baby gurl Posted May 12, 2007 Report Posted May 12, 2007 Update will be either tonight or tomorrow...xx
baby gurl Posted June 5, 2007 Report Posted June 5, 2007 ^ Obviously that didn't go to plan! Sorry-I've explained in the other fic. Hopefully more frequent updates xx Enjoy... __ "Hey whats wrong?" Kelli asked me. "Its Jack. He sent me a text earlier telling me about grandads birthday. Guess what?" "What?" "Thats what he said. Guess what. Its really fustraiting!" She whined. "i'm sure all will be revealed," Kelli smiled. Martha looked over at her step mother. She knew Kelli knows something and she was going to find out. ____ Knock knock. "Come in." Jack sighed. He then saw his dad entering with an angry look on his face. "Whats wrong?" "Well why don't you tell me whats wrong with Lilly? WHy the hell was she so upset leaving?! "I don't know." Jack shrugged. "Don't shrug at me. Now look, I know your upset about Martha but..." "Upset!" Jack exclaimed. "If you knew I was upset you wouldn't have bough us all to America. You don't give a f*** about any of us. All you and muum care about are each other. You don't care if we're not happy, we just have to go along with it for you. Well I'm sick of it. We all are. Me, Luc and Frankie." "Firstly, what have I told you about swearing? Secondly how can you say that we odn't care about you guys and that we only care about ourselves? We thought this was a great oppertunity." "Oppertunity?" Jack scoffed. "For who?" Jack asked sarcasticly. "Oh yeah I remembered. Mum." "This is not up for discussion. Now I came to tell you that Lilly's parents have invited us all round for a barbeque tomorrow evening. And we're going. All of us. Including you." __ "Oh my god, we're going to America?" Martha exclaimed. "Thought that'd make you happy." Her grandad laughed. "I though it's my 60th birthday, why not go away? And then I thought of America and you and Jack." "Oh grandad thank you! Thank you!" Martha laughed as hugged her grandad. "Come on you better get packing. Flight leaves tonight." __________ Please comment. xx
vale4eva Posted June 5, 2007 Report Posted June 5, 2007 Yay, an update. Jacks wicked in this Bless Martha, shes so adorable Im slightly concerned about the barbaque, I hope nothing happens between Lilly and Jack (even though he hates her lol) Update soon (and when I say soon, I mean, sooner than 6 months )
beckyboo Posted June 5, 2007 Report Posted June 5, 2007 Yay there going to US Maybe Martha can live with Roo Update soon xxxxxx
Tasha Posted June 5, 2007 Report Posted June 5, 2007 Ooo...Martha will go to America and see Jacky kissing Lilly, unless Jacky knows that Martha is going. Great chapter More please
Sam =) Posted June 6, 2007 Report Posted June 6, 2007 Martha's going to see him. I will kill Lily if she ruins thing fror them. And I hope Jack hasn't planed to sneak off and go see Martha and she gets there can Jack isn't. Update soon so I can relax
baby gurl Posted June 8, 2007 Report Posted June 8, 2007 Yay, an update. Jacks wicked in this Bless Martha, shes so adorable Im slightly concerned about the barbaque, I hope nothing happens between Lilly and Jack (even though he hates her lol) Update soon (and when I say soon, I mean, sooner than 6 months 6 months?! It wasn't that long Martha's going to see him. I will kill Lily if she ruins thing fror them. And I hope Jack hasn't planed to sneak off and go see Martha and she gets there can Jack isn't. Update soon so I can relax I thought you would have said that you would have killed me! Thanks for the comments everyone and what do we know? an update! Enjoy __ New York airport "Wow the airport's so posh." Martha exclaimed. "Nothing like Australia's." "Yes. The American's have done well for themselves." Her grandad said giving out a little laugh. "So are we staying with Jack?" Martha asked hopefull. She had wanted to ask her grandad for the whole of the flight but she thought she'd wait. "No love, we're staying with you auntie Roo." He told her. "That way we can spend some time with her as well as seeing the Holdens'. Martha nodded. But as she did this she saw a familiar face. "Martha, where are you going?" Her grandad called. But Martha was too busy to be running to hear her grandad. Alf sighed as he followed her. ___ "So this is where you were going?" Alf laughed as he walked up to the Holdens and Martha. "Good day Alf." Tony smiled as he shook Alf's hand. Alf nodded as he returned the the handshake. "Well lets go." Kate said as she lead everyone out of the air port. _ "I missed you so much." Martha smiled as Jack put her arm around her. "I missed you more. I've going crazy with out you." He said laughing. "Dad kept shouting at me to stop moping about. Lilly kept coming around and pestering me until one day I flipped! She kept asking questions about you and thats when I got so angry at her that I couldn't take it any more. Then me and dad had an argument." Jack explained. "I think she likes you." Martha laughed. "Have you both been talking?" "No. I got to go to her parents stupid barbeques tonight." He sighed. "Well have fun." Martha laughed at Jack's faciel expression. ____ Basically that was the first part to the chapter...It was extremely boring and nothing happened in it. Next part is much better alot happening between J/M and Lilly/Martha (a fight) xxxx
beckyboo Posted June 8, 2007 Report Posted June 8, 2007 Lilly/Martha (a fight) Omg there back in each others arms Lily and Martha fight With Martha winning!!!!!! xxxxx
Sam =) Posted June 8, 2007 Report Posted June 8, 2007 But you can't leave it there, we need the next part now. I can't wait to see Martha fight Lily. And our airports are just as good as the Americans there is no differance. Update soon
Zetti Posted June 8, 2007 Report Posted June 8, 2007 Fighttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt Only kidding. JM Glad you updated. Now update again
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