standbyme Posted February 21, 2008 Report Posted February 21, 2008 CHAPTER 20 Niel was sitting on the couch watching tv when heard a knock at the door. He sighed "God sake" he said quietly as he opened it. He was pushed back against the wall with a hand over his mouth. "Ssssshhhhh" a mans voice said "Hey, it's ok, just promise me you scream or make any noise for that matter" Sean said "Get off me" "Hey, do you want me to hurt that opathetic excuse of a girlfriend you have?" "I'll do what you want, just don't hurt her" Niel replied scared "Anything, well kiss me then" Sean replied "Ok" Niel agreed shaking "Like you mean it" Sean said as Niel nodded Sean brushed his thumb against Niel's bottom lips and Niel parted his lips still shaking and then Sean stuck his thumb in Niel's mouth and Niel sucked on it and Sean smiled. "Enough" Niel said pulling away. "C'mon ya comin with me, c'mon let's go pack ya thing now" Sean said pushing Niel into his room. CHAPTER 21 UP SOON
standbyme Posted February 22, 2008 Report Posted February 22, 2008 CHAPTER 21 Niel bags were packed, and he went to walk out the door with Sean behind him. "Wait" Sean said pulling Niel back in the door "Leave a note for ya perants, tell 'em ya needed to leave town for a few days" Niel sttod there "NOW" Sean demanded Niel got out a pen and paper and wrote "Hey guyS i'M just lEAving towN for a few dAys, juSt nEed to get away." he highlighted letters to spell "SEAN HAS ME" Ok, but this is stupid, the're gonna wnder why" "No they wont, now c'mon" Sean said pulling out the door and into the car. CHAPTER 22 UP SOON
standbyme Posted March 4, 2008 Report Posted March 4, 2008 CHAPTER 22 "Where are we going?" Niel asked "You'll see when we get there" Sean replied "You don't seem very excited" Sean started another topic. "I'm thrilled" Niel replied "Yeah, real thrilled" "Well forgive me for not enjoying the company of the guy who forced himself on me for years" "Well i just thought maybe you'd get to like me". "I never like you" "Oh yeah, then why did you used to moan my name all the time i supposedly raped you" "I didin't" "You did and you know it" They pulled at a petrol sation. "Don't try anything stupied" Sean said as he got out of the car CHAPTER 23 UP SOON
standbyme Posted March 5, 2008 Report Posted March 5, 2008 CHAPTER 22 Niel sat there silently in the car and finally took deep breath and wound the window down "I need to go to the toilet" he told Sean "No" Sean replied "Well tell me which part of your seat you want me to **** on" Niel said sarcasticly "Fine, but i'll be watching" He walked into the toilet and locked the door. "Ok" he whispered to himself and thn climbed up and looked out the back toilet window to Sean standing there. he smiled and stepped down slowly and quietly and quietly unlocked the door and then made a run for it as fast as he could running through the bush, jumping over logs until finally falling down a bank with old barb wire and glass he layed there a minute in pain and then noticed glass just above his right knee cap but that wasn't what was hurting he looked down to see barb wire almost in the middle of his stomach which had entered through his left side. H tried to pulled it out but screamed in pain instead he rolled over to see car lights coming from the road and slowly got up limp toward the road grunting in pain. CHAPTER 23 UP SOON
standbyme Posted March 6, 2008 Report Posted March 6, 2008 CHAPTER 23 "God you're lucky that car stopped, otherwise you might still be there" Frankie said putting her rm around her son. "Yeah well" Niel went to say something but was interupted by Sam "I'm gonna have to get this out" she said refering to the barb wire. "Does it hurt" Sam said inspecting it lokking for a way to get it out "What did you do?" Frankie asked "I fell in a junk hole i think, there was glass, wood, nails and that" Niel told her He suddenly let out a loud scream in pain "YOU F*****G STUPID BITCH" Niel scream and yelled at and then continued to cry in pain "Anticipation's the worst pat i thought i would spare you " she paid as she put a towel on the wound to stop the bleeding. "That's goona need stitching. I'll be back in a minute". Sam said walking out the room "You've got an enemy" Niel said to Frankie "Are you really pregnany" "Yes" Niel looked at her "Don't give me that look, you're father was looking for another reason to leave us and now he has one" "So he's gone" "Yeah, Niel he doesn't care about us he never did. At least Jack does" CHAPTER 24 UP SOON
standbyme Posted March 12, 2008 Report Posted March 12, 2008 CHAPTER 24 Niel stood at the shore line looking out into the ocean. "Hey" Cassie said coming up behind him and wrapping her arms around him and flinch "Aaagghh" he said "Sorry, it's just i miss you. You've been so distant lately" Cassie said and Niel shrugged Cassies hand of his shoulder and didn't reply. "I wanna help you through this" "Cassie **** off, i don't like you i never have..." "Niel" Cassie was confused "Don't you get it?" "Get what" she asked "To me you've always just been eye candy so go leave now i don't want you near me" Niel shouted at her Cassie stood there staring "Cassie this is the bit where i call you a two face slag who been pretending to care about me you've just been trying to get into my pants the you start to cry maybe slap me in the face and then run off to all your friend and tell 'em what an a*****e i've been making them hate me. So lets skip to the end so go now" CHAPTER 25 UP SOON
