Sally_Fletcher Posted May 2, 2007 Report Posted May 2, 2007 Thanks for the feedback guys... here's the next update. FLETCHER HOUSE Matilda and Cassie storm in. Brad and Sally look up from where they are sitting on the couch. MATILDA; Brad... BRAD: What's wrong, what happened? CASSIE: Johnny's gang... they're in town. Brad stands up, looking horrified. BRAD; What? CASSIE: We saw Johnny talking to one of the guys... You've got to do something, Brad, they're planning something. BRAD: I can't. MATILDA: What do you mean you can't? You have to, Kayla is your daughter! BRAD; She;s never going to believe me. SALLY: But... she might believe you two... MATILDA: Are you saying we have to go and talk to her? Sally nods. SALLY: It might make her see what's going on. Cassie and Mattie nod before running out again. JOHNNY AND KAYLA'S PLACE. There is furious knocking on the door. Kayla opens up. KAYLA: Hey guys! What are you doing here? MATILDA: Kayla, is Johnny home? KAYLA: No, he went out to buy us dinner. I fell asleep, but he called me so that I wouldn't worry. Isn't that the sweetest... She sees Cassie and Mattie sharing a look and frowns. KAYLA: What's going on? MATILDA: Kayla... you know about the gang, right? KAYLA: Yes, Johnny's told me everything. MATILDA: Including the fact that the gang is in the Bay? KAYLA: What are you talking about? MATILDA: We saw Johnny talking to one of the gang members, Kayla. KAYLA: No... there has to be an explanation. Johnny wouldn't go back to them... Are you sure it was a gang member? CASSIE: Yes. KAYLA: Well I'll ask him about it when he gets back. CASSIE: I don't know whether that's a good idea. KAYLA: Why wouldn't it be? CASSIE: He could be dangerous! KAYLA: I think you should leave now. MATILDA: Kayla, just listen to us... JOHNNY: Hey ladies. Cassie and Matilda turn around to see Johnny standing behind them. JOHNNY: If you told me we were having friends over, I would have bought more food. KAYLA: They were just leaving. I'll see you later guys. Cassie and Mattie leave, defeated. Kayla looks at Johnny with a light frown. FLETCHER HOUSE MATTIE: I think we were getting through to her. Until Johnny arrived. Cas, do you think she told him? CASSIE: I don't know. Oh, I wish things could be different! Poor Kayla. SALLY: Well, you did what you could. Now we have to let her come to us. BRAD: Yeah, but who knows how long that's going to take. I don't understand the hold he has over her! SALLY: Neither do I, but it's a strong hold. And if we try forcing her to let go of him, we're just going to push her away. BRAD; But he's gang is here. Surely she realizes what that means? CASSIE: I don't think she does. She trusts him. They all sigh. JOHNNY AND KAYLA'S PLACE. Kayla is asleep in the bed. Johnny is lying next to her. He softly gets up and picks up his phone. He exits the house and dials a number. JOHNNY: Sam. It's me. We've got a problem. Kayla knows you're here. No, not yet. I have a plan. Meet me on the beach tomorrow morning at six. Great. See you.
Roccoluver Posted May 2, 2007 Report Posted May 2, 2007 yay, Awesome update. Poor Kayla, surely Johnny won't go though with what he's thinking of doing.
sazcaz89 Posted May 3, 2007 Report Posted May 3, 2007 Love it! I hope Johnny doesnt continue with his plan. update soon
*~Abi~* Posted May 5, 2007 Report Posted May 5, 2007 oooh qhats johnny got planned for Kayla, hopefully she will see sense soon fab add hun
Sally_Fletcher Posted May 7, 2007 Report Posted May 7, 2007 Thanks for the feedback... another update for you. JOHNNY AND KAYLA'S PLACE Kayla wakes up to an empty room. She frowns and sits up. KAYLA: Johnny? She stands up and quietly walks to the kitchen. Johnny isn't there either and his cell phone is lying on the counter. She picks it up and looks at the door before checking the inbox. The only messages there are from her and she frowns. She puts the phone back on the counter and goes into her room again. FLETCHER HOUSE Rocco, Brad and Sally are sitting at the table. ROCCO: I'm worried about her. Johnny's never done something like this before, there's just no telling of what he'll do... BRAD: I just wish there was a way of finding out... my daughter is in danger and I can't do anything about it. I feel so helpless. ROCCO: Maybe I should act like I want to be in the gang again... then I'll have a way of finding out what he's planning. Sally shakes her head furiously. SALLY: No way, Rocco, he might want you to prove it... It's too dangerous, it's not going to help. Brad nods. BRAD: Sal's right, Rocco. There'll be another way. We just have to figure out what it is. ON THE BEACH. Kayla is walking on the beach alone, frowing. She hears someone moaning in pain and swings around. KAYLA: Hello? Hello, is someone there? There's a soft moan again and Kayla walks in the direction of the sounds. KAYLA: Johnny! She rushes to Johnny who is lying on the ground in pain, badly beaten up. She sits down next to him and takes his hand. KAYLA: Johnny, what happened? He looks at her, grinding on his teeth while trying to sit up. JOHNNY: The... gang. Back. Kayla sits down next to him, carefully trying to dust some sand off his arm. KAYLA: Oh, I can't believe this. Everything's going to be all right, Johnny... In the distance, Sam looks at them with a satisfied smile before turning around and leaving. FLETCHER HOUSE. Sally, Brad, Lucas, Cassie, Rocco and Jane are sitting in the living room. Jane's cell phone rings. JANE: Excuse me... Answers the phone. Jane speaking... What? No, I'm coming... She puts the phone down, tears forming in her eyes. It was the hospital... they need me to come right away... It's mum. IN HOSPITAL. Rachel is standing behind the counter when Jane enters, followed by Rocco and Sally. RACHEL: You're still in time. She wants to see you. Jane rushes into her mother's room and takes her hand. JANE: Mum! ABBIE: Hey sweetie. JANE: You're going to be all right, aren't you? You are... you promised me that everything will be okay... ABBIE: Jane, I'm sorry... JANE: Mum... ABBIE: You are... the best thing... that's ever happened to me. You're my daughter... no matter what... blood says. You're my daughter and I love you. More than anything. JANE: I can't lose you, mum... ABBIE: You... you're stronger... than you give yourself credit for. And you have Rocco... don't push him away. Jane starts crying, hugging her mum. Abbie sighs and squeezes her hand. ABBIE: I... want to... talk to Miss Fletcher. Jane nods and kisses her mother before leaving the room. She motions to Sally to go in before breaking down in Rocco's arms.
Roccoluver Posted May 7, 2007 Report Posted May 7, 2007 Poor Johnny, is he just acting or is something not right going on... Poor Jane and Abbi. Yay Rocco's there for her.
sazcaz89 Posted May 7, 2007 Report Posted May 7, 2007 That was so cute. Abby and jane :crying: update soon
*~Abi~* Posted May 7, 2007 Report Posted May 7, 2007 I wonder what Abbie will say to Sal?? I wonder if Johnny;s beating is genuine wicked add hun love abi xx
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