Red Ranger 1 Posted March 23, 2009 Report Posted March 23, 2009 That was incredibly good, pure raw emotion, brilliant description, virtually dialogue free, really drawing the reader into their turmoil.I liked it when Aden turned up and convinced Belle with just a few words. Now I'm just really hoping the baby will be all right...
wrongturntaken Posted March 23, 2009 Report Posted March 23, 2009 Sorry I haven't commented in a while. WOW!!!!! Those descriptions were so powerful!!!! You could feel everything that she was going through so strongly, you captured the emotions perfectly!!!! It was so sad when Aden wasn't there, but when he came in, i actually sighed in relief. I can't believe you're keeping us hanging!!!! Will she be okay? And how many weeks is this on since the last chapter??? Update soon! I can't wait!!!! This is seriously soooooo good!!!!!
Adelle_fan1000 Posted March 24, 2009 Report Posted March 24, 2009 Wow! Louise that was just Amazing.. So well written im Gobsmacked Very well done!!! I hope the baby is alright
KaiyaBlake Posted March 24, 2009 Report Posted March 24, 2009 Oh dear i hope she is alright!! Best chapter! And like everyone else said, sooo well written Loved it. Can't wait for moreeee!!!
leah1234 Posted March 24, 2009 Report Posted March 24, 2009 like everybody else... eh... WOW!!!!! That was incredible, you really hit the nail on the head!!!! Loved it Update soon xxxxxxxx
SAM27# Posted March 24, 2009 Report Posted March 24, 2009 That chapter was absolutely brilliant!! I hope the baby survives! Can't wait for more
Zetti Posted March 24, 2009 Report Posted March 24, 2009 The words you wrote brought it out so effeciently I loved it. There was no dialogue but there didnt really need to be for me! I hope the baby is ok.
Louise_2983 Posted March 24, 2009 Report Posted March 24, 2009 There was some dialogue. Thanks for the lovely comments everyone! I'm amazed that no one asked where Aden had been to be honest, I thought you'd all be a lot more suspicious!
hitmanfan Posted March 24, 2009 Report Posted March 24, 2009 Was just so relieved that he got there in the end and they were going through it together, I completely forgot that no one could find him to start with!!!
bradyell Posted March 24, 2009 Report Posted March 24, 2009 There was some dialogue. Thanks for the lovely comments everyone! I'm amazed that no one asked where Aden had been to be honest, I thought you'd all be a lot more suspicious! Should we be suspisious?
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