Bobt65 Posted August 15, 2006 Report Posted August 15, 2006 That was fantastic. I can't wait for your next update, I hope it will be soon as I'm dying to know what happens next. Good Job.
Jackieleanne Posted August 30, 2006 Report Posted August 30, 2006 This is really good I can't wait to see what happens.
bizkit01 Posted May 23, 2007 Report Posted May 23, 2007 Dear Readers [and Librarians], I am truly sorry that I have "abandoned" (not been able to update) this fic. I haven't stopped writing it's just with GCSEs and life I guess I no longer had the time to finish up the fic. After 16th June, I'll be free of GCSEs, school work, everything. I promise by that time (2 weeks) I will devote my time to posting the rest of the fic up. Cheers xx
bizkit01 Posted June 4, 2007 Report Posted June 4, 2007 Chapter 10 [Chaos] [Outside the Surf Club] "C'mon let's go inside" Jack pleaded "No Jack, I don't want to face them, I just want to go home" replied Martha. "OK, Fine I'll see you later" muttered Jack "Alright" Martha responded [surf Club] Entering the Surf Club, Jack was determined not to let anyone put him down. He entered the Surf Club and was met by the shocked faces of his family. "Jack where're you been, we've been looking for you" said Robbie "We?" Jack replied "That's interesting, bet you were looking for Martha too right?" Jack continued "I can explain" Beth answered "Oh can you?" Jack snapped "Look it was my idea to keep you and Martha apart ok and I know you may think that it was selfish but... we didn't want to see you get hurt" "Get hurt" Jack retorted "Well you've done a great job of that so far." "Jack" Beth continued “You know what” Jack cut in “From now on stay out of my life” "JACK! I can take a lot from you, BUT I CAN"T TAKE YOU TALKING TO BETH THAT WAY !!" "Fine! Whatever I'm out of here" Jack uttered Jack walked out the Surf Club to the amazement of everyone [Hunter/Holden House] "What happened Luc ? I mean I knew you two were having problems but breaking-up that’s a bit extreme" Madeline asked "Look, I wasn’t the one who broke it off" Lucas retorted "It didn’t ask who I asked why" Madeline responded camly "Because of your stupid idea that’s why. Maybe if you would have listened to me in the first place, this wouldn’t have happened" Lucas barked "My fault" Madeline qustioned him "I told you that it was too risky, that Mattie might discover those letters but no you didn’t listen to me" Lucas yelled "Look it’s not my fault your girlfriend has trust issues" Madeline retorts At that moment Matilda walks in Lucas and Madeline stand up "You’re unbelievable you know that" Matilda said forlornly 'Calm…….. Madeline said "Be quiet!" Matilda spat cutting her off [Madeline’s P.O.V] After that (Matilda harsh words) I sit down and wait for them to either finish having their argument or for Luc to handle the situation that is if he can handle the situation. "Mattie it’s not what you think just……" Lucas started "I was stupid to think that we could work things out. I thought you were different and I was wrong" Matilda said unbearably Runs out in tears Mattie wait …… Lucas starts to run after her but stops turns around and sits down and puts his hands in his head "What are you doing go after her" Madeline protested "Why so we can have another fight" Lucas asked "If you love her fight for her, go after her" "Explain to her what really happened" Madeline stated simply Lucas dashes out after her, getting to the road just in time to see her nearly hit by a car and lunges in to save her then .......... BLACKOUT [Rob/Tasha’s Place] "Hello I’m home" Robbie exclaims "Tash, Martha ….. anyone" he calls out "hmmm empty house" As Robbie heads to the fridge for a drink he sees a note with his name on it, a bit smudged from what appear to be tear marks worried he opens it……... Robbie I can’t do this anymore, I can’t keep living like this Let’s face it our marriage is on the rocks and has been for a while. I need my own space to think and clear my head. Please try understand I love you Tasha xoxo Robbie rests his back against the fridge door and wonders what to do. In fact he stays there all night in case Tasha comes home and ponders on how to fix his relationship. _____________________________________________________________________________ What happened to Lucas ? Will Matilda be alright ? Will Tasha and Robbie work things out ? _____________________________________________________________________________ FIND OUT IN Chapter 11 [bitter Conflict]
Nicom Posted June 4, 2007 Report Posted June 4, 2007 So... I'm guessing you want it moving back into the main forum?
bizkit01 Posted June 4, 2007 Report Posted June 4, 2007 do you even need to ask ? you bet!! Update will be up on Wedensday
Bobt65 Posted June 4, 2007 Report Posted June 4, 2007 Well here's a surprise bizkit01 comes in from the rebound been long enough girl this is stuff right here your back in full force the chapter was fantastic, looking forward to wednesday. p.s good luck in you IGCSEs hope you did great.
*caitie* Posted January 7, 2008 Report Posted January 7, 2008 Is this fic finished??Cause I just read it all and it's really good!!!!
Nourtz Posted May 17, 2008 Report Posted May 17, 2008 are you going to up-date???? because i really think you should its really good!! i hope Martha and jack get back together!!
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