Emily Perry

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It totally does. They showed put up a copy of the original script so we can seen how it would've panned out differently.

Here's a teaser from the next part of JD I've just written, my writing style is getting pretty crappy [sigh] ah well. Anyway, here it is...

Diane Lore and Susanna Harris frantically try to explain themselves to Danielle Toreno – the owner of the institute for troubled youngsters. “I can’t imagine how she could’ve escaped, ma’am.” Lore tried desperately to explain.

“She’s right, ma’am, the door was locked, she must’ve got out through the windows.” Harris stepped in, trying to think of something that wouldn’t get them both fired.

“Through barred windows? Are you stupid?” Toreno hissed, as she stood up, walking away from the desk and circling her employees as they look at each other sheepishly. “Do you know what that girl is in for? She’s a danger to society!” Toreno yelled furiously.

“We know, we’ll catch her-“ Lore was cut of. “No, you won’t! I think you’ve done enough already, don’t you?” Toreno spat sarcastically. “No. I’ll alert the media, she couldn’t have got far. Besides, I’m sure she’ll turn up soon. I mean, how can a girl with her track record stay in hiding for long?” Toreno further hissed.

“With all due respect Ms. Toreno, I don’t think she’s very dangerous.” Harris piped in. A look of outrage and sarcasm was evident on Danielle’s face. “Not dangerous? She castrated her own father when she was eleven-years-old, for f*ck’s sake!” Toreno screamed furiously, showing she’s obviously not fit to be working with troubled teens.

Awesome teaser! Thanks! Woah, Tracey a danger to society? That is freaky. She's all so innocent and all. Can't imagine her being that evil! But, seeing as that she killed that dude so I am so not surprised that she castrated her father. Ooooo, did it have to do with that song?!?!?

Tracey, I love it when you are so evil!!!!

P/S: I just updated T/Z/R! Enjoy!

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Yeah, it's based a lot on the song, she'll open up to a psychologist in the next part, and her rivalry with another girl at the police station begins (it turns out to be Claire Brody).

ETA: A T/Z/R update? YAY!! Checking it out right now...!

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CAT FIGHT!!!!!!! Bring it on!!! My gawd! It's going to be so HOT!!!! Tracey vs Clare.... Woooohooooo!!!!

I know who's going to come up on top. I wonder what Tracey will do against Clare?!?!?

*cheers on Tracey*

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Four words: It's. Gonna. Be. Brutal.

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Does it involve pulling hairs?!?!? Just kidding! I can't wait for your update!!!

I think I love sweet, innocent Tracey. There's something about her when she's all innocent. But, man, when she gets all worked up=

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The fight don't happen until a few more parts yet though, but Tracey's jealousy and hate towards Claire builds up a lot. The fight will happen in the street It was inspired by the way Tracey spoke about Claire in 4192, she seemed very bitchy, it was great.

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Catfight in the streets?!?!? Now you got me all excited!!!

Oh yeah! True! Now that you mention it. What happened that made her say that? I can't remember. I think it was something about that he was greatful to Clare for helping him the last time. Stupid Peter. You should've just stuck with Clare.

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Totally And yeah, I think that's how it started.

And, oh no! The guy-crush symptoms have returned again, I think Aaron Stanford has a nice mouth.

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Lol!!!!

Anyway, I'm off now. Might be back later! I'm glad you liked my fic!!!!

Who's Aaron Stanford? I'm a bit thick!

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Awww! Okay, I'll see you later. Come back soon!

P/S: Aaron Stanford plays Pyro in the X-Men movies.