home and away fanatic2 Posted December 15, 2006 Report Posted December 15, 2006 In line with the new fan fiction rules we would appreciate it if you took 5 minutes to fill out this form. Story Title: Give it a name, any name we can edit it later Type of story: long fic/ short fic/one shot Main Characters: BTTB rating: see official ratings guidance (here) Genre: Does story include spoilers: yes/no Any warnings: Sexual content, violence, language Summary: 5 lines max Thanks, the librarians. This is about Ryan and Ella. I made them the same age, 7. Hip Hip Hooray, Hip Hip Hooray, Hip Hip Hooray. It was Ryan Baker's birthday party. He had gotten lots of birthday presents from family and friends. But all he cared about was Ella. He had a crush on her and she had a crush on him, but never admitted it. Ryan was walking around trying to find Ella. He found her sitting on a chair near the stairs. "Hello Ella, How are you today?" Ryan asked the beautiful girl sitting in front of him. "Very well thank you Ryan, happy birthday by the way" She said quietly "I have something I need to tell you Ella, It is important and you have to know!" Ryan exclaimed. "What would that be Ryan" She wondered "I like you Ella, I like you a lot I know we are young but would you like to be my girlfriend." He blushed "I like you a lot too Ryan, so yes I would like to be your girlfriend."She answered The two kids ran quietly up to Ryan's room so no one will see them going up. Only one person did They talked and then leaned over and kissed each other Just the a man in a balaclava walked in to see the lovers kissing. "You two are going to get hurt."he said Ryan walked up and kicked the guy, but I didn't effect him. The man pushed Ryan awayand grabbed Ella, leaving out the window Ryan was on the floor unconcious and bleeding from his head. Please read and reveiw
aejdude Posted December 15, 2006 Report Posted December 15, 2006 Good start. This is different, it's cute knowing Ella is all grown up now. Wonder whether Ryan will be ok. Update soon.
baby gurl Posted December 15, 2006 Report Posted December 15, 2006 lol....i wonder who this person is! update soon! and aaron if you get this message: UPDATE!!
xGlowingAngelx Posted December 15, 2006 Report Posted December 15, 2006 aww cute. Ryan and Ella. Bless them. I hope he'll be OK though. Look forward to the next part.
home and away fanatic2 Posted December 16, 2006 Report Posted December 16, 2006 "Ryan, Ella, come down now." Tasha yelled No reply "Kids come down at once" Yelled Amanda No reply "V.J, can you go up and get those kids down here I want Ryan to open his gifts"Rachel asked V.J "Kids" Laughed Martha and Jack He went up the stairs and into Ryans room "Aaaaaaaaaargh" V.J screamed when he saw his brother on the floor unconcious. People down stairs heard V.J scream and ran all the way up to see what then screaming was about. They looked at the floor to se Ryan lying there unconcious. "Call the ambulance"Rachel told Tony He ran out just as Ryan stirred. "Ryan honey try to stay still O.K" "Ella"He mumbled Everyone looked up and wondered where she had gone then they saw the window. "No Ella"Screamed Robbie "We will find her honest" Lucas said Soon Ryan was at the hospital and a search team was trying to find Ella Ryan woke up and said "A guy got her, and my head hurts."He started crying "It will be O.K"Rachel siad Then everyone left Ryan to sleep A guy walked in and said "Sweet dreams, my baby, sweet dreams" Who was that.Find out next chapter
aejdude Posted December 19, 2006 Report Posted December 19, 2006 Great chapter. I wonder who it was. I see a few more characters introduced into it.
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