sazcaz89 Posted April 19, 2007 Report Posted April 19, 2007 Loved it! I have a feeling Johnny is up to something and I am sure Brad wil get Kayla back. Please update soon
Roccoluver Posted April 19, 2007 Report Posted April 19, 2007 Silly Brad, how did he think that would work? Great update love it.
*~Abi~* Posted April 21, 2007 Report Posted April 21, 2007 Kayla will soon come running back when Johnny shows his true colours he wont be able to stop himself bless cas and luc they make a sweet couple wicked add hun
clarky24 Posted April 22, 2007 Report Posted April 22, 2007 I think Brad needs to back off otherwise he is going to drive Kayla further away. She will find out what Johnny is like soon enough and he should be there for her when this happens. Thats awesome that Martha is pregnant. Jack, Martha and baby will be such a cute family.
Sally_Fletcher Posted April 24, 2007 Report Posted April 24, 2007 Thanks for the feedback everyone! Here is the next update: FLETCHER HOUSE Brad is lying on his and Sally's bed, staring at the ceiling. Sally is lying next to him, her head on his chest. BRAD: I'm an idiot. You warned me. SALLY: All parents make mistakes, Brad. BRAD; Not ones like these. I've ruined everything. SALLY: Look, Johnny's true colours will show sooner or later and then Kayla will realize you were right. You won't lose her, Johnny. BRAD: What if I already did? She sighs and kisses him. He holds her and closes his eyes sadly. ON THE BEACH Johnny, Sam, Kevin, Richard and Tom are sitting on the beach. SAM: So how are things with Armstrong's daugter? JOHNNY: Laughs Great... she really fell for my second chance act. SAM: So what's your plan? JOHNNY: First I just wanted to get back at Armstrong. I thought turning his daughter against him was enough. SAM: But? JOHNNY: I could use her to ruin him. I just have to figure out how... TOM: Yeah, shouldn't you be getting back to girlfriend? JOHNNY: She was asleep when I left. I'll just tell her I went out to get us dinner at the diner. SAM: You gotta keep this real, Johnny. If she starts suspecting anything... JOHNNY: She won't. Love is blind. He laughs and walks to the diner. SAM: Smirks at the rest of the gang. I almost feel sorry for the girl. HOLDEN/HUNTER HOUSE JACK: I still can't believe I'm going to be a dad. What are we going to name him? MARTHA: Him? What if it's a girl? JACK: No way! It's going to be a boy, I'm a Holden. MARTHA: You are so confident! I want it to be a girl. JACK: But it's going to be a boy. So what are we going to name him? MARTHA: I don't know, but family names are out. Maybe we should just wait until she's here and then decide. JACK: You're right. As always. They kiss. AT THE HOSPITAL Jane is sitting next to her mother, holding her hand. ABBIE; How are things? JANE: Good. I've made a lot of friends. I've been doing well in school. ABBIE: That's great love. JANE: So when are you getting out of here. Abbie takes Jane's hand and sighs. JANE: What's wrong? ABBIE: I don't know if I am, Jane. ON THE BEACH Lucas, Cassie, Mattie and Ric are lying on the beach. RIC: Want to take a surf, mate? LUCAS: Sure. They run to the water. Cassie and Mattie look at each other and smile. CASSIE: I can't believe this is happening. It feels so unreal. MATTIE: But isn't it great? CASSIE: Yes! It's amazing. MATTIE: Everything is so great... it's almost like it's too good to be true. CASSIE: Yeah, that scares me a little. I just wish Kayla would catch a wake-up. MATTIE: Me too. Johnny is no good, everyone can see that. CASSIE: Want to go to the diner and grab an OJ while the boys are swimming? MATTIE: Sure, why not? They get up and go into the diner. Johnny is at the counter, talking to Leah. JOHNNY: And two pieces of chocolate cake too. Thanks. Leah gives it to him and he smiles. JOHNNY; Thanks. He turns around and sees Mattie and Cassie. JOHNNY: Hey girls. I would invite you over, but this is for my girlfriend. Sorry to dissapoint you - like they say, all the good ones are taken, eh? CASSIE: There is nothing good about you. JOHNNY: Hey didn't you have a thing with my little brother? CASSIE: Come on. Mattie. Let's leave, the air is getting dirty around here. Mattie and Cassie leaves and Johnny laughs. MATTIE: That guy has some serious issues. CASSIE: Tell me about it. MATTIE: There must be something we can do. CASSIE: Like what? They walk past Sam who lifts his arm to wave at them. SAM: Hey babes! Wanna come over to my place? Mattie grabs Cassie's arm. MATTIE: Did you see that? CASSIE: What? MATTIE: That guy... CASSIE: You mean the one who looks like an overgrown ape? MATTIE; Yes. He's got one of those gang tattoo's. They turn to look at Sam. Johnny comes out of the diner. He walks to Sam and they talk. Mattie and Cassie look at each other, frowning. MATTIE: No way... CASSIE: The gang is here? MATTIE: We've got to tell Brad... They start running towards the Fletcher house.
Roccoluver Posted April 24, 2007 Report Posted April 24, 2007 No Johnny you silly boy, leave the gang and be a badass non gang leader, poor Kayla. and poor Jane. Its got to be a boy holden maybe they could have twins. Lol Run Mattie Run. Great update
Sally_Fletcher Posted April 24, 2007 Report Posted April 24, 2007 Anyone want to suggest names for Baby Holden? It would be appreciated... I don't know whether it's going to be a boy or a girl yet... Thanks Jane.
sazcaz89 Posted April 24, 2007 Report Posted April 24, 2007 Loved it! I wonder what JOhnny is going to do. I feel so sorry for Kayla. update soon
*~Abi~* Posted April 25, 2007 Report Posted April 25, 2007 oh dear the gang have arrived in the bay hope Brad tells the cops so they ca make sure they dont break the law,,,, too much, after all they are bound to have somehting dodgey planned greta add hun
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