katie343 Posted August 14, 2006 Report Posted August 14, 2006 Ohhh a suprise Can't wait to see what it is!
beckyboo Posted August 14, 2006 Report Posted August 14, 2006 Chapter 11 This is for Sian to get the Jackness back in her and for Laura who sent me a very important eppy!!!! It was the day of the wedding vows renewal and everyone was o excited only the guests and Martha knew where they were going the plan was she was going to blindfold Jack to get him there. Martha had just nipped out with the twins to drop them off at Tony and Beth’s Tasha noticed this and was heading off in the direction of Martha and Jacks house. Jack heard a knock on the door and shouted “What have you forgot now?” he opened the door to see Tasha standing there he took one look at here and said “what do you want” Tasha replied “you need to know how I feel before you marry Martha and make the biggest mistake of your live” Jack looked up at her as she was saying how much she loved him and she wouldt live without him even though nothing had happened she still felt a bond with him Jack took one look at her and simply said “ I LOVE MARTHA” screaming at her now so just go he replied. Martha now had Jack blindfolded and in the car and on there way. She lead him up to the top of the cliff and took the blindfold off him and he saw all his family and friends at the top of their place and joked “is this really appropriate I mean right here on that part where Lucus is sitting is where are sons were conceived” he laughed Lucus jumped shouting EWWWWWW!!! Anyway the vicar said shall we continue with the service this is what Jack said to Martha: "Martha, from the moment we first met, I couldn't get you out of my mind - mostly because you drove me crazy. But once we got through the drinking competitions, the nudie runs the fake spider in the bed incident… Once we got through all that, I realised you weren't only a babe on the outside, but you were also an incredibly beautiful woman on the inside. The kind of woman who stands up for what she believes in, who stands by her friends when they need her the most. The kind of woman I could love always. You're the best thing that has ever happened to me, Martha. And I can't imagine my life without you and our beautiful sons” Martha said to Jack: "It's true - we didn't have the smoothest of beginnings. And I'd just like to say for the record, if I'd known what a wimp you are around spiders, I would never have gone there! But call it destiny...or luck... we did end up in each other's arms. And for that, I am truly grateful. I have no idea what tomorrow will bring, or what the journey ahead will be for us. But there is one thing I am certain of: You are the love of my life - and we are meant to be together. Now and forever. We were also lucky to be blessed with two beautiful sons and I can’t imagine life without you, Charlie and Tom in my life” Everyone starts to head towards the surf club everyone that is except for Tasha she’s standing on the edge of the cliff and is going over the conversation she had with Jack earlier that day abut not loving her but loving Martha it broke her heart and this was it she was going to let them live happily ever after at home she had left letters for Robbie and Martha explaining her decision to end her life and with that before anyone had noticed Tasha wasn’t at the reception she jumped into the water and was never seen again. When Robbie got home and found the letters she alerted the police and Martha ASAP as there was letter to Martha. Martha rushed over to Robbie with jack at her side Robbie gave her the letter and looked at jack! Martha went to sit on the couch and read why he best friend ended her life at just 18 years old. “Jack I no what you did” Robbie said looking at jack! Jack looked at him and said what’s that then “well” Robbie began I know how much Tasha fell in love with you and how you ignored it for me and Martha and I just wanted to thank you for it” Dear Martha, God how do I explain to my best friend why I chose to end my life well here goes anyway: When you kidnapped and then charged with the murder of that John person I started to have feeling towards jack but he said from day one that he loved you and nothing was ever going to happen between us this broke my heart in to a million little pieces. When you were not guilty and was then rushed to hospital 2 months later all I wanted to do was be the one in the bed where you were laying just to have jack hold my hand but I knew this was never going to happen as he loved you too much then the twins came along and made it all complicated. Lastly I went round to your house this morning and told Jack how I really felt and told him he could call the wedding off he laughed in my face and screamed that he loved you and always will this broke what was left of my heart so I watched him marry and then I decided to jump so you got what you wanted your happily ever after life enjoy it Martha cause youll be mad to give Jack up. All My Love Tasha xxxxxxxx Preview Will they live happily ever after?
xsianx Posted August 14, 2006 Report Posted August 14, 2006 Aww that was cute how you used the vows they had on the show and I got my Jackness back when he yelled that he loved Martha. I think it was quite selfish that she wrote martha a letter telling her she loved her husband even if she said he didnt feel the same, ahh well. “is this really appropriate I mean right here on that part where Lucus is sitting is where are sons were conceived” he laughed Lucus jumped shouting EWWWWWW!!! ^^That line made me laugh out loud. lol Anyhow I feel like a queen you dedicated your chapter to me:D and I now declare I have most of my Jackness back. Forgot to say update soon xx great chapter as usual
loobieloo Posted August 14, 2006 Report Posted August 14, 2006 Ok people this may sound really mean but I have the urge to sing this: Hey ho the witch is dead, which old witch? The wicked witch! Hey ho the wicked witch is deeead!!!!! Awww ok I sound really mean now , I would have liked Trasha if she hadnt gone after Jack...... But she did so I do really have the right to be mad! Anyways Becky, great chapter, better than ever. I feel soooo super priveleged, I got it dedicated to meee!!! *sticks tung out at everyone else* na-na-na-na-na ... and all of you didn't! (Well except Sian who I don't know but im sure she is fab like me) Ok am gonna go now, this is nearly as long as your chapter x Edit: Ok Sian is officially better than me.... she remembered to put update soon on it!
ash_mc Posted August 14, 2006 Report Posted August 14, 2006 Yayyy! tRashas dead!!! omg! that sounds really bad! lol! Update soon gurlie!
xsianx Posted August 14, 2006 Report Posted August 14, 2006 Edit: Ok Sian is officially better than me.... she remembered to put update soon on it! lol I only just remebered it but I'm sure you were thinking about it, just didnt type it so it still counts And yes we are Fab! Becky knows that:D
loobieloo Posted August 14, 2006 Report Posted August 14, 2006 Edit: Ok Sian is officially better than me.... she remembered to put update soon on it! lol I only just remebered it but I'm sure you were thinking about it, just didnt type it so it still counts And yes we are Fab! Becky knows that:D Haha yup I was thinking it.... really Were fabber than fab........ ok my heads gettin too big now, someone stop me
xsianx Posted August 14, 2006 Report Posted August 14, 2006 Edit: Ok Sian is officially better than me.... she remembered to put update soon on it! lol I only just remebered it but I'm sure you were thinking about it, just didnt type it so it still counts And yes we are Fab! Becky knows that:D Haha yup I was thinking it.... really Were fabber than fab........ ok my heads gettin too big now, someone stop me Lol We're Fabalicious and Becky knows this thats why she dedicated that chapter to us :] Thank you becky!!
Tasha Posted August 15, 2006 Report Posted August 15, 2006 Yay, Tasha is dead Poor Martha. I hope she forgives Jack like Robbie did. And that Lucas part sitting on the place where Jack and Martha conceived was hilarious Great chapter Please update soon
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