baby gurl Posted April 4, 2007 Report Posted April 4, 2007 Thanks Zetti, Rachel, Tasha, Becky and Elaine (I think thats your name) Chapter 4 JACK "Jack, someone's at the door for you." I heard dad shout. I guess my letter to Martha will have to wait. "Coming." I reply as I put miy letter into my desk drawer. As I walk down the stairs I see Lilly waiting at the bottom of the stairs. Great. "Hey Jack." She greets me. "Oh, uh hey Lilly." I say trying to be nice. There was an awkward silence between us both. "Jack, don't be so rude." I hear mum call from the sitting room. "Why don't you take Lilly to your bedroom?" She suggests. Thanks mum. "Sure. This way." I say as I walk back upstairs, letting Lilly follow me. -x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x- "Nice room." Lilly comments. Whats so nice about it? Its an average size room, painted blue walls and laminated floors. "Thanks." I say as I sit on my bed. "Who's this?" She askes. I turn to see her holding a picture of Martha and I on the beach. "Thats my girlfriend." I say emphasising the word girlfriend. "She's pretty." She comments. Pretty? She's dam right gorgeous! "Yeah she is." "How old is she?" "15." I reply. Whats with all the bloody questions? "Whats she like?" Thats it. "Whats with all the bloody questions? Why are you so dam interested in my girlfriend?" I shout. "I was only being friendly." She said in a small voice. "Well don't!" "If you don't want any friends here then fine..." She started. "No, I don't 'coz in 6 months I'll be out of here." "Fine." She said as she stomped to the door. -------- MARTHA Its been a couple of days since Jack's last letter and things are starting to change. Kelli's been trying and so has Ellie. She's been well less...bratty. But me and dad are still having arguments. He keeps telling me stop moping around the house. I've nearly finished my letter to Jack: Dear Jack, I'm fine thanks, how are you? Hows America? Bet its not as fun as Summer Bay! Haha. Glad your mum's job's going good...your right at least someone's happy. Guess what!? Kelli and Ellie have now changed. Kelli now treats me as her daughter and not as her step daughter. Ellie's not being such a bit** either! Makes a change! Lol... So I'm not the only crazy girl to love Jack Holden! My throat starts to go dry again. You better not be eyeing up any girls there Jack Holden 'coz I will hear about it! "Martha" kelli shouts. I have to go now Jack. Kelli's taking me shopping...At least me have one thing in common!! Missing you loads... All my love Martha xxxx As I put my letter into my bag my phone started to vibrate. I picked it up and saw there was a message from Jack. Hey Martha. Just a quick message. I heard its Alf's birthday next tuesday...Guess what!? Love Jack...x Trust you to keep me in suspense...Dam you Jack Holden...Dam you! ____ Comments?
Zetti Posted April 4, 2007 Report Posted April 4, 2007 Aww, Jack! This line is the best! "She's pretty." She comments. Pretty? She's dam right gorgeous! "Yeah she is." Trust Jack to say that! More soon xxx
vale4eva Posted April 4, 2007 Report Posted April 4, 2007 Awwww, so cute! Is he gunna fly back for his bday! *hopes* I love this, glad you finally updated! lol More please
baby gurl Posted April 4, 2007 Report Posted April 4, 2007 Lol...Thanks Miss Italian...Yes I did finally update!!! xx
beckyboo Posted April 4, 2007 Report Posted April 4, 2007 Wahey an update Awww I feel so sorry for them both!!!!!!! Update soon missy! Im not even going to guess what because im never right!
Tasha Posted April 4, 2007 Report Posted April 4, 2007 ooo...i remember this fic Why don't you take Lilly to your bedroom?" again with the taking a girl into your bedroom thing i dont think parents allow that in real life, esp at that age Great chapter anywyas More please
baby gurl Posted April 7, 2007 Report Posted April 7, 2007 Heyy guys this fic won't be updated for about 2 weeks because I'm going on holiday.... Next chapter: There's a surprise visiter (its not Jack) before anyone gets their hopes up...
baby gurl Posted April 30, 2007 Report Posted April 30, 2007 I want a update soon xxx Sorry thats not going to happen soon!! I've got exams next week so alot of revison going on...If I can then I will try but its very unlikely! I havn't even been on msn yet! Lol...xxx
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