ncarp91 Posted October 31, 2006 Report Posted October 31, 2006 wow i just read this story it is great keep it up xbyebyex
ash_mc Posted October 31, 2006 Report Posted October 31, 2006 Awww, poor Mattie! Jeez! Can you make her suffer anymore? Don't answer that... Update soon x
loobieloo Posted October 31, 2006 Report Posted October 31, 2006 Thanks for the lovely comments everyone I'm writing the next chapter now so it should be up either tonight or tomorrow morning
loobieloo Posted October 31, 2006 Report Posted October 31, 2006 Ok heres the next chapter Chapter 14 Martha’s POV 3 weeks later We sat in silence for a while, neither of us knowing what to say. All I can think of is Paul. How could one person do this to someone else. To an innocent young girl, all she ever wanted was to be like everyone else, for him to not be there. I just wish I could help. She still hasn’t told Beth or anyone else what’s going on, no matter how much I try to persuade her to she wont. She tells me that it is her fault and she is too ashamed to let anyone else know. She is no longer capable of trusting anyone, she wont let anyone in. she just keeps herself to herself and it is all Paul’s fault. He has taken that away from her, he has stolen the laughter from her voice and the smile form her face, the things I fear will not come back. She hardly even leaves the house now and just sits alone in her room for hours, I know she is crying. Every time she emerges to get a glass of water, or something to eat, her eyes are red and her face tear stained. The look on her face isn’t one of self pity though, it is of self hatred and loathing. I don’t see how she could blame herself for all this it isn’t right. I wonder weather to tell anyone else about the baby but I don’t know who to trust. I suppose Jack is the best option but what if he tells Tony or Lucas and Mattie finds out? I can’t let her think that I am betraying her. I can’t not tell anyone though, I am sure they have noticed how different she looks. She wears nothing but baggy t-shirts and pants, to hide her secret, but I have seen the way Lucas looks at her. He knows something is wrong. If only she would open up to people about it all, they would support her in everyway she needs them too, she doesn’t have to do this alone. Looking at her now, she doesn’t look at all well, her hair is limp and her face pale, as she is sitting there I just want to hug her, to re-assure her and to make her see that I’m here for her whenever she needs me. I walk over to her and sit beside her resting my hand on her shoulder gently. “You ok?” I ask concerned “Umm sure, I just feel a bit off, you know?” “Want me to get you a glass of water?” “Yeah please, that would be good.” She sighs slowly after she has spoken and returns her gaze back to the floor. As I walk back to the lounge, I watch her as she looks down at her stomach, the tears mounting in her eyes. “Mattie its ok” I walk over to her giving her a hug. “No Martha, it isn’t, see this?” she pointed down to her stomach. “This will never be ok. As long as this is here nothing will be ok.” The tears begin o slide down her face as she sips the water I brought her. “Have you thought any more about what you want to do?” I ask cautiously, I don’t want to have to make her talk about it all but I know she has to make a decision soon, before it’s out of her hands.
beckyboo Posted October 31, 2006 Report Posted October 31, 2006 Very good Laura as always!!! Poor Mattie I hope she ends up coming out of this a stronger person!!!! Excellent update Post more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
matty and luke forever Posted November 1, 2006 Report Posted November 1, 2006 Excellent! Porr Mattie! Can't wait for more
tasha7905 Posted November 1, 2006 Report Posted November 1, 2006 Poor Matilda, she needs to tell someone. Lucas would understand. I hope Mac makes her realise she needs help from the others. Cant wait for more its a great fic.
Inactive User Posted November 2, 2006 Report Posted November 2, 2006 Poor Mattie! She doesn't deserve it, poor thing! Hope she makes a decision about her unborn baby. Paul is a dirty creep He should be punished for what she did to Mattie. Hope Mattie tells someone soon. I am liking Martha and Mattie's friendship.
gawguss_tiff Posted February 5, 2007 Report Posted February 5, 2007 I just read the whole thing that was amazing huni!!!! you wrote it sooo well!!! i love that Martha is soo supportive .... and i have mass amounts of hate for this paul like seriously im going to start an i hate paul club and we will all try to stab him!!!!! he is discuating telling her its her fault when there is nothing she couldve done!!!!! nothing at all... and shes pregant OMG thats horrible... Mattie needs to tell her family so that he stops living with them!!! and i dont think she should have the baby no one who has been raped should have to live with a constant reminder!! well excellent fic huni i absoulutly love it UPDATE ASAP xoxxox
Zetti Posted February 5, 2007 Report Posted February 5, 2007 cnt be bovard reading it all summarise someone!
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