luckyrabbit Posted September 26, 2006 Report Posted September 26, 2006 Just a tiny one because I don't want to give anything away. This one's going to have plenty of twists and turns. Peter Baker had never been more relieved in his life than he had been when he received the phone call from his college -and friend and hopefully soon to be something more- Tracey Thompson, informing him that the prisoner transfer had gone off without a hitch. Zoe McCallister was safely behind bars and there was no way she was ever going to get out, not in his lifetime at least. It was over. At least that's what he had thought at the time; if he looked back he could see that that was his first mistake. That's the opening paragraph, what do you think?
Oxidizer Posted September 26, 2006 Report Posted September 26, 2006 Damn, I love it! It's so intriguing and ominous, I can't wait for this one!
swfc Posted September 26, 2006 Report Posted September 26, 2006 I love the last sentence. I agree with Andy. It's very intriguing. And the fact that that's the first paragraph kind of gives it some attention.
Oxidizer Posted September 26, 2006 Report Posted September 26, 2006 Totally. Another fic to get hyped about. Disharmony's almost done, should be posted within the next hour.
swfc Posted September 26, 2006 Report Posted September 26, 2006 Dang! Just when I was going to head off to the land of nods and think about you-know-who's storyline. Have a good night you guys!
Oxidizer Posted September 26, 2006 Report Posted September 26, 2006 Goodnight Chris! Sweet dreams abut Zoe/Eve and Tracey! ETA: Disharmony's up now.
luckyrabbit Posted September 26, 2006 Report Posted September 26, 2006 I just read it Andy, it was awesome. Since you all liked the first teaser so much here's a tiny bit more. It was only a week later that it all started. At first it was just the notes; they were easy enough to rationalize away. Someone obviously wanted to cause some trouble, stir things up. The details of the notes had been printed in the Coastal News, anybody could be behind them. What happened next was not so easy to explain away.
Oxidizer Posted September 26, 2006 Report Posted September 26, 2006 ZOMG! I'm so damn excited. I can't wait 'til this one's finished and posted! Is it going to be a oneshot or trilogy etc?
luckyrabbit Posted September 26, 2006 Report Posted September 26, 2006 It's going to be a one-shot that's spilt into two parts and it's going to be called Control.
Oxidizer Posted September 26, 2006 Report Posted September 26, 2006 Zoeeeeeeee! I'm so excited it's not even funny!
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