jenlee Posted August 14, 2008 Report Posted August 14, 2008 Oh, it's so frustrating, I so want them to get back together yet I'm LOVING all the angst. Another awesome chappy, looking foward to the next
Jody Posted August 14, 2008 Report Posted August 14, 2008 Another great chapter. As much as I didn't like how Justin exploded at Aden like that because it hurt him it was a lovely scene and I wouldn't have expected him to react any other way. It was very realistic. I like that he softened when he heard Aden say he loved her. I think I am going to like his character alot. I hope he sticks around. As for Belle, I wonder what is the real reason she left him because there is, so happy about that. Now I can continue to love her and not be angry at her for breaking Aden's heart. All we know so is that whatever it is could put her in danger. But why Angelo, Belle. I liked Angelo but as long as he isn't with Belle. But it would be nice to see a nice confrontation between Belle/Aden/Angelo. And considering Aden doesn't want to play nice with Belle and pretend like he is fine that would make for a nice scene between the three. The nutcase that I'm in love with. Aww! Aden, you are such a romantic.
wrongturntaken Posted August 14, 2008 Report Posted August 14, 2008 Great work again, loved what you did with Justin! I can really see the scenes playing out in my mind with the way you've written them.
adelle Posted August 14, 2008 Report Posted August 14, 2008 Great chapter!! Can't wait til they get back together... :wink:
whispered_envy Posted August 14, 2008 Report Posted August 14, 2008 Thanks guys! I've just realised that after tomorrow I probably won't be able to update for two whole weeks (my boyfriend's got some time off work and seeing I'll be living at his house I won't have time to write), so I'll try my best to get the fourth chapter up tomorrow, which will leave you all hanging on at crucial point in the story...because I'm evil like that.
jenlee Posted August 14, 2008 Report Posted August 14, 2008 How dare you take time away from writing you fic to spend time with you boyfriend?? Just kidding Have a great time living with you boyfriend ooohh
matticus01 Posted August 14, 2008 Report Posted August 14, 2008 Amazing . . . Pure amazing . . . I'm speachless for words, seriously. everything was so perfect Keep it up and have fun with your boyfriend ;)
Zetti Posted August 14, 2008 Report Posted August 14, 2008 That was awesomely written! I love the way you have included Justin but dont make Belle upset
adelle fan. Posted August 14, 2008 Report Posted August 14, 2008 Awww that was sad poor aden can't wait to read more.
jessica_2005 Posted August 14, 2008 Report Posted August 14, 2008 Awwww. Sad. But beautifully written. Loved the last line. A nutcase that im in love with. AWwwwww. Cant wait for moreee. Love Jess xoxo
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