amz89 Posted June 14, 2007 Report Posted June 14, 2007 Just read the whole thing loving the story well done. I like J&M storys when they were kids lol.
baby gurl Posted June 20, 2007 Report Posted June 20, 2007 Thanks for all the great and funny comments Here it is: The Bitch fight ___ "Come on M" Jack begged. "Jack." Martha sighed. "I wasn't even invited." She said adding "It would be pretty rude too." "What would be rude?" Tony asked as he and Lilly's dad Carl walked into the living room. "Nothing." Martha laughed. "Its only Jack being...Jack." "Actually." Jack began. "Carl do you mind if Martha comes to the Barbeque tonight?" Jack asked seeing from the corner of his eye Martha going red and out of the other his dad giving the 'stop being so rude' look. But Carl didn't seem to mind. "Course not." He laughed. "The more the merrier." "Thanks." Jack said. "No probs. Now come on Tony lets go look at those sausages he said leading Tony into the kitchen." As soon as they were gone it was martha's turn to talk. "What the f**k was that?" "What do'ya mean?" Jack asked confused. "Well asking Carl about the barbeque." "Well does it matter?" But before Martha could answer Jack cut in. "Now stop moaning and lets go out somewhere." ___ "Who the f**k are you?" Lilly asked wrinkling her nose a little. "Feisty or what?" She thought to herself. "I'm the girl you so admire." Martha replied. "Two can play at this game." She thought. "Excuse me?" She asked bluntly. "Oh you know when you were in my boyfriend's bedroom looking at the photo of us...Saying how pretty I am...But you know you shouldn't really say these things people might get the wrong idea about you...Thinking that your a...well you know." Martha laughed. "Talking about boyfriends. I rather not have a boyfriend than have one that thinks he can date two girls." "Whats that suppose to mean?" "Your loving boyfriend. He did something unimaginable." "Well why don't you tell me before I rip all that pretty blonde hair of yours out." Martha gritted. "Alright." Lilly smiled. "He kissed me last night." Lilly smugged. ____ Please comment. I was going to put two chapters together but I thought I should split it into two xxx
beckyboo Posted June 20, 2007 Report Posted June 20, 2007 Erm Jack didt kiss her! Erm You cant just leave it there! Update now!
vale4eva Posted June 20, 2007 Report Posted June 20, 2007 Great two chapters. Now I really dont like Lilly Hope Martha lets Jack explain first before her biting his head off More please
Sam =) Posted June 21, 2007 Report Posted June 21, 2007 What Jack would never do that and Martha knows that she wont believe Lily. Damn Lily
Tasha Posted June 21, 2007 Report Posted June 21, 2007 I kill Jack, and i kill Lilly Poor Martha baby More please
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