rokkafella125 Posted January 25, 2009 Report Posted January 25, 2009 aww that was amazing..... i loved the picture bit.... so sweet kirsty is really bitchy, god give belle a break already! cant wait for more! x
Adelle_fan1000 Posted January 25, 2009 Report Posted January 25, 2009 Ahh thankyou for the update.. He seemed to take it surprisingly well.. he didnt seem confused or anything like that.. But it was a good update.. looking forward to More.. I hope Jaime talks to belle a bit more and starts calling her mummy!
Louise_2983 Posted January 25, 2009 Report Posted January 25, 2009 Ahh thankyou for the update.. He seemed to take it surprisingly well.. he didnt seem confused or anything like that.. Well he already knew and I was trying to portray confusion as well as intrigue over Belle being his mother. I wanted him to be doubtful of her but still wanting to know her. Sorry if that didn't come across for you.
Taniya_K Posted January 25, 2009 Report Posted January 25, 2009 Aw, poor Belle. And Jamie, of course. He broke my heart too I like that he already knew. At least that way he had some time to process it. I loved that he was questioning her, but it was so sad when he asked Aden if he would ever leave. That ending was so sweet. I mean about the picture. The fact that he didn't want Belle to read to him was sad too. Hope things start to get better soon. xoxo
Autumn Song Posted January 25, 2009 Report Posted January 25, 2009 Very good. I liked Belle's comment to Kirsty about the deeds actually being in her own name and I thought the drawing Jamie did with Belle only in the background was very powerful, it summed up how Jamie felt nicely. Well done!
bailey4 Posted January 25, 2009 Report Posted January 25, 2009 Ok i know i said ill stay away until your finished...but i can't help it, this was sooooo good. It was almost heartbreaking, you can almost feel her pain in someway. The ending was just BRILLIANT! I love your writing, big fan .
Red Ranger 1 Posted January 25, 2009 Report Posted January 25, 2009 Like that Jamie already knew.Really liked his conversation with Belle, the way he kept questioning all the details that she didn't have an easy explanation for.And I liked that he didn't feel able to start calling her "mummy" straightaway, it felt realistic.
clara Posted January 25, 2009 Report Posted January 25, 2009 One word ... WOW! It's taken me the best part of a week to plough my way through both Stockholm Syndrome and this sequel... But I love them both... This may just be one of my favourite pieces of writing... Your portrayal of all the characters involved has been so realistic that I can actually visualise the scenes in my head... And, co-incedently, drunk Belle - Genius!! I'm eagerly awaiting the next part Clara
Louise_2983 Posted January 25, 2009 Report Posted January 25, 2009 One word ... WOW! It's taken me the best part of a week to plough my way through both Stockholm Syndrome and this sequel... But I love them both... This may just be one of my favourite pieces of writing... Your portrayal of all the characters involved has been so realistic that I can actually visualise the scenes in my head... And, co-incedently, drunk Belle - Genius!! Thank you! And just as a teaser I'm going to reveal that drunk Belle will be making a reappearance sometime soon!
xknomex Posted January 25, 2009 Report Posted January 25, 2009 ooooo yay!! I LOVE drunk Belle she's sooo funny
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