beckyboo Posted March 10, 2007 Report Posted March 10, 2007 "Noooooooo!!" I shouted. AWWWWWWWWW she sounds soo upset Update like now!!
vale4eva Posted March 10, 2007 Report Posted March 10, 2007 Aww that was really sad. Poor JnM. Update soon
Cerise Posted March 10, 2007 Report Posted March 10, 2007 Great Chapter to bad there was no swearing Just a little Tip: "But..." And that's when my life changed upside down. Make sure you re-read what you write, so you can go over mistakes. It should be "But..." And that's when my life turned upside down. it's only a tip to improve your writing Hope I didn't sound to demanding or mean
baby gurl Posted March 10, 2007 Report Posted March 10, 2007 Thanks Kat.. xx Sorry Becky can right now, I'm going out lol...xx
Tasha Posted March 11, 2007 Report Posted March 11, 2007 Awww..poor Martha Kelli is a cow, dont like her More please
caitrules Posted March 11, 2007 Report Posted March 11, 2007 Thats good, I dont want her and Jack to get separated I hate Kelli, and I'll probably hate Ellie to.
gawguss_tiff Posted March 11, 2007 Report Posted March 11, 2007 aww i wish jack didnt have to go.. he better not break her heart lol update ASAP xoxox
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