beckyboo Posted August 17, 2006 Report Posted August 17, 2006 Chapter 13 Katie looked at the date on her calendar her period was three days late and she thought she knew why! After school she went to the local chemist and she knew she couldt just walk in and buy a pregnancy test as the owner new Martha and Jack she new what she was about to do was wrong but she had no choice she slipped the test in her bag when the security guard had seen her he called the police. “Detective Holden are you” the radio spoke “im buy the local chemist what’s up” he replied” young girl been shoplifting they want you go down there as they no you and you no the girl apparently” replied the radio “on way” replied Jack and made his towards the chemist. Jack entered the chemist and seen the old lady and asked “what’s the problem Mrs McIntyre you daughter Jack was caught stealing a pregnancy test she’s in the back now Jack had a look of disappointment in his eyes but also a angry look on his face when Katie seen this she new she had to put on a good act! “You home now” Jack told his daughter. Jack was giving her a lecture when walking up the drive and into the house! “What’s going on, why you shouting at her and whys she crying?” Martha asked “shouting your lucky that’s all she getting, you go to your room now and stay there and I will fill your mother in” Katie went upstairs and locked herself in the bathroom and pulled the test out of her bag which she had managed to still steal! She waited to minutes and there it was a little blue line that was about to change her entire life. Back downstairs Martha couldt believe what Jack was saying so she decided to go and talk to Katie and find out what the real truth was. “Katie can I come in pleas sweetie I think we need to talk” Martha said softly as she knocked on her daughters bedroom door. “Im really disappointed in you” Martha broke the silence “I no mum and im so sorry” finally after what seemed like a lifetime Martha spoke “Kate who was the test for? Was it for you?” “No of course not it’s for a friend” was all Katie could reply and Martha had to take her word for it “well in that case you’re not allowed out for a month” and with that Martha walked downstairs. Two days later Martha headed upstairs with some washing for the twins and Katie after she had done that her and jack were going to spend the day together Martha entered the twins room and started to put there clothes away and then made her way into Katie room she was shocked at the state of the room and started to clean up she then opened Katie’s sock drawer and started to put her socks away when noticed a white stick when she picked it up she saw it had a blue line she shouted Jack and he raced straight upstairs to see Martha collapsed on the floor crying he saw what she was holding and assumed Martha was pregnant again!! Jack just gave her a hug and told her that she was a great mum even at 35 Martha looked at Jack and said “im not pregnant, but I think Katie is” Preview???? Will Jack and Martha believe Katie’s lies???
xsianx Posted August 17, 2006 Report Posted August 17, 2006 Naughty Katie!!!! stealing and pregnant! More soon Becky. I replied before laura
Jack and Martha 4eva Posted August 17, 2006 Report Posted August 17, 2006 This is really good. It would be funny if Martha and Kate were pregnant at the same time. LOL Please update soon. It's really good hun XX
loobieloo Posted August 17, 2006 Report Posted August 17, 2006 I replied before laura AAAAAHHHHH NOOOOOO! And its Bob to you!!! Great chapter Becky but you really should have credited me for the fab ideas I gave you before on msn Update again now pleeease x
beckyboo Posted August 17, 2006 Report Posted August 17, 2006 This is for BOB (Laura) for the great ideas lol!! Chapter 14 ( ano this fic goes through time fast lol) Katie walked in from school and Jack and Martha were sitting on the sofa Katie went to walk upstairs when Jack said to her “you sit me and your mother want to talk to you” Katie asked casually “about what dad” replied Katie Martha stood up and walked towards her daughter and showed her the test Katie was in total shock and new she had to get out of it somehow!! “I can explain it’s not mine it’s a mates and she could have it at her house in case her mum found it and freaked out I swear its not mine” Martha and Jack chose to give there daughter the benefit of the doubt this time. 8 weeks later Martha had been so stressed lately about everything that was happening that she didt even notice that she was 4 weeks late she only realised this yesterday so she went to the doctor and he revealed that