hitmanfan Posted April 10, 2009 Report Posted April 10, 2009 Oh that was worth the wait. loved the scene in the bedroom when they snuck away form the party.
LAURZY! Posted April 10, 2009 Report Posted April 10, 2009 Awwwwww that was so sweet!! Loved it all! Jamie as alway.... cutest thing ever Lmao at Roman calling Nicole his favourite mistake Brill update, looking forward to reading more
KaiyaBlake Posted April 10, 2009 Report Posted April 10, 2009 Absolutely adorable I loved Aden teasing belle about her wit haha Can't wait for more
bailey4 Posted April 11, 2009 Report Posted April 11, 2009 Wow this is turning out to be awesome. Aden and Belle, now Jamie and Alyssia and now Geoff and Nicole kidding i know hes married but its just awesome.
**Julie** Posted April 11, 2009 Report Posted April 11, 2009 Awww that was adorable. The ending was beautiful. Update soon.
Red Ranger 1 Posted April 11, 2009 Report Posted April 11, 2009 Okay, seriously, wow.I actually really enjoyed Aden and Belle's banter at the start and with Jamie, Alyssia and Sophie all in there...maximum cuteness.And I loved the whole scene with everyone at the house, their reactions were just spot on.
Louise_2983 Posted April 11, 2009 Report Posted April 11, 2009 and now Geoff and Nicole kidding i know hes married but its just awesome. Lol I wrote that bit with you in mind!
leah1234 Posted April 11, 2009 Report Posted April 11, 2009 That was just amazing!!!!! I loved every single bit of it!!!! Especially... no I can't pick a favvourite part!!! Update soon xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
~Zoe~ Posted April 11, 2009 Report Posted April 11, 2009 That chapter was really good Louise, liked all of it The ending was just beautiful
Louise_2983 Posted April 11, 2009 Report Posted April 11, 2009 Especially... no I can't pick a favvourite part!!! Aww thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. I had planned to update tonight but it's not going to be finished sooo...sneak peak: "So other than Johnny, were you with anyone else whilst we were apart?" "You said you didn't want to know about that!" she replied defensively. "I know but I told you so now it's your turn" She bit her lip and crossed her arms in front of her defensively. "Belle" "Well if you really want to know then I'll tell you but you're not going to like it..."
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