standbyme Posted March 19, 2008 Report Posted March 19, 2008 CHAPTER 25 Niel was standing at his locker when he heard a female voice. "Hi, you're Niel right" she said smiling she was a blonde slatty sassy girl around Niel age. "Yeah" he replied "I'm Briony" she said still smiling while also throwing herself at him. "I know who you are and i'm not interested" "I can read you, so i know you are interested" she said as he went to walk away "Yeah, what do you know about me" "Well appearence is decieving, you try to act mean and shallow on the outside when you're really very sensitive. You mother is somewhat famous in America where you came from, i'm guessing a model or something like that, but she wasn't always like that, i'm guessing until you were about 12 you were trailer park trash". He looked at her and smiled. "Alright, by the way you dress and hangaround your friends, i'm think you wern't popular 'til the 7th grade and that was due to a large sum of money. Which means you're popular because of someone else and you're in their shadow, and seeing your first thought of me ran to trailer park trash, i'd say that's what you used to be". She stepped forward. "Oh you were" "I wanna kiss you" she said moving closer to him as he backed up leaving him cornered He sighed "You do realize i have a girlfriend" "Ah yes Cassie, she said you broke up" "What?" "She said you told her you didn't love her and to **** off" "I didn't mean it i was just angry at someone el..." He smiled an so did she "Ok you can kiss" "Great" she whispered "But only for 51 seconds" he told her "That's fine" "So you're not gonna try and continue when i pull the plug in 51 seconds" "No" she said "good" he said as she kissed him. CHAPTER 26 UP SOON
standbyme Posted March 19, 2008 Report Posted March 19, 2008 CHAPTER 26 Briony walked into the surf club to see Cassie and Belle sitting talking. "Hey girls, i'm looking for Niel have you girls see him by any chance?" she asked "No" Belle said "Why are you looking for Niel?" Cassie asked" "Oh didn't you hear, we're together now" Briony answered Cassie's question while rubbing it in. "You and Niel?" Belle said frowning "You are so not his type" Cassie told Briony "really and you are, hey it's not my fault you two broke up and he's moved on with me and you're still inlove with him" Briony said smiling at Cassie Cassie sat back and took a deep breath "Ask him about Sean, see if he tells you about him, then we'll see who he likes more" Cassie said as she smiled back CHAPTER 27 UP SOON
standbyme Posted March 19, 2008 Report Posted March 19, 2008 CHAPTER 27 Briony stood in her doorway watching Niel looking at photos of her. "Hey" she said "Oh hey this is so cute can i have it" he said "How'd ya get in" "Ya dad let me in, he's out the back, never knew you were so nerdy, those square eyed glasses really suit you". She ran to grab the photo off him. "No you can't have that" she said snatching and knocking him on the groundand then rolling on top of him, she kissed him "Hey can i ask you something?" Briony asked "Yeah sure" "Who's Sean?" Niel was shock to hear her say that and then chills went down her spine. "Who told you about Sean?" Niel asked "No one Cassie told me to as..." "Where was she?" "The surf club" Niel stormed out with fierce eyes and Briony followed. "Sean was my mums stylist" he told her "And why are you so upset" she asked him "He raped me many times" "I am so sorry, i wouldn't have asked if knew it was this serious" "Not your fault" They were about to walk into the surf club where Briony saw Cassie. "There she is" Briony said pointing "CASSIE" Niel shouted "Where the f*** do you get off telling Briony about Sean" he screamed at her. "Sorry i just wanted to know if you would tell her or not" Cassie said "Well i did, i told her everything" "Cassie started to cry "I'm sorry if i knew it would upset you i would never have anything" "I don't wanna see you ever again Cassie, you're a pathetic bitch" he shouted at her CHAPTER 28 UP SOON
standbyme Posted March 20, 2008 Report Posted March 20, 2008 CHAPTER 28 Niel was sitting in class when the bell rang and everyone got up. "Hey Melody" Niel said reaching out and grabbing her hand "Ah can i help you" she replied shaking his hand off hers "I need help with this. Can you help please?" he asked her She looked at him and he made a sad puppy dod face "Of course i will" she said as she sat down. "I didn't think you would know who i was" she said as she sat down "Do you really think i'm that shallow?" he replied "You are dating Briony Scott" He smiled "So what do you need help with?" "This whole thing" "Well why did you decide to do it on your own, you can do it in pairs you know" she told him "Helps for someone to like you for that to happen" he replied "Niel" Briony ibterupted as she walked in "Hey you know Melody don't you" Niel said "Sort of, we have science together" Briony replied "She pairing up with me for this stupid project we have to do on how the devil was create". "Cool, can i help?" "Sure i was just gonna go anyway" Melody said almost running out "Don't lea..." Niel called to her CHAPTER 29 UP SOON
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