susanf6230 Posted January 27, 2009 Report Posted January 27, 2009 Great update. Glad they didn't kiss. There are still a lot of issues to be resolved. Aden needs to be fair to Kirsty and break up with her, he doesn't love her. Not sure if he should get back with Belle.
Louise_2983 Posted January 27, 2009 Report Posted January 27, 2009 Given the responses to the last chapter I have a feeling this one is going to receive a very mixed response! But I hope you enjoy it anyway, thank you for sticking with me this far and I hope you continue to stick around! This chapter is for Jenn, Jen, Laura, Naomi and Taniya because I know this has been seriously lacking in fics of late and you've all been missing it! Chapter 16 She sighed as she closed the fridge door with a thud having found nothing that appealed to her, nothing that would fill the huge void inside her and make her forget how much it pained her. She’d tried wine and chocolate and watching reruns of Friends on TV but nothing could distract her. Even Ross had married Emily. Sure he’d said Rachel but then he went and married Emily anyway. She sighed and leant her head against the cold fridge door, her fingers still curled around the handle as she groaned in frustration. She’d practically begged him to kiss her and he’d rejected her. Yet again he’d teased her with his honest words and then refused to follow though. She didn’t think she could do this anymore. She loved him. She wanted him. But she wouldn’t let him play her like a game of chess, always one move ahead of her, never letting her get close enough to take his king. She knew she shouldn’t be thinking like this. He was married and she didn’t want to be responsible for breaking that up. She didn’t want to be the bad guy. She didn’t even want to hurt Kirsty no matter how much she was growing to dislike her. But it was becoming too hard to fight anymore. She’d told him she only wanted to be part of Jamie’s life and she’d meant it but the undeniable pull she felt every time she was near him told her it had all been a lie. She wanted both of them. She wanted her family back. She wanted it all. “Hey” he startled her as he spoke. She turned her body slowly to face him, biting down so hard on her bottom lip she almost drew blood. “Are you alone?” he questioned hesitantly, gazing around as though the whole town were suddenly going to jump out and yell “Caught you!” at him. “No!” she snapped, her tone brimming with sarcasm as she moved away from the fridge and lent against the counter. “We’re playing hide and seek, Annie’s under the stairs and Geoff’s in the cupboard. I’m going to go and beg him to kiss me in a minute!” “Belle” he raised his baby blue eyes slightly as he spoke her name and she gave in reluctantly. “Yeah, yeah I know. You’re married and your wife was downstairs. And I get to play the immoral other woman in this whole scenario even though you were mine first” “I’m not anybody’s Belle. No one owns me” “Well you act like Kirsty does” “Well most of the time she acts like she does so it’s easy to forget sometimes” he told her with a small chuckle. “Why are you with her?” she sighed in an almost whimper. He shrugged, a flash of sadness crossing his face as he did so. “Are we alone?” he asked again and this time she replied without the hint of sarcasm she usually delivered. “Annie’s staying at Geoff and Melody’s for a few days. Strange girl that she is, it’s freaking her out now there’s not a coffin in the living room” “I guess she still felt Irene was here in some way then” Aden suggested delicately. “Yeah I guess” she nodded in concurrence. “What are you doing here Aden? It’s 11pm won’t your wife be missing you?” “She’s asleep, it is a school night after all” he grinned cheekily at her. “Then you better run along hadn’t you? I wouldn’t want you to get a detention” He smirked, his eyes becoming intense as he licked his full lips. “Belle, with what I’ve got in mind I’ll be lucky not to get expelled” “Stop it” she murmured, almost pleading him with a breathy sigh. “Belle, I was lying there next to her and all I could think about was what I was missing, what was right in front of me earlier until I had to go and open that god damn door!” “Aden, we were not going to have sex in that cupboard!” “Who said anything about sex?” he ginned mischievously at her and she felt a surge of blood rush to her face as her cheeks flushed crimson. “I was talking about the book you still had in your hand when you left, it’s a great read apparently” “Reading. Right.” she nodded sarcastically. “Is that what they’re calling it these days?” “I don’t know” he whispered softly, inching his body closer to her until all she had to do was flex her fingers and she’d be touching him. “All I know is, I think we might finally be on the same page” “What if we’re reading different books?” she gulped. “Doesn’t matter” he shrugged casually. “It’s all the same 26 letters, just shuffled around a little bit. The heart’s still the same” “Aden” she sighed, doubting herself as she fought the urge to reach out for him. “I don’t thin-“ “Don’t think Belle” he murmured, lowering his head and catching her lips with his own. And that was all it took for every else to instantly drift away, as her yearning heart took over. A low, breathy moan of desire escaped from her as he tenderly parted her lips with his tongue and bit gently on her lip. Suddenly they were the only two people in the entire world as she snaked her arms around his neck, her fingers grasping the fine hair at the nape of his neck as she pulled him closer to her. She kissed him back fervently, desire and longing oozing out of every pore of her as his fingertips wandered through her loose tresses in soft circles. “Aden” she whispered, tearing her lips from his before lowering them to his neck and scattering a random spray of greedy kisses against his warm, soft skin. His fingers