bell Posted June 16, 2006 Report Posted June 16, 2006 thanks jackieleanne cant update now as a wee drunk and dont know where i saved it but will tomorrow
Jackieleanne Posted June 16, 2006 Report Posted June 16, 2006 Cool can't wait hope you have had a good night.
bell Posted June 17, 2006 Report Posted June 17, 2006 right yay you like it you make me happy; heres the next chapter Chapter 4 (lucus’ point of view) The next day Maddie was discharged from hospital, Beth had told the university she wouldn’t be back for a week or two and then gone to pick her up from the hospital. It was weird having Matilda arrive home, I don’t think that she’d been back since that night. Before lunch I decided to meet Jack and we’d go surfing. When I was at the top of the cliff I saw a familiar figure sitting huddled not far out staring out to sea. All of a sudden I was having a flashback to over 5 months ago when she and I had broken up. I loved her but couldn’t say so out loud. I was scared that if I loved her to much I would lose her, just like what happened with my mum and my niece. Jack and Martha’s had a baby two years ago but it died when it was 4 months old. The said it was a ‘cot-death’ but what does that really mean? All I know is that when she died a part of me went with her, and it wasn’t even like she was my baby, I cant imagine how Jack and Martha felt. But they got through it, dad was amazing, as was everyone. And now Martha’s pregnant again, this time I hope, pray, that nothing will happen. So maybe you understand why I was so afraid of losing her. She said you can’t have a one sided relationship and as I was giving nothing there was no point in it. I tried to explain but understandably she wasn’t listening. She moved away because she said she couldn’t face the pain of seeing me everyday. She now lives in a flat down the road, opposite the forest, and I see her often, well its hard not to when we live somewhere as small as Summer Bay, go to the same university and have family that lives together. You know I gave her a ring? I didn’t want to get engaged yet, it was more of a promise ring but when she left she gave it back to me. It’s ironic, I didn’t say I love you because I was afraid of losing her, but because I didn’t say it, I lost her. hope you like it please comment ill try and put the next one up later but i dog-sitting and my laptops broken
Jackieleanne Posted June 17, 2006 Report Posted June 17, 2006 Awww that was beautiful, I loved it can't wait to see what happens.
bell Posted June 17, 2006 Report Posted June 17, 2006 aww thank you i was a bit unsure when i wrote it (especially about j and m's baby but i did. ill try and post more soon but as i said im 'dog sitting' for 5 hrs tonight funfunfun
Jackieleanne Posted June 17, 2006 Report Posted June 17, 2006 Cool I can't wait to read more, and yes it was really beautiful especially with it coming from Lucas P.O.V I can't wait to see what happens.
Jacksthehottest Posted June 17, 2006 Report Posted June 17, 2006 wow i just read the whole thing and its reall really good, hope mattie and lucas get bak together again, and adam is really sweet plz update soon
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