HeavenForbid Posted March 12, 2007 Report Posted March 12, 2007 This is really good! Jack swearing in the first chapter was very funny! Update Soon!
baby gurl Posted March 12, 2007 Report Posted March 12, 2007 Chapter 3 Martha. This could not be happening. Just when my life seems to be getting better, this has to happen. "No." Was all I could say. "I'm sorry." He appologised. "Its not your fault. Its just...life." I said. "I'm going to miss you." "So am I. Your the best thing in my life." I tried to keep my tears inside but I failed. They all came pouring out. Jack held me in his arms and there I felt so safe. __ We stayed on the beach for another half an hour before Jack had to go. Before going home I had a quick walk to clear my head. As I walked through the door, I saw dad, Kelli and Ellie staring at me. "What?" I asked not in the mood. "Where the hell have you been?" Asked dad angrily. "Out." I told him as I headed towards my bedroom. "Get back here I'm still talking to you." I sighed as I walked back over to him. "Yes?" "Where were you? If you were with that Jack Holden..." He began but I cut him off. "Yes dad I was with Jack. But you won't have to worry any longer. Jack and his family are moving away. To New York." I shouted as I went to my bedroom. ______ Today was the day Jack was moving. "Martha." I heard. I turned around to see an equally upset Jack. "Hey." I said trying to hold my tears in. I couldn't though. They all just pured out. "Its ok." He said. "I'll be 16 in 6 months and then I'll be back." He assured me. "I love you Jack." I said. "I love you too." He whispered as he leant down and gave me a kiss. The kiss lasted for what felt a lifetime. "Jack." We heard Tony say. "We have to go." "Better go." He said. We said our goodbyes until Jack finally went. _____ It had been three days since Jack had gone. I didn't talk to anyone in the house. I would walk past them as if they didn't exsist. "Martha." Kelli shouted. "You have a letter." I ran out of my room as Kelli handed me my letter. It was form Jack. I could tell by the hand writing. It read: Dear Martha, How are you? I know I should have written to you before and belive me I've been trying but I never got a chance. I'm missing you like crazy. I miss you too. The place is alright, smaller than the house in the Bay. Mum's started her job and she's happy. Glad someone is. Our next door neighbours are ok. Normal family, 2 children. One called Max. He's 6 and Lilly; 15. Like us. I think she has a crush on me! Well I can see why...(haha) But Martha I want you to know that your the only one for me. Hopefully you feel the same. Of course I do. I better go, we're going grocery shopping (how fun!) Love you now and forever Jack xxx
Zetti Posted March 12, 2007 Report Posted March 12, 2007 A double post! Not fair! Awesome chapter, Letters make me cry for some weird reason!
baby gurl Posted March 12, 2007 Report Posted March 12, 2007 Lol...I wanted to cry whilst I was writing it xx
vale4eva Posted March 12, 2007 Report Posted March 12, 2007 Is it everyones mission of the day to make me upset! First Amber, then Paris, now you! Grrr to you all! Excellent chapter, very touching. Wonder what will happen next! Update soon
beckyboo Posted March 12, 2007 Report Posted March 12, 2007 :(:( That was soo sad Update soon hun xxxxxxxx
Tasha Posted March 12, 2007 Report Posted March 12, 2007 I want Jack back, i have tears in my eyes. Its too early for tears. Bring back Jacky. And he lied, i hate it that he lied Great chapter More please
HeavenForbid Posted March 17, 2007 Report Posted March 17, 2007 Great Chapter! Why to I great the feeling something will happen between Jack and Lilly? Update Soon!
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