~Natasha~ Posted January 7, 2007 Report Posted January 7, 2007 “I’m never going to get your full attention with him around” You'll never get anyone's full attention with Jacky around Esp not mine Great chapter though More please Everyone ignore me then. I'll just join you all staring at Jack.
Adia Posted January 7, 2007 Report Posted January 7, 2007 Wow I think I just read about five chapters in one go! Awww everything is getting sadder now. That conversation Amie and Abby had where they hugged at the end was just the cuteness. Don't take her away, let her grow up and be a nurse! That made me so teary. Martha's sisters are so funny, please update soon!
mrsbrody Posted January 7, 2007 Report Posted January 7, 2007 That was a really good chapter it was really cute. Of course no one can get anyones full attention while Jack's in the room just ask my mum when he's on the Tv she can't get anything out of me until the ad break. lol Anyways good job
gawguss_tiff Posted January 7, 2007 Report Posted January 7, 2007 excellent update emma i loved it aww jack and martha are just too cute i love them i really hope abby doesnt die i will suck if/when she doesn well your turn now becky *nudges becky* xoxo <3 Tiff
-Laura- Posted January 8, 2007 Report Posted January 8, 2007 Awww Amie is so adorable and so is Abby! And Martha and Jack are too cute! Great writing and save us from sadness for at least a chapter or two won't you please?! lol Update soon!
swfc Posted January 8, 2007 Report Posted January 8, 2007 Page 16: Aw, poor J/M.... Abs is so sweet.... The poor thing blames herself... Lol at the hormones thing. It's so funny the way Martha says it. Lol, Jack's line, “Well at least we’re at the right place,” was classic. Poor Amie. She feels lseft out. Don't blame her at all. Page 17: “Or just maybe it knows im going to be a complete failure as a mother” she cried “No look at what you have done for the girls they love you to bits because your one of the best mums I no” he told her honestly Awww...... Good lines.... “Yano what, do you have any idea how much this hurts” she screamed “No I don’t have children” Dr Smith replied Lol, that line cracked me up. Oh no.... Abby's deteriorating.... I hope she wakes up soon. I hope the news is good for their sakes. Poor Mac and Jack.... BTW, loving the name of Ellis Jack Holden. Very unique. Love the Ric/Amie interaction as well. Nicely done. Page 18: Aww, Amie's so sweet. She'd let a needle prick her just for Abby. So wanted to give her a hug then. Love the Alf and Amie scene. Lol, Jack's watching 'HSM.' So cute... Page 19: Aw, bless Luc.... Volunteering to stay at the hospital so that J/M can spend time together with each other.... I hope they can work through their problems.... I really want them to stay together... I'm glad they worked through their problems... I really hope Abby gets a donor. *fingers crossed* Wonder what Jack's being made to do. Page 21: Lol... Jack doing a nudie run. McGrath's expression: Priceless. Loved that chapter. I'm a bit lost about the whole family introductions with Sian and Laura. Page 22, Chapter 21: Okay, now I get it. They're Martha's sisters... Blonde moment Lol at Sian's memory failure. Loved the sisterly catfight... All the family secrets coming out... And I finally understood about why Natasha was peeved off. Page 23, Chapter 22: Luc and Maddie broke up. So sad.... Luc and Sian? Tasha and Drew? Oh no. None of them are a match. Totally gutted. Loved how Tasha manages to pick up on tiny things to do with Mac. Page 24, Chapter 23: Out of curiosity, just exactly how old is everyone? Like Tasha, Sian and Laura? I'm confused about the age of everyone in this story. I love how Jack understands Martha. Page 24, Chapter 24: I realise something. Both Jack and Martha take turns to break down. It's quite funny and cute in a way. Tasha and Drew... So cute... Can't believe Abby has a year or so left to live. It's just sad. And wrong. Jack's reminiscing was so sad. Nicely done, guys. It's so sad that they've kinda given up hope for a bit. I hope they don't. They need to be strong. The whole night-time scene was so sad... Had tears in my eyes. Page 25, Chapter 25: "Because she is a Holden, and we never stop fighting. Aw, that's so true tho. They're a whole bunch of fighters. In particular Jack. "Well you know, being the incredible guy I am, it just comes naturally" Jack replied. That line cracked me up entirely. Love this chapter. It has some really fun stuff like them jumping on the bed to wake Martha up. Typical of kids. Reminds me of me lol... Martha and Jack have such a strong bond. I agree with what Tasha said about their bond being hard to break because of what they're going through. Very wise words. ------------------------------------------- Okay, I finally caught up! Update soon. Love this fic.... Mainly because Abby and Amie are so adorable. Great writing guys.
~Rosey~ Posted January 8, 2007 Report Posted January 8, 2007 Okie, missed 2 chapters! Sorry! Page 24 - All I have to say is that there beeter be a miracle somewhere! Page 25 - I was laughing through this whole chapter! Tis so cute! Update soon! xx
beckyboo Posted January 13, 2007 Report Posted January 13, 2007 Hello guys, I will try and update before sundee Me and Emma are just having a discussion about what i want to do but she wont let me so i will try and update 2moz xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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