LAURZY! Posted March 1, 2009 Report Posted March 1, 2009 That was awesome! had me in tears... I'm glad in a way that Aden didn't just forgive her and act like nothing happened, but i'm also glad that Belle said her piece too, that seemed really realistic! Hopefully, over time he'll learn to trust her again.... Cannot wait for more!!!
KaiyaBlake Posted March 1, 2009 Report Posted March 1, 2009 Amazing Chapter! So sad though I do get why Aden's angry, and I'm glad he was being honest with her.. Still, I hope they work things out eventually Everything is out in the open now so hopefully it gets better from here *hopes* Can't wait for the next Chapterr
Inactive User Posted March 1, 2009 Report Posted March 1, 2009 Great chapter but really sad and touching Update soon.
bikinikill Posted March 1, 2009 Report Posted March 1, 2009 That was really sad. I'm glad he came back, and like RR said, I'm glad they're not pretending it never happened. But its still sad. Great work Louise.
wrongturntaken Posted March 2, 2009 Report Posted March 2, 2009 Fantastic chapter as always! Both of their reactions to everything that happened felt so realistic. I think you wrote it amazingly! It was so sad too! Loved the scene with Jamie and Aden's explanation of why he thought he could only have one of them! Can't wait for another update! SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!
Louise_2983 Posted March 7, 2009 Report Posted March 7, 2009 Sneak peek: “Maybe not on purpose but you do. And I can’t carry on like this Aden. I’m not sleeping and I’m stressed and that’s not good for any of us” “Do you want me to leave? Roman’s got space at his place, I could ask him i-“ “No! I don’t want you to leave” she sighed, tears now streaming freely down her cold cheeks. “But it would be nice if you could actually give a damn!”
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