KaiyaBlake Posted February 28, 2009 Report Posted February 28, 2009 Oh no! Aden why did you say that? I hope they work things out. The beginning of that chapter was so sweet Great Chapter. Can't wait for more!
bikinikill Posted February 28, 2009 Report Posted February 28, 2009 Hey Louise. That was really great. Well particularly the beginning and the middle. The end not so great. haha. I'm really angry that Aden could say something that stupid to Belle about her sleeping around alot. I get that hes angry that she kept it from him and thats understandable, but that was just horrible. I'm glad she through him out, despite how much I think they should be together, he shouldn't have said that. But I hope they can work it out. And how confusing it must all be for Jamie especially if they don't. Poor kid. Really great. In random other comments - I love your avatar. Its so rad. I really loved Belle's dress in that episode and the yellow scarf thingy, I think its really pretty. Looking forward to the next chapter.
jenpen08 Posted February 28, 2009 Report Posted February 28, 2009 oooh the happiness was too good to be true! Tut tut Aden " we know you get around" Very inappropriate! As per usual it was wonderfully written! Cannot wait for the next update!
Louise_2983 Posted February 28, 2009 Report Posted February 28, 2009 To be fair Belle has said worse to Aden in a moment of anger in this fic! And did anyone really expect him not to get angry?!
Autumn Song Posted February 28, 2009 Report Posted February 28, 2009 More brilliant updates, I'm loving this - Well Done you're a sensational writer!
xknomex Posted February 28, 2009 Report Posted February 28, 2009 I knew you would let the happiness last! I hope he can trust her again, They've come so far and it wouldn't be fair on Jamie. Brilliant update though and that beginning was just perfect xxxx
Inactive User Posted March 1, 2009 Report Posted March 1, 2009 Great chapter. Hope you better not break them up again for the second time! Awww Jamie Update soon
wrongturntaken Posted March 1, 2009 Report Posted March 1, 2009 I loved the start with them waking up all together! That was just so AWWWWOL!!!!!! His reaction was exactly what i thought it should be! you did it very realistically and i loved the whole scene! I couldn't believe what he said to her at the end but i can understand it, i like how she told him to get out, means the next chapter will be very interesting... Can't wait! Hope you can update soon!
Red Ranger 1 Posted March 1, 2009 Report Posted March 1, 2009 Oh boy.Yes, it seems my happy ending comment was a little bit premature.It has now got to the point where I genuinely don't know what's going to happen next.Are they going to sort it out in the next chapter?Stay apart for a bit but get together eventually?Split up for good this time?And Jamie was so happy to have his family together...Looking forward to finding out.
Zetti Posted March 1, 2009 Report Posted March 1, 2009 Aden's reaction and Belle throwing him out didnt make me a happy bunny But Jamie is the best
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