zifiso Posted January 27, 2009 Report Posted January 27, 2009 Hi, ijust want to say how great this story is, have'nt commented in the past, but coud'nt resist on this one, belle and eden sleeping together, yay ( what if eden goes back to kirsty like someone commented but belle falls pregnant? 'hint hint', pliz don't kill me for saying that, love your work, keep it up!
wrongturntaken Posted January 27, 2009 Report Posted January 27, 2009 THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU!!! I think a bit of racy fluff is what we've all been needing! and you did it sooooooooooooooooooooooo well!!!!! You can really build the tension, it's actually like watching a scene in real life except its better! My favourite bit was this though: "All I know is, I think we might finally be on the same page" "What if we're reading different books?" she gulped. "Doesn't matter" he shrugged casually. "It's all the same 26 letters, just shuffled around a little bit. The heart's still the same" I loved this metaphor/simile/analogy whatever it was, i'm too overwhelmed to think straight! It really struck me cos it was so meaningful! I loved the bit about friends at the start too! I don't think it's going to be smooth sailing from here though, i can't wait to see what's going to happen next! I hope you can update soon! Cool shout outs at the beginning, thanks, lol. :D
xknomex Posted January 27, 2009 Report Posted January 27, 2009 OMG Thank God for that!!!! I have missed Racy Fluff so much and that chapter just made my day!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was just.... I'm so glad they finally are "on the same page" it was brilliant. That conversation was just written so beautifully and i'm just... so happy :D Thank You Update soon xxx
rfran Posted January 27, 2009 Report Posted January 27, 2009 Hi I think the mixed reaction bit was about my comment and I'm just difficult to please, I did want them to kiss and I'm glad Aden thinks there 'on the same page' and I know Kristy is being a troll about Belle and Jamie getting to know one another. My problem was that while Aden is married and not even separated this is bound to have massive repercussions not just for the adults but for Jamie as well and I am concerned about the inevitable fall out from Aden and Belle not being able to stop this. This isn't to say I'm not really enjoying this and don't want you to update cause I'm fascinated to see what happens next
Red Ranger 1 Posted January 27, 2009 Report Posted January 27, 2009 Lone voice of dissent?Yeah, I'm used to being that.Really not too keen about the idea of Aden and Belle having an affair or sleeping together when he's got a wife at home.That's just making a messy situation even messier, no matter how good it makes them feel in the short term, and some of your comments suggest that it's going to be far from the answer to all their problems... Loved Belle's comment about everyone playing hide and seek and Aden's moment of insight into Annie's behaviour.And as wrong as it was, their banter was rather cute.
clara Posted January 28, 2009 Report Posted January 28, 2009 Ohhhh...well that makes things interesting... I am actually agreeing with RedRanger1 here and saying I'd have preferred everything to be out in the open first but the fluff was good... You nearly managed to change my mind about wanting Aden to be honest with Kirsty first... And that wasn't the end Good - Cause if I remember correctly you promised me more drunk Belle
Adelle_fan1000 Posted January 28, 2009 Report Posted January 28, 2009 Oooo my!!!! I had a mass grin on my face... I loved it.. So well written.. was kinda hot
HAA Girl 08 Posted January 28, 2009 Report Posted January 28, 2009 Louise... what can I say? That was excellent! You write so well, and oh my gosh! It's just toooooo good! Cannot wait for the next update
Louise_2983 Posted January 28, 2009 Report Posted January 28, 2009 Hi I think the mixed reaction bit was about my comment and I'm just difficult to please, Actually quite a few people had said they were glad they didn't kiss, the comment wasn't aimed at anyone in particular
KaiyaBlake Posted January 28, 2009 Report Posted January 28, 2009 I think i've been loosing it lately!!! I've spilled 100 drinks, dropped my laptop, tripped over a couple of times. NOWW.. thought it was the end? Ahhh, I need to wake up Just don't mind me haha.. So glad it's not though, I would have nothing to read
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