jack4martha_forever Posted July 27, 2006 Report Posted July 27, 2006 OMG dont keep me in suspense. I need to know. God this fic has kept me sitting on the edge of my seat. Its soo good. I just wish they can hurry up and meet. I love this fic Please update soon
x_chelsea_x Posted July 27, 2006 Report Posted July 27, 2006 OMG you have to post we need to know this is fabby.
shawtyy Posted July 27, 2006 Report Posted July 27, 2006 You have to update soon. I can't stay in suspense for long! This fic is addictive!
Nicom Posted July 27, 2006 Report Posted July 27, 2006 ! PLEASE can you update soon!? Preferably before Sunday. I can't go on holiday and not read about them meeting! Lol. It's just.. wrong. And I won't be a happy bunny. Lol. Please!? *cheesey grin* I was holding my damn breath!
bizkit01 Posted July 27, 2006 Report Posted July 27, 2006 Don't worry, more will be up tonight or tomorrow hopefully if I can get internet access. Because in this place in Kensigton, internet access requires network key password. But I'll try my best. Hope you enjoy your holiday xxNicolexx Thanks to you all glad your all liking it.
loobieloo Posted July 27, 2006 Report Posted July 27, 2006 This stpry is well good! I am reaaly loveing readin it! Keep up the good work bizkit01!
bizkit01 Posted July 29, 2006 Report Posted July 29, 2006 Here's the next chapter hope you like it! Chapter 9 [The Meeting] - Pt 3 [The Cliff] [Martha's P.O.V] Why do I keep thinking of Jack let alone imagine him? That guy at the diner, looked just like Jack, and like the guy at the airport. Am I going crazy?? Why is it everywhere I turn its Jack I see ? Maybe he really is here, I mean it's more than a coincidence. But Rob and Tash would have told me.......... wouldn't they??? All of a sudden she hears footsteps who could it be, no - else knows this spot except one person....... she turns around and is shocked at what she sees............. [Jack's P.O.V] Ahhh..... this is just the place I need to relax and take my mind of M.......... "What the hell?????" "Martha...." "Jack..... erm you look great..... sorry if I freaked you out before" Martha said "Oh, no it just I was surprised to see someone else here that's all" Jack uttered "You look gorgeous as ever" "Still a Jackass, I see" "Still a man-hater" "You, haven't chaged one bit" she said "Neither have you" Jack replied giving her a kiss on the cheek and pulling her into a hug. "So, have you been" Jacks asks "Fine, so, so" "You?" "The same" Can I...... Martha and Jack both ask "No, you go first" Jack tells her "You were at the airport, right" "Yeah... and I now know for a fact that you were there too" "You were also at the diner earlier today, right??" She asked curiously "Well kind of, Luc forgot his wallet on the beach and we had to go get it." he replied her "Why?" Now wondering why Martha was bombarding him with questions. "It's just when I asked Rob who he was talking to, he covered saying you were some guy looking for directions. Why he'd lie to me?" Now furious Jack got up, "I knew something was wrong, after Robbie left the night I arrived. All of a sudden Beth wants to know everywhere I'm going and starts acting all werid around me. Wasn't her everyone around except for Maddie and Luc. Now I can see why, they thought maybe I wasn't man enogh to handle you being here, that's why he lied to you to us. Just because I told my dad a few months that I had been having therapy because of you, they maybe......." "You had therapy........ because of me??" Martha whispered "Look, It's wasn't casue of you, well part was, besides that I just had other issues" he replied calmly this time "I didn't know I caused you that much pain" she mumbled "Just forget alright, I came here to have fun" he told her "Hmmm.... I bet you there proberly looking for us right now and I have a good idea of staying her and making them suffer. he continued "If, I knew it would make this angry, I wouldn't have told you" Martha answered "I'm not angry.... I'm just upset that's all, I mean......." Jack stopped and you looked down "You mean what....... Jack? What's wrong, talk to m please" Martha begged "My dad and Betha re getting married in two weeks and my dad, he'ss wanted this for so long, I just can't help wondering whether he'd really sacrifce my happiness for his or the other way around?" "Jack, I sure that you dad love you loads and you and Luc mean the world to him and I don't think that he'd do anything intentionally to hurt you, alright?" "Fine" he grumbles "C'mon, let's go home Jack Holden, your such a girl" Martha says with a laugh "Oh, yeah and your such a boy" he replies her "Shut Up" she says and hits him playfully on the arm Together they walk home..... his arm on her shoulder and her arm on his shoulder. Can this happiness last? Unfortunately........ NO Jack takes Martha's support the wrong way........ It doesn't take long before they are at eachother's throats............... ALL HELL BREAKS LOSE!! Matilda and Lucas's separation turns nasty. Tasha tells Robbie that she wants a separation...... is this the end for the couple??? All will be revealed in Chapter 10 [Chaos]
Nicom Posted July 29, 2006 Report Posted July 29, 2006 Chaos.. ahh! My second favourite "C" word. (Obviously, Chocolate being the first. ) Great! Looking forward to it!
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