she was in fact 4 months pregnant. Martha was so shocked she didt no what to do she told Jack and he was so happy that she could confide in him about how she really felt. 3 months later Martha had suffered a miscarriage at five and half months she had been heartbroken but she had to move on for her sake and her children. Katie had woken up that morning feeling like she did every morning but managed to not be sick until she reached school she was now 6 and half months pregnant and it was beyond her how she was managing to keep it a secret from her family. She hardly ever ate and always wore baggie clothes to and out school all Martha and Jack could make out was that their daughter was a teenager. 2 and half months later Katie went for a walk in the bush as this morning her waters had broken and she knew what she needed to do. At 2pm on Saturday 22nd October a little boy was brought in to the world to a 15 year old girl who was so scared that after she had given birth she gave him a bottle of milk and wrapped him up nice and warm and placed him in a car chair and had left him in the middle of the bush and retuned home to her parents who were already out. Martha and Jack had decided to go for a walk along the beach and through the bush as the had not spend much time together after the miscarriage they were stopped dead in there tracks when they seen this car seat and a small baby boy crying for his mummy. Martha and Jack took him straight to the hospital and Jack informed everyone at the police station to go and see of there was any signs of the child’s mother. It had been two days since Martha and Jack had found the small baby boy and there was still no sign of the baby’s mother Martha and Jack had gone to the hospital to see if the baby was okay. Back home Katie had just got out of the shower and put her PJs back on when she fell to the ground and blacked out all she could her was her baby crying for her!!! Preview What’s up with Katie?? Will Martha and Jack find out their grandparents??
xsianx Posted August 17, 2006 Report Posted August 17, 2006 Poor Katie and Martha I feel sick so can you right the next chapter please x I posted before Laura!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! aha
loobieloo Posted August 17, 2006 Report Posted August 17, 2006 Ok another song to go with a fic: this is for Katie seein as she has just collapsed ther gonna guess the baby is hers: Uh-oh she's in trouble, someones come along and burst her bubble!! Great chapter Backy(haha Sian) Update soon x And alllllll the ideas I gave you have worked well I bet Sian ansered before me too Edit: Sian you keep callin me Laura Ive told you its Bob!
Jack and Martha 4eva Posted August 17, 2006 Report Posted August 17, 2006 It's really good. I wonder what's the matter with Katie. Please update again soon Em XX
loobieloo Posted August 17, 2006 Report Posted August 17, 2006 Ok seeing as I am now the new co-writer of this fic here the next chapter! And Sian you cant reply before me now! mwahahahahaha! Its only short but oh well “Were home hunnie”, Martha shouted to Katie as her and Jack walked through the front door.” Katie…”. She didn’t reply. “She had best not have gone out without telling us”, Jack said angrily knowing what his daughter was like. They both started to unpack the groceries when they heard a loud thump coming from upstairs. “What the….” Jack started but was cut off by Martha who was running up the stairs shouting for Katie. The noise took them to the bathroom where the door was locked. “Katie babe, are you in there?” Martha was getting more worried about her daughter. “What do we do?” she asked Jack who was already trying to bang the door down. When the door finally gave in and fell off its hinges, they saw Katie slumped over in a heap on the floor. She was unconscious and hardly breathing. “Oh my god…. Jack call an ambulance….NOW”. “I can’t leave her you go and phone and I’ll stay with her”. Martha raced off to the phone and as she dialled 000 her hands were shaking with fear for her daughter. When Katie was lifted into the ambulance, Martha and Jack were informed that only one of them would be able to travel with them and so the other would have to make their own way to the hospital. Martha jumped into the ambulance with her daughter, before Jack even had time to argue the doors had been shut and the ambulance drove off, leaving him there heart broken. As soon as they arrived at the hospital, Katie was taken away from Martha whose pleas to the doctors to let her go with them were ignored. R&R please x x
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