In The City (by Oxidizer) - comments

[swfc]

Nice... Lol... Somehow, I can never forget MOTC. That's how much I love it. When you say another oneshot/re-write, you mean on MOTC or what? *confused*

[Oxidizer]

Hee. That's good to know. So it made an impression then?

I'll re-write MOTC as a oneshot sometime. I gotta remember the characters though:

Nina Rhodes, Carl Olsen, Samara Zurhellen, Lennox Jones, Connie Laslett, Sonja Oyama, Benjamin Ramsey? I think that's their surnames anyway..

[swfc]

I think you know the answer to that question of whether or not it's obvious, Andy.

Don't ask me about the names coz I can't remember them either.

[Oxidizer]

You're so right.

[Sarah_Lewis]

Ok i may sound dumb LOL but what does MOTC mean?? lol bleh anyways awesome chapter is there going to be more??

[Oxidizer]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it but that was the last part. The trilogy's complete now.

MOTC stands for a fic. I did in October called Mistress of the Club. I don't think it's on BTTB anymore but you can find it here (be warned; those are my early stories, hence the crapness).

[Sarah_Lewis]

LOL Andy it wasn't crap at all!! it was frikken good =]]] daaaaahaaaaaaaa =]] awesomeness!! Ok emma shush it!!

Anyways love this fic =]] your a good writer

[Oxidizer]

Thanks!

I'm trying to improve my writing. My descriptive phrases are getting too repetitive.