Louise_2983 Posted January 24, 2009 Report Posted January 24, 2009 Thanks guys I'm personally with Aden in that it's the right thing to tell Jamie and rest assured they will be doing next chapter!
rfran Posted January 24, 2009 Report Posted January 24, 2009 I really enjoyed this chapter thought that the interaction between Belle, Mattie and Drew was well written. Loved the eulogy it was so well put, just a shame that Aden turned it against Belle. Loved Jamie, the interaction is so well written, he makes the most fantastic observation's and comments that only a child could come out with that some of it reminds me of my nephew. I think it was important Aden told Kristy about his childhood, shame he puts so much store by her staying around there married she would have looked selfish if she had run away, interested to see how she deals with the info in the next chapters, that may say more about her reaction than her not leaving.
KaiyaBlake Posted January 24, 2009 Report Posted January 24, 2009 That Chapter made me sad But I still loved the whole Chapterr. Irene's funeral, Aden talking to Belle... I really hope they get back together somehow But the bits with Jamie made me laugh. That kid's so funny and cute Great Chapter. Update sooon please?
xknomex Posted January 25, 2009 Report Posted January 25, 2009 :o How could Aden be so mean at the end?! I'm glad he told Kirsty but he didn't have to be so cold about it it made me sad... Irene's funeral was written so well, loved Belle's speech. Jamie is sooooo cute, he always makes me smile Cant wait for the next update xx
lachsm Posted January 25, 2009 Report Posted January 25, 2009 absobloodylutely fantastic. hmm...... why am i not surprised brilliant so many fan fics burn out quickly 'cos the 2 get together then there is nothing more but with yours you know how to keep the readers enthralled in the story. funeral scene was fantastic. as i said before you would so rock as script writer for home and away love your work
wrongturntaken Posted January 25, 2009 Report Posted January 25, 2009 OMG! I am being totally honest here when i say that i do actually shed at least a tear in every single chapter, you're writing is just so emotive! The eulogy was just one of the saddest things ever but what you made Belle say was so perfect! Jamie was once again the cutest little boy ever with all of his comments, i love his scenes with Belle! Aden telling kirsty about his grandfather was good but i was a little surprised with the way he blurted it out to Belle. Personally i think Aden only did it because it was what he felt seperated Kirsty from Belle, the fact that she knew everything about him because he trusted her. Maybe he thinks if Kirsty knows, then he can have the same feelings for her, but of course it doesn't work that way. As much as i don't like Aden and Belle apart and obviously want them to get back together, the way you are writing it makes it so much more gripping how one second they're giving in and the next its like they hit reality and know they can't do it. I hope somehow love will find a way (to quote a disney sing, lol). Can't wait for the next update! Soon PLEASE!!!!
bailey4 Posted January 25, 2009 Report Posted January 25, 2009 omg i cried!! The bit where Belle is standing near the coffin and then breaks down broke my heart!! I love this i really do...i think ill wait till you finish this whole fan fic, i hate waiting lol...(don't worry its a good thing) .
shortie_689 Posted January 25, 2009 Report Posted January 25, 2009 OH MY GOD!!! I have just all of this, I loved Stockholm Syndrome and this is just as amazing!!! I have cried and laughed... I know its just a story but gosh I hate Kirsty, I hate that she is with Aden and I hate that she wants his child and I hate that she wants Belle to have nothing to do Jamie, goshI hate her on the show and I feel like she is the villain here!!! Aden and Belle belong together her can't do this he can't just separate from her!!! Well I do love this and that funeral seen wow didn't it just rip my heart out and stop around on it, it was soo moving and emotional it was excellent!!! I can't wait for and update, I am silently or not so silently preying for a happily ever after for Belle and Aden and for little Jamie so they can be a family again together and complete!! Keep up the great work!!!
Adelle_fan1000 Posted January 25, 2009 Report Posted January 25, 2009 I loved the Update.. Jamie is just the cutest.. I hope things work out when they Tell Jamie about belle
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