. She nodded in agreement and snuggled into his side as he draped his arm around her and continued to support Alyssia with the other. “Hey little girl” she whispered softly, taking her daughter’s hands in her own. “There wasn’t anything wrong was there really? I’m on to you missy, you just wanted Daddy’s undivided attention!” she cooed smiling down at her baby girl as Aden kissed the top of Belle’s head. “And you know what sweetie, I don’t blame you” “Aww babe” he smiled as she tilted her head upwards so he could catch her lips with his own. “I love you” “I love you too” he smiled taking his hand from her back and stroking her hair tenderly. “Belle” he began confidently in low, sultry tones. “I love you so much and I know that at home on the sofa in the dark in the middle of the night isn’t the ideal time bu-“ “The ideal time for what? Are you finally giving in on the whole eight weeks thing?” she grinned seductively. “No!” he laughed in disbelief. “Belle, how can you even think that when I’m holding our daughter in my arms?” “Well to be honest” she confessed quietly. “The sight of you holding her like that in nothing but those very low slung jeans is so sweet and sexy...and it was how we got her in the first place!” “I’m not talking about sex Belle” he chuckled. “Then what?” “Well, if you let me finish a sentence!” “Ok, sorry!” she held up her hands as though in surrender. “Go on” “Belle, we were apart for so long but only physically you know that right? Because in here” he tapped his head and his heart in turn with a nervous laugh showing how stupid he felt doing that but in that moment he didn’t really care. “You were always with me. Because no matter what you say you helped me become the person I am today. You showed me that just being me was good enough for someone to love me and that there are people in this world who will stand by you and support you even when they have a hell of a lot of lose. You showed me how to tear down the walls and let someone all the way in and you showed me how to love. You’re part of me Belle and that means that you’re part of everything I do and every word which leaves my mouth. It was never just me and Jamie because everything I ever did with him, every story I told him, every joke we shared...all of it Belle... you were always there. You were part of me and part of Jamie and that’s why he loved you as soon as he knew you, because he recognised you” “Aden” she whispered softly a solitary tear rolling down her cheek. He lifted his hand and brushed it away gently with his thumb. “How I feel about you has never changed Belle, only our marital status. I want to face whatever the world has to offer with you by my side, as my wife. Belle,” he paused with a soft smile. “Will you marry me...again?” “Yes” she nodded enthusiastically, tears streaming down her face as she took his face in between her palms and tenderly kissed him. “Yes” she repeated again, her smile wide and beaming. “Yes, Yes, Yes!” “I think Mummy wants to marry me baby girl” he whispered into their daughter’s ears. “What do you think?” he asked before looking back up at Belle, her eyes flooded with tears. “She’s not sure she got that, can you say it again?” he teased. “Yes” she repeated slowly before kissing him again. “You, Alyssia and Jamie” she sighed. “You are all I need and I want us to be a proper family again” “You better have this then” he smiled as he pulled an expensive looking ring from his pocket and placed it in the centre of her palm. “Is this...” her questioned trailed off as she gazed at the diamond and platinum engagement ring in her hand and realised it was the same one he had presented her with during their honeymoon, after she had surprised him with a wedding, six years ago. “Yeah” he nodded. “And if you’d rather have a new one then we can go out and buy another one. Nic said it made me a cheapskate asking you with the same ring but I figured what does she know?” he laughed but he didn’t sound entirely confident in his decision now she was holding the ring in her hand. “I could have bought a new ring but Belle, the love that I have for you is exactly the same as when I gave you that ring six years ago. That hasn’t changed and for that reason it just felt right to give you the same ring” “It’s different though?” she questioned as she turned the ring over between her fingers and gently ran her fingertips over the sparkling diamonds now set into the platinum band, three on each side of the main gem. “One for every year I’ve loved you since I gave you that ring the first time in Paris” “I love it” she smiled her tears breaking free once more as he kissed her gently. “And I love you and I never stopped loving you either” “I know” he nodded with a soft smile before confusion took over as she handed the ring back to him. “What?” “Well it’s custom for you to put it on my finger” she smiled holding out her left hand as he gently rested Alyssia, watching her parents with wide blue eyes, into his lap and slid the ring onto Belle’s finger. “No getting out of it now” he smiled, bringing her hand to his lips and kissing her fingertips tenderly. “Babe” she smiled sincerely. “There is no where I would rather be”.
Red Ranger 1 Posted April 12, 2009 Report Posted April 12, 2009 Red Ranger no laughing at all! Just give me a second to feel smug...Okay, done now. Great chapter, you've progressed their relationship really well.And Belle with probably the filthiest joke I have ever encountered on this forum.Good job I wasn't eating.Oh, hang on, I am... Looking forward to the next update.
zifiso Posted April 12, 2009 Report Posted April 12, 2009 what Aden said to Belle when he propossed. Aden teaching Belle how to bath the baby was so loving and funny at the same time Aden slept with Ruby and Belle with Drew i would have never guessed. Looking forward to the wedding!!! Brilliant update!
emma_2006 Posted April 12, 2009 Report Posted April 12, 2009 Wow, that was brill Can't believe that Aden slept with Ruby and Belle with Drew though It was so sweet how Aden was teaching Belle about giving a bath! It had me in laughter and tears at the same time especially at the end AOL at the proposal and Belle saying YES and AOL that she wanted him to put it on her finger Can't wait for an update!! xoxo
Louise_2983 Posted April 12, 2009 Report Posted April 12, 2009 Red Ranger no laughing at all! Just give me a second to feel smug...Okay, done now. Great chapter, you've progressed their relationship really well.And Belle with probably the filthiest joke I have ever encountered on this forum.Good job I wasn't eating.Oh, hang on, I am... Looking forward to the next update. Is it really that bad? Should I edit it? ETA: Filthy joke removed for good measure! Sorry to the dirty minded people (Taniya ) who probably wanted to read it
LAURZY! Posted April 12, 2009 Report Posted April 12, 2009 Oh i'm in bits! lol that was so beautiful The image of Aden and Alyssia together is so sweet I love how suggestive Belle was/is! hahaha Do not blame the girl lol He asked her to marry him! YAY sooooooo happy Brilliant, loved it...... cannot wait for more
leah1234 Posted April 12, 2009 Report Posted April 12, 2009 All I can say is aaw Fantastic as per usual update soon xxxxxxxxx
Red Ranger 1 Posted April 12, 2009 Report Posted April 12, 2009 Red Ranger no laughing at all! Just give me a second to feel smug...Okay, done now. Great chapter, you've progressed their relationship really well.And Belle with probably the filthiest joke I have ever encountered on this forum.Good job I wasn't eating.Oh, hang on, I am... Looking forward to the next update. Is it really that bad? Should I edit it? ETA: Filthy joke removed for good measure! Sorry to the dirty minded people (Taniya ) who probably wanted to read it Don't worry, it wasn't that bad.It just provoked a momentary "Oh my god, did she really just say that?" reaction.
xknomex Posted April 12, 2009 Report Posted April 12, 2009 yay!!!! They're going to get married again!! That beginning was brilliant!!!! poor Aden and Ruby!? did not see that coming! lol Aden and Belle bathing a baby is the sweetest image ever! :wub: Fantastic chapter!! xx
wrongturntaken Posted April 12, 2009 Report Posted April 12, 2009 AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 That was quite possibly the sweetest chapter i have ever read of anything!!!!!!!!!!!!! Everything about it was so perfect! LOVED the way he proposed! And that speech made me cry! I love what they're like as a family now, it's so cute! I'm really intrigued about this joke now though, i didn't get here in time to read it! Brilliant chapter! Hope you can update soon!
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