baby gurl Posted March 7, 2007 Report Posted March 7, 2007 Thanks everyone who commented; Becky, Rachel, Caitrules, Tiff, Tash, Katie343, Paris, Zetti & Kat!! Warning alot of swearing in this chapter... Chapter one. "Whats going on?" 15 year old Jack Holden asked as he walked into his house with his twin siblings; Luc (short for Lucas) and Frankie (short for Francesca.) "Why don't you all come in and sit down?" Suggested his mother Kate holden. "Ok." Replied 10 year old Frankie. "Well the thing is..." Kate began. "You all know that I've been writing that book and well we got a phone call about half an hour ago." "Yeah." Jack said urging his mother to get to the point. "Well the book's being published." "Thats great mum." Jack said. "There's one catch. I've been offered a job as a publisher." "Wow." Luc said. "Yeah that means its more money, and more holidays." Their father Tony told them all. "Its also in New York." Their mother slipped in. All three children stared at their parents and started to laugh. "Your joking right?" Jack asked. "No, mate we're moving to New York." His father told him. "Your mother and I have been talking and we both think its a great oppertunity." Jack laughed sarcasticly. "Oppertunity? For who?" "For all of us. For you, me, your mum and the twins." His dad replied. "Well I hope you have fun because I'm not going." Jack said firmly. "What do you mean your not going?" Asked his mother. "You heard me, mum. I'm not packing my lllife up to go to New York. No way am I leaving my friends, my school or my girl friend." "Yes you are." Tony told him. "No I am f***ing well not." "Do not swear. How many times am I going to tell you?" Tony asked raising his voice. "And how many times would you like me to tell you that I am not packing up my f***ing life and living f***ing New york." He yelled. "Yes you are. Where do you think your going to live?" Tony asked. "I don't care. Any where. But I am not going to f***ing going." He shouted. "Yes you are. You want to know why? 'Coz your 15. Your not 16 yet and by law that means that you can't leave home yet." "I'll be 16 in 6 months. Why don't you move then?" Jack asked. "Because the oppertunity's now. Not tommorrow, or next year. Its now. Now we're leaving in a couple of days so make sure you start packing up." "You don't get it do you? You can all go to f***ing New York and you can have a great f***ing life, but I aint f***ing going!" Jack shouted. "I aint f***ing going." He shouted as he left the house. _____ Please comment. xx
baby gurl Posted March 7, 2007 Report Posted March 7, 2007 Thanks Kat...his swearing made my day too!! Needed some exciting things going on in the Holden house apart from Jack's bod!!!! xx
vale4eva Posted March 7, 2007 Report Posted March 7, 2007 Its funny to think Jacks only 15 at the mo. Great chapter. Naughty boy Jacky, using that kind of language! What a foul mouth he has! Still love him though lol Update soon. Poor Jack and Martha, having to be split up like that.
Tasha Posted March 7, 2007 Report Posted March 7, 2007 Wow, Jacky needs to wash his mouth with some soap, its very dirty. But poor baby though Great chapter though More please
Sarah_Lewis Posted March 8, 2007 Report Posted March 8, 2007 LOL i cant Picture Jack using the F word lol taha but it certainly makes a difference =]] Awesome chapter!! Update soon
-ParaisGal- Posted March 8, 2007 Report Posted March 8, 2007 Jaaack, take Martha with you. That's the simple answer. Make her sixteen, then she can choose! Great going, buut make Jacky put Maccy in his suitcase.
gawguss_tiff Posted March 8, 2007 Report Posted March 8, 2007 that was great WOAH jack has a potty mouth doesnt he? lol poor him its sad coz you know he loses and has to leave hahha lol .. he better not get some other slapper pregnant lol update ASAP xoxox
baby gurl Posted March 10, 2007 Report Posted March 10, 2007 Thanks for the replies guy...To be honest I didn't think this fic would be a good idea!! Lol...BTW, I forgot to say Martha lives with her dad and step mum (her real mum died) ___ Chapter 2 MARTHA "Where are you going?" Kelli asked me. "Out." I replied simply. Kelli was my step mum. She had long blonde curly hair and green eyes. She was 29. Younger than my dad. Much younger. When I was 9 my mum, Ruth died of cancer. Before she died she told my dad to be happy. Meaning get married and get on with life. I never thought that dad would. But I was wrong. Last year dad met Kelli. Thats when my life changed. I now have a completly different dad. And to make things worse I have a step mother and step sister, Ellie. "Where?" She asked making me snap out of my thoughts. "Just out!" I shouted. I sighed. "Any way what do you care? You never did before so don't act like you do now." "Don't speak to me like that." She said raising her voice. "Why not? Your not my mother. Just because you married my dad doesn't mean that your suddenly my mother." I told her. "Now you listen to me, Martha Macklin..." She began before I cut her off. "Its Mackenzie." I told her. When mum and dad got married, mum kept her maiden name. Which when I was born I had. "What ever. I'm married to your dad now so that makes me your mother." "Step mother!" I shouted. "No one can take my mums place especially a slapper like you. Now I'm going out." I said as slammed the door shut. = "Hey." Jack greeted as I walked up to him and gave him a hug. "Hey." I sighed as he gave me a kiss. Jack and I have known each other for 5 years now but we never thought that we'd get together. We got together a year ago and until now its been bliss. I love Jack soo much. "You ok?" He asked. I nodded. "Just Kelli being a b****." I told him. "Anyway whats going on? You sounded like it was urgent on the phone." I added. "Yeah, it is. The thing is, mum got a new job." He told me. "Thats great." I said. "But..." And thats when my life changed updside down. "Noooooooo!!" I shouted. = Comments? xx
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