trailed down her cheekbone, before dipping under her chin and allowing him to tenderly lift her face so they were mere centimetres apart and his big blue eyes gazed into hers so intently she felt a surge of electricity rip through her yearning body. His hands framed her face as he stole another kiss. “God I’ve missed you” he whispered against her smooth lips, his blue eyes burning with desire. “I’ve missed you so much” She ran her nails down his back, her fingertips resting on the leather belt looped through the waistband of his jeans. “I missed you too” she told him honestly, her lips concentrating on tenderly sprinkling a string of butterfly kisses along his strong jaw line. “Every single second I was away” He turned his head suddenly so his lips were on hers once more. The kiss intensified swiftly, as their body temperatures soared. His strong hands caressed her body as she wrapped a toned leg around his waist and he lifted her gently onto the counter behind them, his lips not once leaving hers. Her hands wandered over his muscular chest as his lips paid her neck so much attention she briefly wondered if he was going to draw blood before he did that thing with his tongue against her ear that always used to drive her wild and she was groaning in satisfaction, his name slipping over her lips like a lullaby. Her hands speedily ran down his chest in one fluid movement, her hands clawing at the hem of the black t-shirt covering him. She tugged gently and as though a puppet with her controlling his strings he pulled back and lowered his own hands to assist her as they rolled the shirt up over his chest together before she let go and he discarded it with reckless abandon, flinging it into the lounge. “I knew you only wanted me for my body” he teased. “Too right!” she whispered with a cheeky grin, pulling him back towards her and hungrily kissing his perfectly toned abdomen. Her hands still resting against his chest, she returned her lips to his, initiating a passionate kiss once more, He placed his hands tenderly over hers and wrapped them back around his neck. “We can stop” she told him tenderly. “I know it never goes away. You just have to say the word and we’ll stop if you want to. This is enough for me” “Well it’s nowhere near enough for me” he grinned seductively, his lips hovering over hers once more. “Belle, when I’m with you it’s almost as though everything else goes away. Like all there is in the world is...us” “Aden, you had me at “Hey”” she joked playfully. “You can stop the all the smooth talk now” His eyes sparkled, his head tilting back slightly as he chuckled. “I don’t want to stop” he murmured, his lips capturing hers, his hands pulling her forward so there was no longer even a minute gap between them. “Good, because neither do I” she sighed relaxing into their kiss once more. “Never stop” “We should move” he whispered after a few minutes, not fully breaking away from the kiss. “No one’s here” “I know” he laughed. “But from what I remember Irene never did like us making out on her kitchen counters” “Aden” she cursed playfully. “Firstly, making out? What are we 14? And secondly if you’re thinking about Irene right now then I must be doing something seriously wrong!” “Nothing about this is wrong Belle” he told her, his hands suddenly whipping under her thighs before he carefully carried her towards the bedroom, their lips still pressed together. “This is so so right” he whispered as he lowered her onto the bed, her white dress and loose hair flowing out around her as he cupped her face and gently kissed her. “I love you Belle Taylor” “I love you too”
leah1234 Posted January 27, 2009 Report Posted January 27, 2009 mixed reactions???? I loved it it's what i've been waiting for for ages!!!!!!!! i just hope that they can sort out the whole situation so that as few people as possible get hurt the only thing now is that i'm afraid that something is going to happen like kirsty catching them or one of them backing off update soon xxxxx
LAURZY! Posted January 27, 2009 Report Posted January 27, 2009 Oh my word that was good!! the sexual tension wa unreal! I dont know what else to say lol i'm speechless That was so well written, i loved the beginning when Belle was going over things in her head, then obviously the end was just amazing Thanks for that chick, yeah, i have been missing it lol Fantastic update
Taniya_K Posted January 27, 2009 Report Posted January 27, 2009 A full chapter of racyfluff at it's best! I loved it! Brilliant as always, but I'm in split minds about it now! On the one hand - yay! Adelle at last giving in to their sexual tension. But on the other, I don't like the idea of Belle being the 'other' woman. I'm a bit scared that Aden'll go back to Kirsty like nothing's wrong and it'll carry on like that Anyways, I loved the whole thing. Esp the beginning about Friends Thanks for that chapter. It made my day Cannot wait for more!!! xoxo
Louise_2983 Posted January 27, 2009 Report Posted January 27, 2009 mixed reactions???? I loved it it's what i've been waiting for for ages!!!!!!!! Well some people didn't even want them to kiss last chapter!
KaiyaBlake Posted January 27, 2009 Report Posted January 27, 2009 That was a perfect ending! I'm so glad they got back together... EDIT: I'm a d*ck hahaha.. update soon please
jenpen08 Posted January 27, 2009 Report Posted January 27, 2009 Ohhh FABULOUS!!! I know it's wrong but I totally don't care about Kirsty! Oooh Louise you are spoiling us four updates in four days!! Also, the mention of Ross/rachel/ Emily made me chuckle!! Oh yeah thanks for the shout out at the beginning!! Brilliantly written as per usual!! Love it!!
Louise_2983 Posted January 27, 2009 Report Posted January 27, 2009 I'm so glad they got back together... Ahem, don't go getting ahead of yourself there And that wasn't the end
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