Adelle_fan1000 Posted January 18, 2009 Report Posted January 18, 2009 Awww i loved it!! i hope they do become a family.. would be awesome... Jamie is such a cutie lol
xknomex Posted January 18, 2009 Report Posted January 18, 2009 OMG I LOVED that chapter!!!!! Jamie is soooooooooooooooooooooooo cute! That ending had me in tears! wow xxx
Red Ranger 1 Posted January 18, 2009 Report Posted January 18, 2009 Really, really liked that chapter.Loved the conversation between Aden and Belle at the start and Jamie was so cute.(I've decided not to bother thinking about where Kirsty was.It's kinda irrelevant.) Belle still uses a camera with film in it?What a wonderful traditionalist!
jenpen08 Posted January 18, 2009 Report Posted January 18, 2009 As always, I loved it! The ending was so sad the 'never' part. I do wish they'd be a happy little family but, then it wouldn't be as interesting would it! I agree with everybody else Jamie is soo cute! I particularly like the 'little Jeffries' line sooo cute! But yeah i'm glad they got to be a family for 5 minutes atleast!! Excellently written as always and as per usual, I cannot wait for the next udate Love it!!
Louise_2983 Posted January 18, 2009 Report Posted January 18, 2009 Really, really liked that chapter.Loved the conversation between Aden and Belle at the start and Jamie was so cute.(I've decided not to bother thinking about where Kirsty was.It's kinda irrelevant.) Belle still uses a camera with film in it?What a wonderful traditionalist! Kirsty and Ollie had gone to see her mother in the City, Aden mentioned it in the last chapter when he told Belle she could see Jamie And the camera is meant to be an old one, all the new high tech ones are in LA! Thanks for the lovely comments everyone!
wrongturntaken Posted January 18, 2009 Report Posted January 18, 2009 That ending made me cry! It was so sad and sweet at the same time! I loved the whole chapter, i love that Jamie already loves her, letting her read to him and everything, it was great! More soon please! I can't wait!!! You are such a good writer!!!
Red Ranger 1 Posted January 18, 2009 Report Posted January 18, 2009 Really, really liked that chapter.Loved the conversation between Aden and Belle at the start and Jamie was so cute.(I've decided not to bother thinking about where Kirsty was.It's kinda irrelevant.) Kirsty and Ollie had gone to see her mother in the City, Aden mentioned it in the last chapter when he told Belle she could see Jamie Oh yeah.I've really got to stop making stupid comments, haven't I?Excuse me while I go to the corner and act embarassed.
Louise_2983 Posted January 18, 2009 Report Posted January 18, 2009 I never know whether you're being sarcastic or not lol. But it's an easy thing to miss especially given the length of my chapters! I just wanted to clarify where she was.
Red Ranger 1 Posted January 18, 2009 Report Posted January 18, 2009 No, no problem.I'm grateful for the clarification and am slightly embarassed that, for the second time in this fiction, I've queried something that's already been explained.It's getting late.I'm tired.Still really liking this fic.
bailey4 Posted January 18, 2009 Report Posted January 18, 2009 Man this is one of the most amazing fan fics ive ever read and the most saddest! I love all the emotions of each and every character. The characters you would expect to act a certain way are the complete opposite and i love it. Even through reading this you can feel the emotion and chemistry (sorry for those who hate that word but its true ) of both Aden and Belle, i hope theres a good ending to this...guess we have to wait and see . Keep up the good work, this chapter is by far my favourite.
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