bikinikill Posted February 13, 2009 Report Posted February 13, 2009 Oh that was so good Louise. But if they don't eventually get back together I may have to hunt you down. haha Its just so clear that they love each other, and they want to be together. Jamie will love that room. And its so nice to see Belle putting in so much effort to be the best mother she can to him. She wants to give him everything and then some, its really lovely. And the bit where she wanted to put Aden's hand on her stomach, their child, oh that was really sad. He deserves to know. I understand why Belle doesn't want to tell him, but he deserves to know. And maybe its just the push he needs to get over himself and divorce Kirsty already. That was a great chapter Louise. You are an amazing writer, but I'm pretty sure you know that!
Zetti Posted February 13, 2009 Report Posted February 13, 2009 She decorated an entire room with Aden for Jamie.. Aden is confusing me as well but the best bit was no Kirsty :D
jenpen08 Posted February 13, 2009 Report Posted February 13, 2009 Arhh I Loved it!! I'm all !!! The paint fight was amazing as was the banter! I squealed at the ' i'm looking at him line' ahh your bloody good, cannot wait for the next update!!!
Red Ranger 1 Posted February 13, 2009 Report Posted February 13, 2009 That was nice, some good banter between them.Even if Aden has to be giving out the most mixed signals in history.
bailey4 Posted February 13, 2009 Report Posted February 13, 2009 Beautiful, I love everything about it. Now if only they can make this into a movie
HAA Girl 08 Posted February 13, 2009 Report Posted February 13, 2009 Awwwww! Jamie's gonna love his new room lmao at the paint fight! Hope Belle tells him soon or things are gonna get a lot more messier! Cannot wait for more
LAURZY! Posted February 14, 2009 Report Posted February 14, 2009 Awww she decorated a room for him! Loved it all, seriously, it was so well written Aden has to be the most frustrating person ever! haha he gives out so many mixed signals!! I hope she tells him about the baby! he'd wanna know... cant wait to read more
KaiyaBlake Posted February 14, 2009 Report Posted February 14, 2009 That was... I wish everything would work for them Great chapter. More sooooooon please
Louise_2983 Posted February 14, 2009 Report Posted February 14, 2009 Beautiful, I love everything about it. Now if only they can make this into a movie Aww I think that's the nicest thing anyone has ever said to me!
wrongturntaken Posted February 14, 2009 Report Posted February 14, 2009 Aw!!!!!! i LOVED it!!!!!! The tension you create between them is just incredible, it goes from them having fun and being silly with an undertone of both wanting more and then you can turn it serious so naturally. It's such a credit to your writing! I love what you did with the painting when he held her hand; classic move! but i've never seen it done with painting before, I absolutely adored this chapter, i could so see Belle dressed like that, and i loved their paint fight! That ending... please make them kiss! I want Aden to realise he has to be with her before she tells him she's pregnant. She can't not tell him cos then that would mean he'd miss out on the baby's life like she missed out on Jamie, and that wouldn't be fair! So please, make it good. I know what ever you'll do it'll be amazing though so i can't wait for your next update! And i really wish this was a movie too! Update soon! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!
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