Inactive User Posted January 29, 2009 Report Posted January 29, 2009 Great chapter. Glad Angelo is arrested. Good on Aden for telling the kids everything. Beautiful and well-written! Update soon
Lise Posted January 29, 2009 Report Posted January 29, 2009 I thought I'd commented on this! Angelo is such a langer - it's a terrible situation to imagine; all the kids seeing hteir mum being held like that, and Aden, powerless and helpless to do anything about it ... Ih ope he manages to bring Angelo down in the next chapter! Excellently written - as always! What does langer mean? That was beautiful. Nothing meh about it at all. It was nice to hear Aden explain all of that. I'm happy that Belle is fine and Angelo's going back to prison.
Adelle_fan1000 Posted January 29, 2009 Report Posted January 29, 2009 The way Aden told the kids and then at the end how Mark and Aden hugged was so sad and emotional.. i had tears in my eyes!! very well done Glad Angelo has gone to jail!!!
Zetti Posted January 29, 2009 Report Posted January 29, 2009 Aden's reveal to the kids had me nearly in tears, it was so powerful and emotional. I loved the fact Angelo went to prison Aww and Mark and Aden's hug had to be a great defining moment in their relationship. I think they will be getting closer and closer over the next few weeks Hope you update soon xx
Symphony Posted January 29, 2009 Report Posted January 29, 2009 I thought I'd commented on this! Angelo is such a langer - it's a terrible situation to imagine; all the kids seeing hteir mum being held like that, and Aden, powerless and helpless to do anything about it ... Ih ope he manages to bring Angelo down in the next chapter! Excellently written - as always! What does langer mean? lol, ah sorry, langer is a local irish colloquial slang word meaning - idiot, basically but in a ruder sense, like it's an insult to be called a langer
Taniya_K Posted January 29, 2009 Report Posted January 29, 2009 Another brilliant chapter! I loved the whole thing, esp about Aden's reaction to the fact that he would have to tell the kids and then actually telling them. I'm glad that they understood, although that bit about Tyler at the end has me very intrigued!! I dunno what else to say except it was really really really awesome! Cannot wait for more! xoxo
susanf6230 Posted January 29, 2009 Report Posted January 29, 2009 Once again another great update. You never fail. What is going to happen with Tyler, will Aden meet up with Larry (he is up for parole), will Tess and Tyler get back together, update soon. Love this fic.
saraz Posted January 29, 2009 Report Posted January 29, 2009 great update was tyler acting weird because he was abused by his father and that he wanted his father dead and that he witnessed his father's step son kill him?? is tyler starting to realise that he is like aden when aden was younger? please update soon
Lise Posted January 31, 2009 Report Posted January 31, 2009 I thought I'd commented on this! Angelo is such a langer - it's a terrible situation to imagine; all the kids seeing hteir mum being held like that, and Aden, powerless and helpless to do anything about it ... Ih ope he manages to bring Angelo down in the next chapter! Excellently written - as always! What does langer mean? lol, ah sorry, langer is a local irish colloquial slang word meaning - idiot, basically but in a ruder sense, like it's an insult to be called a langer I thought so! It's interesting to find out what other countries have for slang. Any chance of an update?
wrongturntaken Posted January 31, 2009 Report Posted January 31, 2009 Hopefully before tonight, i'm having a bit of trouble getting myself to write this one, i don't know why it's completely planned out in my head. I have written the one after this though so that update won't take so long! Thanks for asking and thanks for the comments everyone, i'm glad you liked it!
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